Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答结构清晰，也提供了父母和老师的具体影响。不过，“bicycle manners”用词错误，应改为“basic manners”或“good manners”。另外，“saying thank you and goodbye”可以更自然地说成“saying thank you and goodbye to people”。注意避免把多个例子堆在一起，可以用“for example”使表达更连贯。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents and teachers. They taught me basic manners, such as saying “please” and “thank you,” greeting people, and respecting strangers. My parents also set a good example by greeting our neighbors, so I learned a lot by observing them.

提案: 观点明确，原因也比较充分，但存在语法和搭配问题。“a smoother relationship”应改为“smoother relationships”，“worker situation”不自然，应改为“work situations”或“the workplace”。第一句中的“polite people tend to make more friends”略显绝对，可以改成“are more likely to build good relationships”，表达更自然、准确。

例: Yes, I think politeness is extremely important because it helps people build positive relationships. When we show respect, others are usually more willing to communicate with us and trust us. This is useful not only in social situations but also in the workplace, where good manners can improve teamwork.

提案: 回答直接，并使用了求职面试和见伴侣父母两个具体场景，内容较好。但有几个语法错误：“the first impression really matters”而不是“first impression is really matter”；“being respectful and professional helps create/leave a positive impression”，而不是“help react a positive impression”。建议使用“especially”突出场合的重要性。

例: We should be polite whenever we meet someone for the first time, especially in important situations. For instance, good manners are essential during a job interview or when meeting your partner’s parents. Being respectful and professional helps create a positive first impression and build trust.

提案: 回答有具体经历，能够体现分享和友好，但词汇和语法问题较多。“show politics”应改为“show politeness”或“be polite”；“the neighbors children”应为“the neighbors’ children”；“our stress friendly”应为“made our street friendlier”；“it’s made”应为过去时“it made”。此外，“Let me think”可以省略，以便更直接地回答问题。

例: When I was in primary school, I often baked cookies and shared them with the children in my neighborhood. I did this to be friendly and show my politeness. It helped me make friends, and everyone on our street looked forward to my homemade treats.

× Good manners also help to build trust and smoother relationship in both social and worker situation.

✓ Good manners also help to build trust and smoother relationships in both social and work situations.

“relationship”和“situation”都是可数名词，而且这里分别指多种关系和情况，所以应使用复数形式“relationships”和“situations”。“work situations”比“worker situation”更符合英语表达。

× In my view, you should be polite when you first meet someone because first impression is really matter.

✓ In my view, you should be polite when you first meet someone because the first impression really matters.

“first impression”在这里是特指第一次见面时产生的印象，因此前面需要使用定冠词“the”。

× In my view, you should be polite when you first meet someone because first impression is really matter.

✓ In my view, you should be polite when you first meet someone because the first impression really matters.

主语“the first impression”是第三人称单数，所以一般现在时的动词“matter”需要加“s”，变成“matters”。同时，“is matter”不能这样搭配。

× For example, in job interviews or when you meet your partner's parents, being respectful and professional help react a positive impression and build trust.

✓ For example, in job interviews or when you meet your partner's parents, being respectful and professional helps make a positive impression and build trust.

“being respectful and professional”是一个动名词短语，整体作单数主语，因此谓语应使用“helps”，而不是“help”。另外，“make a positive impression”是正确搭配。

× For example, in job interviews or when you meet your partner's parents, being respectful and professional help react a positive impression and build trust.

✓ For example, in job interviews or when you meet your partner's parents, being respectful and professional helps make a positive impression and build trust.

“react”通常表示“作出反应”，不能直接接“a positive impression”。表达“留下积极印象”时，应使用固定搭配“make a positive impression”。

× Let me think, when I was a child, especially in primary school, I used to bake cookies and share them with the neighbors children to show politics and make friends.

✓ Let me think. When I was a child, especially in primary school, I used to bake cookies and share them with the neighbors' children to show politeness and make friends.

“neighbors”表示“邻居们”，要表达“邻居们的孩子”，需要使用所有格形式“neighbors'”。撇号放在复数名词“neighbors”后面。

× I enjoyed doing it because it's made our stress friendly and everyone looked forward to my little treats.

✓ I enjoyed doing it because it made our street friendlier and everyone looked forward to my little treats.

整段描述的是童年时期发生的事情，应该使用过去时。“it's”是“it is”或“it has”的缩写，不适合这里的过去叙述；应改为过去式“made”。此外，“street”应使用过去语境中合适的名词，“friendlier”表示“变得更加友好”。