Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并使用正确时态与更清晰的表达。注意句子数量不要过多，保持逻辑清楚。可以先给出主题句（例如“我从父母和老师那里学会了礼貌”），然后用一两句具体例子说明学到的礼貌行为。纠正语法错误（如时态、代词、动词形式）并使用衔接词使句子更连贯。

例: I learned to be polite from my parents and my school teachers. For example, my parents always taught me to greet people with a friendly "hello" and my teachers encouraged me to say "please" and "thank you" when asking for help. These habits became part of my daily routine.

提案: 回答要更简洁并使用具体原因支持观点，避免模糊或不合逻辑的短语（如“emerged imagination”）。先给出明确立场，再用一到两条具体原因或结果支撑。注意词汇搭配（"make others have a good impression of me"）。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important. It helps me build good relationships because polite behaviour shows respect and makes a positive impression on others, which can be useful at work and in daily life.

提案: 回答需要更具体并避免重复和含糊表达。先给出总括性答案（例如“应该在所有场合”或“在公共场合尤其”），然后列举一两个具体场景并说明原因。减少重复词（如两次“I think”）并注意语法。

例: I believe we should be polite in all situations, especially in public places and at work. For example, being courteous on public transport and respectful during meetings helps maintain harmony and shows consideration for others.

提案: 回答应更准确地描述具体行为并纠正语言错误。避免说不清楚的词（如“skills me”或“send you”）。给出1–2个清晰的具体例子，例如用“May I...”请求帮助或用“Thank you”表达感谢，注意礼貌用语的正确形式。

例: As a child I used simple polite phrases. For instance, I would say "May I borrow your pen?" when I needed one, and I always said "Thank you" whenever someone helped me.

× I'm learning from my parents and school teachers just when I see others I will say hello and if someone make favor to me I will say to you like this.

✓ I learned from my parents and school teachers. When I saw others, I would say hello, and if someone did me a favor, I would say thank you.

句子中时态混乱。题目问过去如何学习有礼貌，应使用过去时（learned, saw, did）或过去习惯（would）。原句中使用现在进行时和将来时（I'm learning, I will say）不符合上下文。建议：根据问题时态统一使用过去式或过去习惯表达，例如使用 learned, would, did。

× I think being polite is a basic skill to live in society and this can help me make other people have a good image emerged imagination to me.

✓ I think being polite is a basic skill for living in society and it helps me make a good impression on other people.

原句中搭配错误和词序混乱（make other people have a good image emerged imagination to me），“make a good impression on someone”是正确搭配。并且“basic skill to live in society”应改为“basic skill for living in society”。建议记住常用搭配：make a good impression on sb.，basic skill for doing sth。

× In my personal opinion I think in every time it being producted is an important point to me even to my close friend or my family, I think I think sometimes it's very important.

✓ In my opinion, it is important to be polite at all times, even with close friends and family. I think it's very important.

原句结构混乱，存在冗余（in my personal opinion I think, I think I think）和错误短语（every time it being producted）。应简化并使用正确表达：at all times = 在任何时候；be polite = 有礼貌。建议避免重复表达，先构思句子主干再补细节。

× Well, in a basic basic way just if I want to ask someone to help me I would say it skills me May I borrow your pants like this or if someone do me a favour I would say send you

✓ Well, basically, if I wanted to ask someone to help me, I would say, "May I borrow your pen?" And if someone did me a favour, I would say, "Thank you."

原句中时态、词汇和拼写错误（want → wanted; do → did; pants 应为 pen?；send you 错误应为 thank you）。题目询问过去，应用过去或过去习惯（would, wanted, did）。建议：注意时态一致性，检查常用礼貌用语（May I borrow your pen? Thank you.）并注意单词拼写。