Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答结构基本正确，但存在多处语言不准确、重复和词汇使用不当（例如“save”“bring prize themselves”），以及填充词较多。建议：1) 用一到两句主题句直接回答（例如“我从父母那里学会的”）；2) 用1–2句具体细节支持（说明具体行为或例子）；3) 减少“uh/umm”等口头填充词；4) 使用准确的词汇和短语，如 “say please and thank you”，“set a good example”。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always told me to say “please” and “thank you” and set a good example by greeting others politely, which I practiced at home and school.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误（如“a good impressions”，“rightful to others”）和多余填充词。建议：1) 开门见山给出立场句；2) 用1–2个具体原因或结果支持观点，注意单复数和搭配；3) 用连词使句子更连贯（because, so, therefore）。

例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it creates a positive first impression and shows respect for other people. For example, arriving on time and greeting someone warmly can make meetings more pleasant.

提案: 回答含糊且结构混乱，词汇错误（如“it should be praise”），没有清晰列出场景。建议：1) 先给出总括性句子（We should be polite in many situations），2) 列出2–3具体场合并用连接词衔接；3) 使用准确短语如 “first meetings”, “formal events”, “family gatherings”。

例: We should be polite in many situations, especially when meeting someone for the first time, at formal events or job interviews, and when visiting friends or family. Being polite helps build trust and good relationships.

提案: 回答有真实内容，但有明显语法和词汇错误（如“sat please and thank you”，“wealth manners”），句子不流畅。建议：1) 用一到两句描述具体行为（e.g., saying please/thank you, helping elders）；2) 用连接词说明频率或结果（often, always, which made me）；3) 改正常见搭配错误（good manners, show respect）。

例: As a child I always said “please” and “thank you” to my parents, teachers and other adults, and I tried to help around the house to show respect. These habits became natural over time.

× And I think I learned to be polite as a child, mostly from my parents because my parents always told me to be polite, such as save, uh, please and thank yous to others, uh, and they bring prize themselves.

✓ I think I learned to be polite as a child, mostly from my parents because they always told me to use words like "please" and "thank you" and set an example themselves.

句子结构混乱，重复“my parents”，且短语“such as save”不合适，应该用“words like”并列举礼貌用语；“they bring prize themselves”语法错误且含义不明，改为“set an example themselves（他们以身作则）”。建议：避免重复主体，使用清晰的并列结构，并用常见表达如"set an example"。

× I believe being polite is very significant umm because good manners will set a good impressions while meeting others for the first time.

✓ I believe being polite is very important because good manners make a good impression when meeting others for the first time.

使用时态和词形错误：“set a good impressions”中“impressions”应为单数“impression”，且“set a good impression”比“set a good impressions”更自然；另外“significant”语感可以换为更常用的“important”。建议：注意可数名词单复数及搭配用法，常用固定短语比逐字翻译更自然。

× And being polite is very rightful to others.

✓ And being polite shows respect to others.

“rightful”用法不当，这里要表达“对别人有礼貌/表示尊重”，应使用短语“show(s) respect to”。建议：不要把中文“有道理/正确”直译为“rightful”；选择符合语境的动词短语如“show respect”。

× Umm, in my opinions I think umm when meeting others for the first time it should be praise and an in very uh, important meeting or umm. Such.

✓ In my opinion, we should be polite when meeting others for the first time and during important meetings.

句子结构混乱且重复“in my opinions / I think”，短语“it should be praise”不合适，应为“we should be polite”；“an in very important meeting”语序和冠词错误，应为“during important meetings”。建议：简化表达，去掉重复成分，使用正确介词（during）和单复数形式。

× Umm when I was a child I sat umm please and thank you to adults and teachers and my parents.

✓ When I was a child I said "please" and "thank you" to adults, teachers, and my parents.

动词形式错误“sat”应为“said”；这是典型的动词用法错误（不在列表的其他类别则归入动词+ -ing或动词形式问题），应使用过去式said来符合过去时。建议：注意常见动词的发音与拼写差异，区分seat/sat/said等。

× Umm taught me to be wealth manners and I try my best to do that.

✓ My parents taught me good manners, and I tried my best to follow them.

句子缺少主语“my parents”，短语“wealth manners”错误（应为“good manners”或“polite manners”），时态应与前句一致使用过去时“taught/ tried”。建议：补全主语，使用正确的名词短语并保持时态一致。