Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接说明了礼貌习惯的来源，但有多处用词和表达错误，影响了自然度和准确性。例如，“plight”应为“politeness”或“polite behavior”，“create my neighborhood”应改为“be polite to my neighbors”，“plight words”应改为“polite expressions”。另外，结尾的“be careful”意思不够明确，可以具体说明老师提醒你不要打断别人或要尊重他人。建议使用“First... In addition...”连接两个来源，并补充一个具体例子。

例: When I was a child, I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. My parents taught me to be polite to our neighbors and to use expressions like “please” and “thank you.” In addition, my teachers reminded me to listen carefully and respect other people when they were speaking.

提案: 回答观点明确，语法基本正确，也给出了两个合理原因。为了获得更高分，可以把“communicate comfortably”换成更自然的表达，如“communicate more comfortably”或“have smoother interactions”，并加入一个简短的具体结果或例子，使答案更加充实。

例: Yes, definitely. Being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps people communicate more comfortably. For example, using a friendly tone can prevent misunderstandings and make it easier to build good relationships.

提案: 回答覆盖了学校、工作和与他人见面等场合，内容方向正确，但“private”应为“polite”，“almost every occasion”应为“on almost every occasion”，“overly friends”应为“overly friendly”。句子过长，缺少清晰的连接和标点；可以用“especially”和“However”组织观点。此外，“对方先无礼时不必过度友好”可以表达为“we should still remain calm and respectful”。

例: We should be polite on almost every occasion, especially at school, at work, and when meeting new people. Good manners help create a positive impression and make communication easier. However, if someone is rude to us, we do not have to be overly friendly, but we should still remain calm and respectful.

提案: 回答提供了问候邻居、友好对待同学、尊敬老师和不打断别人等具体行为，内容比较充分。但“greeted to my neighborhood”应改为“greeted my neighbors”，“at Suku”含义不清，可能是“at school”；“when they are speaking”应与过去时保持一致，改为“when they were speaking”。建议拆分长句，并使用“Also”或“Finally”连接细节。

例: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting my neighbors whenever I saw them. At school, I was friendly to my classmates and showed respect to my teachers. I also tried not to interrupt people when they were speaking.

× Honestly speaking, I think we should be private almost every occasion especially at school at work and while meeting other people but if someone is rude to you first you don't need to be overly friends.

✓ Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite on almost every occasion, especially at school, at work, and while meeting other people. However, if someone is rude to you first, you don't need to be overly friendly.

表示“在某个场合”时，occasion前通常使用介词on，因此应说on almost every occasion，而不是almost every occasion。建议记住常见搭配：on this occasion、on most occasions、on every occasion。

× Honestly speaking, I think we should be private almost every occasion especially at school at work and while meeting other people but if someone is rude to you first you don't need to be overly friends.

✓ Honestly speaking, I think we should be polite on almost every occasion, especially at school, at work, and while meeting other people. However, if someone is rude to you first, you don't need to be overly friendly.

private表示“私人的”或“秘密的”，不符合这里“礼貌的”这一语境，应使用polite。friends是名词，不能放在be overly后面表示“过于友好”；这里应使用形容词friendly。建议区分名词friend/friends和形容词friendly。

× Oh, as I just said, when I was a child, I usually greeted to my neighborhood and at Suku I was friendly to my classmates and respected my teachers and I tried not to interrupt others when they are speaking.

✓ Oh, as I just said, when I was a child, I usually greeted my neighborhood, and at Suku I was friendly to my classmates, respected my teachers, and tried not to interrupt others when they were speaking.

greet是及物动词，后面直接接宾语，不需要介词to。因此应说greeted my neighborhood，而不是greeted to my neighborhood。类似表达还有greet someone和say hello to someone，不能混用。

× Oh, as I just said, when I was a child, I usually greeted to my neighborhood and at Suku I was friendly to my classmates and respected my teachers and I tried not to interrupt others when they are speaking.

✓ Oh, as I just said, when I was a child, I usually greeted my neighborhood, and at Suku I was friendly to my classmates, respected my teachers, and tried not to interrupt others when they were speaking.

整句话描述的是“小时候”的过去经历，因此when they are speaking应改为when they were speaking，使从句时态与过去背景保持一致。描述过去某一时期正在发生的动作时，通常使用过去进行时were speaking。