Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有基本的开头，但“polished and tied”不是正确表达，可能是想说“polite and kind（有礼貌且友善）”。回答没有清楚说明你是如何学会礼貌的，也缺少具体例子。建议直接回答“我的家人教会了我”，然后补充他们要求你使用礼貌用语、尊重长辈等细节。

例: When I was little, my family taught me to be polite by asking me to use words like “please” and “thank you.” They also reminded me to respect older people and listen when others were speaking.

提案: 你的回答基本无法理解，缺少对问题的直接回答。建议先明确表达观点，例如“Yes, I think it is very important”，然后说明原因。可以提到礼貌有助于建立良好关系、避免冲突，并使用“because”连接理由。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people. It also helps us build positive relationships and avoid unnecessary conflicts.

提案: 你的回答与问题的联系不清楚，而且“public patients”应改为“in public places”或“when communicating with others”。建议列举具体场合，例如在公共场所、学校、工作场所或与陌生人交谈时，并说明礼貌的具体表现。

例: We should be polite whenever we communicate with other people, especially in public places, at school, or at work. For example, we should wait our turn, speak calmly, and avoid interrupting others.

提案: 你的回答没有完整表达意思。“keen to older”不是正确搭配，可能想表达“kind to older people”或“respectful towards older people”。建议使用完整句子说明具体行为，例如向长辈问好、帮助他们或认真听他们说话，并加入一个例子。

例: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting older people and listening to them carefully. I also helped my grandparents with small tasks, such as carrying their shopping bags.

× And the polaron is something I rebody something to.

✓ Yes, politeness is something I really value.

原句中的“rebody something to”不是正确的英语句子结构，句意也不完整。回答“礼貌是否重要”时，可以使用“something I really value”这一完整结构，意思是“我非常重视的事情”。建议使用“主语 + be + something + 从句”结构，例如“Politeness is something I value.”

× We are public patients can communicate with others.

✓ We should be polite in public so that we can communicate with others.

原句把两个句子直接连接在一起，缺少正确的连接结构；“We are public patients”也不能表达“在公共场合保持礼貌”的意思。可以使用“We should be polite in public so that...”结构，其中“so that”表示目的，即“这样我们就能和他人交流”。

× When I was a child I was keen to older

✓ When I was a child, I was kind to older people.

原句中的“keen to older”结构不完整。“keen to”后面通常接动词原形，例如“keen to learn”，不能直接接“older”。如果想表达“对年长者友善”，应使用“be kind to older people”。另外，完整句子需要在“When I was a child”后加逗号，并在句末加句号。