Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 注意句子结构和时态一致性，避免语法错误与冗余表达。可以先用主题句直接回答（例如：I learned politeness from my parents），然后用1-2个简短具体细节支持。注意冠词、动词短语和词序（例如：“by example”而不是“by examples”，以及“they led by example”）。

例: I learned to be polite from my parents. They led by example, greeting elders respectfully and teaching me to speak slowly and softly to strangers. As a result, I naturally adopted these habits.

提案: 回答要更直接并修正词汇搭配错误（例如“implied”应为“implicitly”或删掉），避免重复并用连接词使逻辑更清晰。用具体例子说明结果但要注意句子简洁。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and builds good relationships. For example, greeting classmates politely at school creates a friendly atmosphere and makes people more willing to cooperate.

提案: 回答要避免罗列过多项而造成冗长，注意主谓一致（例如“reflects”与“shows”都要用第三人称单数），并完成句子结尾。可先给出概括答案，再用1-2个具体场景支持。

例: We should be polite in many situations, such as in public places, at work, when meeting elders, or meeting someone for the first time. Politeness reflects respect and good character, which helps create a positive and harmonious atmosphere.

提案: 句子可以更自然并注意固定搭配（例如“say please and thank you”“offer help to elderly people”）。将细节按逻辑用连词连接，并保证不超过5个句子。

例: As a child, I usually spoke in a soft, polite voice to classmates, teachers and strangers. I would say “please” and “thank you,” and sometimes offer help to elderly people to show respect.

× My parents taught me to speak to strangers politely by speaking in slow and softer voice and they usually let by examples.

✓ My parents taught me to speak to strangers politely by speaking in a slow, soft voice and they usually led by example.

错误类型：动词+ing 及形容词比较形式与固定搭配问题。说明：原句中“speaking in slow and softer voice”中使用了两种形容词形式（slow 与 softer）不一致，且应使用名词短语“a slow, soft voice”。另外“let by examples”是不正确的动词短语，应为“lead by example”（以身作则）。建议：将形容词统一为并列形式并使用冠词a；把短语改为固定搭配“lead by example（以身作则）”。

× For instance, they invite me and greet elders respectfully, which successfully formed me.

✓ For instance, they invited me and greeted elders respectfully, which successfully formed my habits.

错误类型：时态与句子结构问题。说明：前句描述的是过去的教育行为，应使用过去时（invited, greeted）。另外“formed me”表达不自然，应改为“formed my habits”或“shaped me”。建议：保持过去时态并使用更自然的宾语表达，例如“formed my habits”或“shaped my behavior”。

× I think we implied it very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships, for example, greeting people politely at school can greet a friendly atmosphere and make others more willing to cooperate with you.

✓ I think we imply it is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships; for example, greeting people politely at school can create a friendly atmosphere and make others more willing to cooperate with you.

错误类型：代词/动词搭配与词汇选择不当。说明：原句中“we implied it very important”用词错误，应为“we imply it is very important”或“I think it is very important”。此外“greeting... can greet a friendly atmosphere”中动词重复且用词错误，应该用“create a friendly atmosphere”。建议：把“implied”改为“imply/is”以表达现在时观点；把第二个“greet”改为“create”。

× In my opinion, people should be polite on many occasions, for example, in public places at work, when they're meeting elders or when they're meeting someone for the first time. Being polite reflects respect for others and show your good character which helps create a positive atmosphere and smooth

✓ In my opinion, people should be polite on many occasions, for example, in public places, at work, when they're meeting elders, or when they're meeting someone for the first time. Being polite reflects respect for others and shows your good character, which helps create a positive atmosphere and smooth interactions.

错误类型：介词使用与主谓一致及句子未完成。说明：原句“in public places at work”需要用逗号分隔并区分介词短语“in public places, at work”。另外“Being polite... and show”主谓不一致，should be “and shows”。句子末尾“and smooth”不完整，应补全为“and smooth interactions”或类似词。建议：调整介词短语并修正主谓一致，补全不完整的名词短语。

× When I was a child, I usually spoke to my classmates and teachers and strangers in a soft polite voice.

✓ When I was a child, I usually spoke to my classmates, teachers, and strangers in a soft, polite voice.

错误类型：时态使用正确，但标点与并列结构问题。说明：原句时态（过去）正确，但并列名词之间缺少必要的逗号，形容词顺序应为“soft, polite”或“soft polite”之间用逗号更清晰。建议：在并列名词间加逗号并在形容词之间加逗号以提高可读性。

× I also tried to use polite words like please thank you and sometimes offer the help to other elderly people to show respect.

✓ I also tried to use polite words like "please" and "thank you", and sometimes offered help to elderly people to show respect.

错误类型：冠词/量词与时态问题。说明：原句缺少连词和标点，短语“offer the help to other elderly people”中“the help”不自然，改为“offered help to elderly people”。同时前半句应与过去时一致，用“offered”。建议：添加合适的连接词和标点，移除不必要的定冠词，并保持时态一致。