Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear, but it has minor grammar issues and some redundancy. Improve by using a stronger topic sentence, correct tense/forms (learned/learnt consistently), and add a brief specific example of parents' behaviour using a linking phrase to enrich the answer without exceeding sentence limit.

例: I learned good manners from my parents. For example, they always said “please” and “thank you” and greeted visitors politely, so I copied their behaviour from an early age.

提案: Good content and clear opinion, but there are grammar errors and a small coherence issue. Use correct verb forms and linking words (because/so) to connect ideas. Provide one concise specific example with correct verb tense and article usage.

例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it shows respect and helps people get along. For example, I always greet my neighbours when I see them, which creates friendly relations.

提案: Answer is acceptable but slightly repetitive and wordy. Start directly with a topic sentence naming occasions (e.g., asking for help, meeting elders, formal events), use linking words (for example, especially), and give a brief reason. Keep to two sentences max for clarity.

例: We should be polite in many situations, for example when asking for help, meeting elders, or attending formal events. Being courteous in these moments shows respect and makes others more willing to assist us.

提案: This answer repeats previous points and contains grammatical mistakes and repetitions. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, and give one specific concrete action (e.g., helping, writing notes, greeting teachers) with a short result. Use correct verbs and articles.

例: As a child I showed politeness by always saying “please” and “thank you” and by helping classmates with small tasks. Because of this, teachers and friends often thanked me and treated me kindly.

× They always remind me to say please and thank you.

✓ They always remind me to say please and thank you.

No correction needed; verb 'remind' agrees with plural subject 'They'. (If considered error: none.)

× This shows respect to others and help people get along better.

✓ This shows respect to others and helps people get along better.

Subject 'This' is singular, so verbs must be singular present. 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject. Suggestion: match verb number to subject in simple present.

× For example, I always greeting my neighbour when I meet them.

✓ For example, I always greet my neighbour when I meet them.

After an auxiliary or adverb like 'always' use base form 'greet', not the -ing form 'greeting'. Use simple present for habitual actions. Also 'neighbour' singular matches 'them' which can remain as gender-neutral singular, but you may use 'him or her' or 'them' informally.

× Well, this is a good question and I will say that when we want to get some help from others, this shows respect to others and they will be more happy to help us.

✓ Well, this is a good question. I would say that when we want to get help from others, showing respect makes them more willing to help us.

Original sentence is long and repeats ideas. Tense and modality: 'I will say' is awkward; 'I would say' or 'I think' is better. 'Get some help' can be 'get help'. 'This shows respect to others' is vague; use a gerund 'showing respect' to link cause and effect. 'More happy' is nonstandard; use 'more willing' or 'happier'. Suggestions: split into shorter sentences, use appropriate modal ('would') and correct comparative adjective.

× As I mentioned before, I learned being polite from my parents and so as a child I always say say please add thank you to others to my friends, families or teachers.

✓ As I mentioned before, I learned to be polite from my parents, and as a child I always said please and thank you to my friends, family, and teachers.

Several issues: 'learned being polite' should be 'learned to be polite' (verb + to-infinitive). Tense consistency: referring to childhood actions use past tense 'said' not 'say'. Duplicate word 'say' and 'add' incorrect; use 'said please and thank you'. 'Families' should be 'family' (singular collective). Use commas and parallel list 'friends, family, and teachers'. Suggestions: use 'learned to be' and past simple for past habits, clean up redundancy.