Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本切题，也使用了原因和具体行为，但存在明显语法和搭配问题，例如“love to be polite mainly for my parents parents”应改为“I learned it mainly from my parents”，“say hello, please thank you”应改为“say hello, please, and thank you”。建议先用一句话直接回答，再用“Whenever/If”补充父母如何提醒你；同时避免重复“parents”，并使用更自然的“polite manners”或“good manners”。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me to greet people and say “please” and “thank you” from an early age. Whenever I forgot, they gently reminded me to use good manners. As a result, being polite became a natural habit for me.

提案: 回答有明确观点和原因，但句子没有完整结束，且“simple codes”不符合语境，“more present”应改为“more pleasant”。建议使用完整的两到三句话，并通过“For example”引出具体场景，如工作或日常交流；注意大小写、标点和词语搭配，避免重复表达“people”。

例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people build and maintain good relationships. It also prevents misunderstandings by showing respect for others. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make everyday conversations more pleasant and cooperative.

提案: 回答只提到了第一次见面这一种场合，而且句子未完成，因此内容不够完整。建议先直接说明“在所有场合都应礼貌”，然后列举两种具体情境，例如第一次见面、与年长者交流或在服务场所，并用“especially”和“because”连接原因。还要避免“the the”等重复和“My point I”这类不自然表达。

例: People should be polite in all kinds of situations, especially when they meet someone for the first time. A good first impression can help create a positive relationship. We should also be polite when speaking to elderly people or dealing with service staff because they deserve respect.

提案: 回答提供了问候和道谢两个具体行为，方向正确，但有多处听写或语法问题：“sides thank you”应为“said thank you”，“greeted the neighborhood”应为“greeted my neighbors”，“sucked my teacher”应为“thanked my teacher”。建议使用过去时保持一致，并用“For example”后给出一个清晰、自然的例子；结尾应表达“礼貌意味着尊重他人”。

例: When I was a child, I showed politeness by greeting people and saying thank you whenever someone helped me. For example, I greeted my neighbors when I saw them in the street. I also thanked my teacher for helping me with my schoolwork because my parents taught me that politeness shows respect.

× I love to be polite mainly for my parents parents.

✓ I learned to be polite mainly from my parents.

问题回答的是“小时候如何学会礼貌”，应使用过去时 learned，而不是现在时 love。这里 from 表示“从某人那里学到”。另外，parents 重复，应保留一次。

× I love to be polite mainly for my parents parents.

✓ I learned to be polite mainly from my parents.

表示“从父母那里学会”时，应使用介词 from，而不是 for。

× They always told me to say hello, please thank you.

✓ They always told me to say hello, please, and thank you.

列举三个或以上项目时，最后两个项目之间需要使用 and。please 前后也应使用逗号，使列举关系更清楚。

× Yes, it's important for people to be polite because it helps people maintain relationships and avoid misunderstandings, for example Showing respect and using simple codes like saying thank you can make interactions more present and

✓ Yes, it's important for people to be polite because it helps people maintain relationships and avoid misunderstandings. For example, showing respect and using simple phrases like saying thank you can make interactions more pleasant.

原句过长，并且以 and 结尾，句子没有完整结束。应拆分成两个完整句子。For example 后面需要逗号，句首 showing 不需要大写。建议每个句子都检查是否有完整的主语、谓语和句号。

× Yes, it's important for people to be polite because it helps people maintain relationships and avoid misunderstandings, for example Showing respect and using simple codes like saying thank you can make interactions more present and

✓ Yes, it's important for people to be polite because it helps people maintain relationships and avoid misunderstandings. For example, showing respect and using simple phrases like saying thank you can make interactions more pleasant.

Present 表示“现在的”或“出席的”，不符合语境。这里想表达“让交流更愉快”，应使用形容词 pleasant。

× My point I people should be polite when they meet each other for the first time because the the first impression is important. If

✓ My point is that people should be polite when they meet each other for the first time because the first impression is important.

My point 后面缺少系动词 is 和连接词 that，因此句子结构不完整。此外，句末的 If 是残句，应删除，或者补充完整的条件从句。

× My point I people should be polite when they meet each other for the first time because the the first impression is important. If

✓ My point is that people should be polite when they meet each other for the first time because the first impression is important.

the 被重复使用了一次。单数名词短语 first impression 前只需要一个定冠词 the。

× When I was a child, I always greeted people and sides thank you whenever someone helps me.

✓ When I was a child, I always greeted people and said thank you whenever someone helped me.

主句使用过去时 greeted，描述童年经历时，从句也应使用过去时 helped。sides 不是正确的动词，这里应使用 said，表示“说谢谢”。

× For example, I greeted the neighborhood when I met some on the street and sucked my teacher of the class because my teacher taught me that being polite should respect

✓ For example, I greeted my neighbors when I met them on the street and thanked my teacher after class because my teacher taught me that being polite means showing respect.

表示“下课后”时应使用 after class，而不是 of the class。表示在街上遇到某人时，应使用 met them；表示感谢某人应使用 thanked someone。

× For example, I greeted the neighborhood when I met some on the street and sucked my teacher of the class because my teacher taught me that being polite should respect

✓ For example, I greeted my neighbors when I met them on the street and thanked my teacher after class because my teacher taught me that being polite means showing respect.

Neighbors 是复数，后面再次指代这些人时应使用宾格代词 them，而不是不明确的 some。建议先明确名词，再用合适的代词指代。

× For example, I greeted the neighborhood when I met some on the street and sucked my teacher of the class because my teacher taught me that being polite should respect

✓ For example, I greeted my neighbors when I met them on the street and thanked my teacher after class because my teacher taught me that being polite means showing respect.

being polite should respect 的结构不完整，因为“礼貌”不能直接作为 respect 的执行者。应改为 being polite means showing respect，表示“礼貌意味着表示尊重”。