Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，但“politics”应改为“politeness”，“teach”应使用过去时“taught”。“artists”与语境不符，应改为“others”或“my friends”。建议先直接说明父母是榜样，再补充具体例子，并使用“for example”连接；同时注意句子完整性和时态一致。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to say “please” when asking for something and “thank you” when receiving help. For example, whenever I borrowed something from my friends, I always asked politely and returned it on time.

提案: 观点明确，但句子结构错误较多。“being polite and can give”应改为“being polite can give”，“the first impression have”应改为“make a positive first impression”。例子没有完成，且“if you doing”应改为“if you do”。建议用完整的因果结构说明礼貌的重要性，并补充一个具体结果。

例: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it helps us make a positive first impression and build good relationships. For example, if I speak respectfully to a new colleague, they are more likely to feel comfortable and cooperate with me.

提案: 回答提到了初次见面这一场合，但表达不完整。“when you first time to meet others”应改为“when you meet someone for the first time”，“to show you what kind of personality”应改为“because it shows what kind of person you are”。建议先概括多个场合，再选择一个场合解释原因，并用完整句子结束回答。

例: We should be polite whenever we meet new people, speak to older people, or ask someone for help. In particular, politeness is essential when meeting someone for the first time because it shows that we are respectful and considerate.

提案: 回答方向正确，但语法和搭配需要改进。“I vividly remembered”应改为“I vividly remember”，“was always showed me my smile”应改为“I always smiled”，而“say hello to greeting others”应改为“said hello to greet others”。建议使用过去时，并加入一个具体对象或场景，使答案更自然、更有细节。

例: I vividly remember that I always smiled and said hello when I met other people as a child. I also greeted my teachers every morning and thanked my parents when they helped me. These were simple ways to show respect and politeness.

× They always teach me that I have to say thank you and please after asking someone for help.

✓ They always taught me that I had to say “thank you” and “please” after asking someone for help.

问题描述的是童年时期发生的事情，因此主句中的 teach 应改为过去式 taught。为了保持时态一致，have to 也应改为 had to。建议：讲述过去经历时，注意主句和从句的时态保持一致。

× For example, if I have to borrow something from artists, I would say please.

✓ For example, if I had to borrow something from others, I would say “please.”

if 从句使用过去式 had，主句使用 would，构成第二条件句，表示假设情况。原句中的 have 与 would 的时态搭配不一致。建议：使用“if + 过去式，would + 动词原形”的结构表达假设。

× Yes, definitely because being polite and can give someone the first impression have a positive effect.

✓ Yes, definitely, because being polite can give someone a positive first impression.

原句中 being polite 后多了 and，导致句子结构混乱；同时 give someone the first impression have a positive effect 的表达不完整。建议：使用清晰的结构“Being polite can give someone a positive first impression”。

× Yes, definitely because being polite and can give someone the first impression have a positive effect.

✓ Yes, definitely, because being polite can give someone a positive first impression.

动名词短语 being polite 作主语时，谓语应使用单数形式 can give；不能使用 have。建议：先找出句子的真正主语，再判断谓语形式。

× For example if you doing some rude action

✓ For example, if you do something rude, people may think that you are impolite.

原句只有 if 引导的条件从句，没有完整的主句，因此句子不完整。建议：使用“if 条件从句 + 主句”构成完整句子。

× For example when you first time to meet others, being polite is critical and to show you what kind of personality and

✓ For example, when you meet others for the first time, being polite is critical because it shows what kind of personality you have.

表示“第一次”应使用固定表达 for the first time，而不是直接说 you first time。建议：记住固定搭配“for the first time”。

× For example when you first time to meet others, being polite is critical and to show you what kind of personality and

✓ For example, when you meet others for the first time, being polite is critical because it shows what kind of personality you have.

原句中 meet 前缺少正确的谓语形式，and 后面的内容也没有完成，导致句子结构不完整。建议：检查句子是否包含完整的主语、谓语和宾语，并避免在句末留下未完成的表达。

× For example when you first time to meet others, being polite is critical and to show you what kind of personality and

✓ For example, when you meet others for the first time, being polite is critical because it shows what kind of personality you have.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时中应使用 shows，而不是 show。建议：当主语是 he、she、it 或单数名词时，一般现在时谓语通常要加 -s 或 -es。

× I vividly remembered that when I was a child I was always showed me my smile and say hello to greeting others

✓ I vividly remember that, when I was a child, I always smiled and said hello to greet others.

was always showed 是错误的被动结构，而且句子的主语 I 是做出动作的人，应使用主动语态。建议：如果主语执行动作，使用主动语态，例如 I smiled and said。

× I vividly remembered that when I was a child I was always showed me my smile and say hello to greeting others

✓ I vividly remember that, when I was a child, I always smiled and said hello to greet others.

showed me my smile 中的 me 使用不正确。这里想表达“我微笑”，不需要加入 me。建议：使用准确的主语和宾语，避免在不需要宾语的动词后添加代词。

× I vividly remembered that when I was a child I was always showed me my smile and say hello to greeting others

✓ I vividly remember that, when I was a child, I always smiled and said hello to greet others.

when I was a child 表示过去经历，因此并列动词应使用过去式：smiled 和 said。原句中的 say 没有与过去时保持一致。建议：讲述过去发生的多个动作时，并列动词都要使用过去式。

× I vividly remembered that when I was a child I was always showed me my smile and say hello to greeting others

✓ I vividly remember that, when I was a child, I always smiled and said hello to greet others.

to 后面应接动词原形，因此应使用 to greet，而不是 to greeting。建议：区分“to + 动词原形”和介词 to + 动名词的用法；在表示目的时，通常使用“to + 动词原形”。