Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答抓住了“母亲和老师教我礼貌”这一核心，但存在明显的词汇和语法错误：应使用“taught me to be polite”，而不是“touched me to be pilot”；“teacher”后面的动词要用过去式“taught”；“polite”是形容词，不能直接说“learned polite”，应说“learned to be polite”。建议先直接回答，再补充母亲和老师如何教你，例如要求你说“please”和“thank you”。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother and my teachers. They taught me to say “please,” “thank you,” and “sorry” when I was young. They also explained that polite people are more respected and easier to get along with.

提案: 观点明确，但重复较多，且“pilot/plight”应为“polite”，“people doesn't polite”应改为“people aren’t polite”，“many people will take away”表达不清。建议使用清晰的因果结构：礼貌很重要，因为它能帮助人们建立良好关系；如果一个人不礼貌，别人可能会避开他。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important. It helps people communicate comfortably and build good relationships. If someone is rude, others may avoid talking to them or working with them.

提案: 回答的主要观点是“任何场合都应该礼貌”，但句子结构错误且没有提供具体场景。“all the occasions should we be polite”应改为“We should be polite on all occasions”。建议补充至少两个具体例子，如在工作场所、学校、公共场所，或与陌生人和长辈交流时。

例: I think we should be polite on almost all occasions, especially when we are speaking to teachers, colleagues, or older people. We should also be polite in public places because our behavior can affect those around us. Simple words like “please” and “thank you” are usually enough.

提案: 回答提到了说“excuse me”“sorry”和“thanks”，内容相关，但时态和搭配需要改进。因为问题问的是过去，应使用“When I talked”和“I would say”；“speak thanks”应改为“say thank you”。建议按照不同对象或情境组织答案，并加入一个具体例子，使回答更自然。

例: As a child, I showed politeness by saying “excuse me” when I wanted to interrupt someone and “sorry” when I made a mistake. I also said “thank you” to my parents and teachers when they helped me. For example, I always thanked my teacher after receiving help with my homework.

× my teacher often teach me to be pilot

✓ my teacher often taught me to be pilot

句子描述的是童年时期的经历，整体使用过去时，因此 teach 应改为过去式 taught。注意规则动词和不规则动词的过去式变化。

× so I learned polite

✓ so I learned to be polite

learn 后面不能直接接形容词 polite。表示“学会做某事”时，应使用 learn to do something，因此改为 learned to be polite。

× people often love the polite people

✓ people often love polite people

这里是泛指有礼貌的人，不是指某一群特定的人，因此复数名词前不需要使用定冠词 the。

× When the people doesn't polite

✓ When people don't polite

people 是复数主语，不能和单数形式 doesn't 搭配，应使用 don't。不过，polite 通常是形容词，更自然的表达是“when people are not polite”；这里仅根据指定语法类型修正主谓一致。

× When the people doesn't polite

✓ When people are not polite

polite 是形容词，不能直接放在助动词 does/do 后面作谓语。形容词作表语时需要使用 be 动词，因此应说 are not polite。

× the polite people

✓ polite people

这里泛指有礼貌的人，使用复数名词时通常不加 the。只有在指代特定的一群人时，才使用 the polite people。

× I think all the occasions should we be polite

✓ I think we should be polite on all occasions

情态动词 should 后面的基本语序应为“主语 + should + 动词”。原句把 should 放在了主语前面，且 on all occasions 是更自然的介词短语。

× because polite is the very important thing for us

✓ because being polite is a very important thing for us

单数可数名词 thing 前面通常需要冠词。这里是泛指一件重要的事情，应使用不定冠词 a，而不是 the。

× for us us

✓ for us

us 被重复使用了一次。一个介词短语中只需要一个宾格代词，因此应删除重复的 us。

× we must be polite with other people

✓ we must be polite to other people

表示“对某人有礼貌”时，polite 通常和介词 to 搭配，而不是 with。因此应说 be polite to other people。

× When I talk to the other people first

✓ When I talked to other people first

问题询问的是过去作为孩子时做了什么，因此应使用过去时 talked。这里的 other people 是泛指复数名词，不需要 the。

× I will speak excuse me or sorry

✓ I would say “excuse me” or “sorry”

该回答描述过去的习惯，而不是未来的行为，因此不能使用一般将来时 will。描述过去习惯时可以使用 would。引号中的 excuse me 和 sorry 是直接说出的内容。

× I will speak excuse me or sorry

✓ I would say “excuse me” or “sorry”

英语中通常说 say “excuse me” 或 say “sorry”，不能说 speak excuse me。say 后面可以直接接具体说出的词语。

× with the teachers and the parents I often think speak thanks

✓ with the teachers and the parents I often said thank you

句子描述过去的行为，因此 think speak 应改为过去时 said。表达感谢时通常说 say thank you，而不是 speak thanks。

× with the teachers and the parents

✓ with teachers and parents

这里是泛指老师和父母，并非特定的老师和父母，因此通常不需要在复数名词前使用 the。