Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达错误较多，句子结构混乱。建议先用一句主题句直接回答（说明谁教的或在哪里学的），然后用1-2个具体细节扩展，比如举例说明父母或学校如何教你（示范、纠正、榜样），并使用连词使句子连贯。注意时态和代词使用，避免冗余。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents when I was a child. For example, they always reminded me to say "please" and "thank you" and corrected me when I forgot. Because they led by example, I soon formed the habit and used polite phrases naturally.

提案: 回答有观点但表达混乱且含义错误（将“bad”与礼貌搭配不当），词汇使用不准确。建议先明确观点（重要/不重要），然后用2个理由支持，每个理由用连接词（because, also）衔接，最后总结。注意词汇选择（important, benefit, reflect）。

例: Absolutely, I think being polite is very important. It helps build good relationships because polite behaviour shows respect. Also, politeness reflects cultural values and makes daily communication smoother.

提案: 答案含混且词不达意，缺少清晰的主题句和具体场景描述。建议列出具体场合（例如初次见面、正式场合、吃饭或工作场合），并用连词（for example, such as, also）给出简短解释说明为什么要礼貌。尽量用准确词汇（meet someone, formal occasions, family gatherings）。

例: We should be polite on many occasions, such as when we first meet someone, at formal events, and during family gatherings. For example, when meeting a new colleague, a polite greeting helps create a good impression.

提案: 回答几乎无法理解，词汇和句子结构严重错误，缺乏具体行为描述。建议先用一句简单的主题句说明常做的礼貌行为（例如说谢谢、帮忙、问候），然后给1-2个具体例子说明场景和做法。注意使用正确的动词和时态（when I was a child, I usually...）。

例: When I was a child, I usually said "please" and "thank you" to show politeness. For instance, I would hold the door open for others and help my parents set the table.

× Yeah, so my child I had been taught to say please and thank you. and as also it they were done this so I think we

✓ When I was a child, I was taught to say "please" and "thank you". Also, they did this, so I think...

句子涉及过去发生的动作，应使用一般过去时或过去被动。原句结构混乱并混用过去完成时（had been taught）和不完整片段。建议使用“When I was a child, I was taught...”来表达“我小时候被教导……”。此外，句子末尾不完整，应补全或连贯表达。

× Absolutely. I think being polite is a bad thing in society. So polite not only can connect with others butter it is a modern in Chinese traditional culture. So it is.

✓ Absolutely. I think being polite is a good thing in society. Politeness not only helps connect people, but it is also an important part of Chinese traditional culture.

原句错误使用了形容词含义（'bad' 应为 'good'），并且时态与一般现在时描述普遍真理一致。还存在词序和词形错误（'So polite not only can connect with others butter' 应为 'Politeness not only helps connect people, but...'）。建议使用一般现在时并纠正连接词和名词形式。

× There are lots of occasions should we be polite like when you first meet the song body you must say Song query and where you will go into our important occasion.

✓ There are lots of occasions when we should be polite, like when you first meet somebody; you must say hello and show respect at important events.

原句语序混乱且使用了不正确的词（'song body','Song query'）。需要改为‘occasions when we should be polite’来引导从句，并用正确词汇'somebody'和'hello'或具体礼貌用语。保持一般现在时描述习俗或规矩。

× When I'm a child I usually smell with a stringer and lightened body in difficulty to gear hand. So it's all flattening.

✓ When I was a child, I usually greeted people and helped them when they were in difficulty, so it felt natural.

句子应使用过去时（When I was a child）。原句中有许多词汇错误和拼写错误（'smell','stringer','lightened body','gear hand','flattening'）导致无法理解。根据上下文推测原意为'打招呼并在别人有困难时帮忙'，改为'I usually greeted people and helped them when they were in difficulty'。建议学习常用动词greet, help，并注意过去时形式和拼写。