Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，结构清晰，也给出了具体人物作为例子。不过要注意一般过去时的一致性：将“show”改为“showed”，将“learn”改为“learned”。“be a polite man”表达不自然，可以改为“behave politely”或“be a polite person”。此外，可以补充一个具体场景，例如母亲如何教你向客人问候或提供帮助，这样内容会更丰富。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my mother when I was a child. She taught me to greet guests warmly, offer them a seat, and say “please” and “thank you.” She set a very good example for me, so I gradually learned to behave politely in different situations.

提案: 观点明确，并且说明了礼貌有助于维持和谐关系，但“plight”是拼写和词义错误，应改为“politeness”。“modern people”在这里不够自然，可以说“people in modern society”；“more easy”应改为“more likely”或“more likely to have conflicts”。建议加入具体例子，例如在工作或日常交流中，礼貌如何减少误解和冲突。

例: Yes, definitely. Politeness is important because it helps people maintain harmonious relationships, especially in modern society. For example, using respectful language at work can prevent misunderstandings and make it easier to cooperate with others. Without politeness, small disagreements can quickly turn into serious conflicts.

提案: 回答覆盖了大多数场合和特殊情况，内容有一定逻辑性。但“in the most occasions”应改为“on most occasions”；“someone are”应改为“someone is”。在有人伤害你时，表达“shouldn't be polite”不够准确，容易被理解为可以无礼；更自然的说法是“you should focus on protecting yourself and seek help immediately”。另外，“as I said before”略显重复，可以用具体场景替代。

例: We should be polite on most occasions, such as when we are speaking to teachers, colleagues, or strangers. Good manners show respect and make communication smoother. However, if someone is threatening or hurting us, our priority should be to protect ourselves and seek help rather than worry about being polite.

提案: 回答包含了明确的行为例子，如微笑和向老师鞠躬，符合“具体细节”的要求，整体结构也比较清楚。“in most occasions”应改为“on most occasions”；由于问题询问过去的习惯，“I think”最好改为“I thought”，“when I met them”可以改为“when I saw them”或“whenever I met them”。“smile to them”更自然的表达是“smile at them”。

例: When I was a child, I tried to show respect to people on most occasions. For example, I smiled at my teachers and bowed to them whenever I saw them. I also listened carefully when adults were speaking instead of interrupting them. These small actions were my way of showing politeness.

× She always show me how to be polite to guests and be a polite man.

✓ She always shows me how to be polite to guests and be a polite man.

主语“She”是第三人称单数，在一般现在时中，谓语动词要加-s，因此“show”应改为“shows”。

× I think she set a good example for me and I learn a lot from her.

✓ I think she set a good example for me and I learned a lot from her.

句子描述的是童年时期已经发生的事情，因此“learn”应使用一般过去时“learned”。“I think”表示现在的看法，可以保留一般现在时。

× Without plight, people may find they are more easy to have conflict with others.

✓ Without plight, people may find it easier to have conflicts with others.

“easy”的比较级通常是“easier”，而不是“more easy”。在“find it + 形容词比较级 + to do”结构中，应使用“find it easier to...”。

× Without plight, people may find they are more easy to have conflict with others.

✓ Without plight, people may find it easier to have conflicts with others.

“conflict”在这里表示人与人之间可能发生的冲突，通常使用可数名词复数“conflicts”，因为前面没有限定为某一次特定冲突。

× I think in the most occasions we should be polite because it helps us a lot as I said before.

✓ I think on most occasions we should be polite because it helps us a lot as I said before.

表示“在大多数场合”时，英语固定搭配是“on most occasions”，不能使用“in the most occasions”。同时，“most occasions”前通常不加定冠词“the”。

× But in some extreme occasions we shouldn't be polite, such as if someone are hurting us we shouldn't be polite and seek for help.

✓ But in some extreme occasions we shouldn't be polite, such as if someone is hurting us we shouldn't be polite and seek for help.

“someone”是第三人称单数，所以搭配be动词时应使用“is”，不能使用“are”。

× But in some extreme occasions we shouldn't be polite, such as if someone are hurting us we shouldn't be polite and seek for help.

✓ But in some extreme occasions we shouldn't be polite, such as if someone are hurting us we shouldn't be polite and seek help.

“seek”表示“寻求”时可以直接接宾语，标准搭配是“seek help”，通常不说“seek for help”。

× So I always smile to them and bow to my teachers when I met them.

✓ So I always smile at them and bow to my teachers when I met them.

表示“对某人微笑”时，固定搭配是“smile at somebody”，因此“smile to them”应改为“smile at them”。