Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct answer in the past tense and avoid repetition. “Used to scold” is correct; do not say “score scold.” Use “when I did something mischievous” instead of “when I do any mischief.” You could also explain how your parents taught you, such as by reminding you to greet people respectfully.

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. When I was a child, my mother used to scold me if I misbehaved or failed to greet our neighbors properly. She always reminded me to show respect and use polite expressions.

提案: Your answer is relevant and gives a reason, but “very crucial” is slightly redundant because “crucial” already means very important. Replace “many at times” with “in many cases” or “sometimes,” and use a more natural phrase such as “expresses gratitude to others.” Add a brief result or example to make the answer more developed.

例: Yes, definitely. Being polite is important because it reflects your character and shows respect for other people. In many cases, polite words such as “please” and “thank you” also help build positive relationships.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, such as “We should be polite on almost every occasion.” Use plural and natural forms: “get-togethers,” “festivals,” and “family meetings.” “Grieving them” is incorrect in this context; say “greeting them” or “showing them respect.” Organize the examples with linking words and avoid ending with the incomplete phrase “showing their love towards.”

例: We should be polite on almost every occasion, especially at family gatherings, festivals, and formal meetings. For example, we should greet people respectfully, listen while they are speaking, and thank them for their kindness. This helps everyone feel comfortable and valued.

提案: The answer contains several interruptions and incomplete phrases, so begin again with a simple, direct sentence. The intended expressions are “I used to say thank you when someone helped me” and “I apologized if I accidentally broke something.” Avoid repeating “my mother” and “my parents,” and finish your final sentence clearly. Give one or two specific examples of polite behavior.

例: As a child, I tried to use polite expressions in everyday situations. I used to say “thank you” whenever someone helped me, and I apologized if I accidentally broke something or upset someone. My parents taught me that these small habits showed respect for other people.

× When I was a child, my mother used to score scold me when I do any mischief or if I don't greet the neighbors very properly.

✓ When I was a child, my mother used to scold me when I did anything mischievous or did not greet the neighbors properly.

Because the sentence describes repeated actions in the past, the verbs do and do not should be changed to their past forms, did and did not. Used to scold already correctly expresses a repeated past action.

× Yes, definitely. Politeness is very crucial as it reflects your personality as well as many at times it shows your gratitude towards a person.

✓ Yes, definitely. Politeness is very important because it reflects your personality and often shows your gratitude toward other people.

The conjunction structure as well as many at times is not grammatically correct in this sentence. Use because to introduce the reason and and to connect the two related ideas.

× Yes, definitely. Politeness is very crucial as it reflects your personality as well as many at times it shows your gratitude towards a person.

✓ Yes, definitely. Politeness is very important because it reflects your personality and often shows your gratitude toward other people.

Many at times is an incorrect adverbial expression. Use often or many times instead. Often is more natural when describing something that happens frequently.

× Many occasions like get together, festival, celebration and also during family meeting, individuals should be polite towards each other by grieving them and also by showing their love towards.

✓ On many occasions, such as get-togethers, festivals, celebrations, and family meetings, individuals should be polite toward each other by greeting them and showing their love toward each other.

The nouns in the list refer to more than one occasion, so they should be plural: get-togethers, festivals, celebrations, and family meetings. The plural forms make the list grammatically consistent.

× Many occasions like get together, festival, celebration and also during family meeting, individuals should be polite towards each other by grieving them and also by showing their love towards.

✓ On many occasions, such as get-togethers, festivals, celebrations, and family meetings, individuals should be polite toward each other by greeting them and showing their love toward each other.

Use the preposition on before occasions when referring to times or situations in which something happens. Also, toward should be followed by an object; here, the object is each other.

× Many occasions like get together, festival, celebration and also during family meeting, individuals should be polite towards each other by grieving them and also by showing their love towards.

✓ On many occasions, such as get-togethers, festivals, celebrations, and family meetings, individuals should be polite toward each other by greeting them and showing their love toward each other.

The original sentence begins with a noun phrase, Many occasions, but it lacks the preposition needed to connect that phrase to the main clause. Adding On and such as creates a clear and complete sentence structure.

× Are you still great people as well as if someone helped me I used to say thank you as my mother my parents taught me this and also I was I used to say sorry if I accidentally broke something or.

✓ I used to greet people, and if someone helped me, I would say thank you because my parents taught me to do so. I also used to say sorry if I accidentally broke something.

The original response contains several incomplete and incorrectly connected clauses, including as well as if, as my mother my parents, and I was I used to. Separating the ideas into two complete sentences and using clear conjunctions makes the structure grammatical and easy to understand.