Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，但有明显的词汇和语法问题。“applied”应改为“polite”，“platness”应改为“politeness”；“general knowledge knowledge class”表达重复且不自然。建议先直接说明从老师那里学习礼貌，再补充老师如何教你，例如使用“for example”连接具体行为。

例: When I was a child, I mainly learned to be polite from my teachers. For example, they taught us to greet people, say “please” and “thank you,” and listen when others were speaking.

提案: 回答观点明确，也提供了结果，但“da life”应为“daily life”，“in everything”过于笼统。建议用更自然的表达，如“in our daily lives”，并具体说明礼貌如何改善学习或工作环境，例如减少冲突、促进合作。

例: Yes, I think politeness is very important in our daily lives. It helps people communicate more comfortably and creates a positive environment at school or at work. For example, saying “thank you” can make teamwork smoother.

提案: 回答提供了例子，方向正确，但开头存在严重的句子结构错误，且“others that we are not familiar with”不自然。应直接说“There are many occasions when we should be polite”，并列举与陌生人交流、正式场合或服务人员沟通等具体情境。

例: We should be polite whenever we interact with other people, especially in formal situations. For example, we should use polite language when meeting strangers, speaking to teachers, or asking a shop assistant for help.

提案: 回答中“pandas”应为“politeness”，但“show my politeness by telling a joke”在语境中不够自然，而且“to to”重复。建议选择更典型的礼貌行为，如向长辈问好、说“please”和“thank you”、主动分享零食，并使用过去时准确描述。

例: When I was a child, I showed my politeness by greeting my teachers and saying “please” and “thank you.” I also shared snacks with my classmates, which was a simple way to be friendly and considerate.

× When I was a child, I learnt to be applied mainly from my teachers.

✓ When I was a child, I learned to be polite mainly from my teachers.

“applied”表示“被应用的”，不能用来表示“有礼貌的”。这里应使用形容词“polite”。另外，“learned”和“learnt”都正确；“learned”在美式英语中更常见。

× We have general knowledge knowledge class that taught us the basic way of platness.

✓ I had a general knowledge class that taught us the basic principles of politeness.

因为你描述的是童年时期发生的事情，所以应使用一般过去时“had”，而不是现在时“have”。“a”用于修饰单数可数名词“class”。

× Yes, I think being polite is very important in da life and in everything.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important in life and in everything.

“life”在这里表示泛指“生活”，通常不使用定冠词“the”。“da”不是标准英语中的冠词，应改为不使用冠词。

× When people become polite, they can enjoy a better study or work environment.

✓ When people are polite, they can enjoy a better study or work environment.

“a better study or work environment”中的冠词“a”使用正确，因为“environment”是单数可数名词。这里将“become polite”改为“are polite”是为了使表达更自然；原句中的冠词本身没有错误。

× There are many different situations or occasions should be that should be polite.

✓ There are many different situations or occasions when we should be polite.

原句中“should be”重复，且句子缺少正确的连接结构。使用“when”引导时间或情境从句，结构应为“occasions when we should be polite”。

× For example, when we meet a stranger or when we are talking with others that we do not that we are not familiar with.

✓ For example, we should be polite when we meet a stranger or talk with people we are not familiar with.

原句有重复和错误的句子连接：“that we do not that we are not”使结构不完整。两个并列动作应保持一致，使用“meet ... or talk ...”。“people we are not familiar with”是完整、自然的定语结构。

× When I was a child I usually showed my pandas by talking a joke or inviting my friends or other classmates to to buy some snacks together.

✓ When I was a child, I usually showed my politeness by telling jokes or inviting my friends or classmates to buy some snacks together.

“to to”中不应重复使用两个不定式标记“to”，应保留一个。“by telling jokes”与“by inviting...”构成并列结构，两个动词都使用“-ing”形式。