Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答内容相关，也提到了父母的教育和具体礼貌用语，但有明显语法和表达问题：将“They want to want to”改为“They wanted to”，将“I will express”改为过去时“I would express”，并把“a good manner”改为更自然的“good manners”。“to who served the food”应改为“to whoever served the food”。建议使用“First…For example…”组织答案，并避免“and so on”这类不具体的结尾。

例: My parents taught me to be polite by encouraging me to say “please,” “thank you,” “sorry,” and “excuse me.” They also reminded me to use good manners at the dinner table. For example, I would thank whoever served the food and wait until everyone had been served before eating.

提案: 观点明确，但重复、停顿和语法错误较多。应说“make communication easier”，而不是“make communication more easier”；“in a a friend way”应改为“in a friendly way”；“the problems will solve”应改为“the problems can be solved”。建议用一个清晰的原因和具体结果回答，避免重复“If I”和“So I think”。

例: Yes, definitely. Politeness is important because it makes communication smoother and helps people solve problems more effectively. When I express my opinions politely, others are more likely to respond in a friendly way, even if we disagree.

提案: 回答结构清楚，使用了例子和结果，内容较具体。需要修正词汇和语法：“professional lime”应为“professional image”，“positive impress”应为“positive impression”，“Being respectful…help”应为“Being respectful…helps”。开头不要重复“In my opinion, in…”，可直接说“In my opinion, we should be especially polite…”。

例: In my opinion, we should be especially polite in formal situations, such as job interviews and business meetings. Politeness shows a professional image and creates a positive impression. It also helps build mutual trust, which makes cooperation easier.

提案: 回答直接，但时态、搭配和用词需要改进。“When I was child”应为“When I was a child”；删除重复的“and”；“calculate a good manner”不符合英语表达，应改为“develop good manners”或“develop good habits”。由于问题问的是具体行为，建议补充一个例子，例如在餐桌上感谢父母或向别人道歉。

例: When I was a child, I showed politeness by saying “please,” “thank you,” “excuse me,” and “sorry.” My parents encouraged me to develop good manners, especially at home and at school. For example, I thanked my parents after meals and apologized whenever I made a mistake.

× They want to want to cultivate a good manner at the dinner table.

✓ They wanted to cultivate good manners at the dinner table.

句子描述的是童年时期父母的行为，因此应使用一般过去时：want 改为 wanted。cultivate good manners 是更自然的表达；good manners 通常用复数表示“良好的礼仪”。

× They want to want to cultivate a good manner at the dinner table.

✓ They wanted to cultivate good manners at the dinner table.

“礼仪”通常是不可数或复数概念，表达“良好的礼仪”时一般使用 good manners，而不是 a good manner。

× I will express my thanks to who served the food and so on.

✓ I expressed my thanks to whoever served the food and so on.

问题询问的是童年时期的经历，所以应使用一般过去时：will express 改为 expressed。

× I will express my thanks to who served the food and so on.

✓ I expressed my thanks to whoever served the food and so on.

介词 to 后面需要一个完整的名词性成分。表示“无论谁提供食物”时，应使用 whoever，而不能直接使用 who。

× It can make communication more easier and solve problems effectively.

✓ It can make communication easier and solve problems effectively.

easier 本身已经是比较级，不能再和 more 一起使用。应删除 more，使用 easier。

× They will respond to me in a a friend way.

✓ They will respond to me in a friendly way.

friend 是名词，不能修饰 way。这里需要形容词 friendly，表示“友好的”。

× They will respond to me in a a friend way.

✓ They will respond to me in a friendly way.

名词短语前只能使用一个不定冠词 a。原句中 a 重复出现了一次，因此应改为 a friendly way。

× So I think the problems will solve.

✓ So I think the problems will be solved.

problems 是“被解决”的对象，不能主动 solve，因此需要使用一般将来时的被动语态：will be solved。

× Being respectful to others help build mutual trust and make cooperation easier.

✓ Being respectful to others helps build mutual trust and makes cooperation easier.

Being respectful to others 是动名词短语，整体作单数主语，因此后面的谓语动词要使用第三人称单数形式：help 改为 helps，make 改为 makes。

× When I was child, I used polite words such as thank you, excuse me and sorry.

✓ When I was a child, I used polite words such as thank you, excuse me and sorry.

child 是可数名词单数，前面需要使用冠词。这里表示“一个孩子”或“小时候”，应使用不定冠词 a：a child。

× My parents told me to do that because they want to calculate a good manner for me.

✓ My parents told me to do that because they wanted me to develop good manners.

主句使用了过去时 told，描述过去原因时，从句中的 want 也应使用过去时 wanted。表达“养成良好的礼仪”时，wanted me to develop good manners 更自然。