Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法与用词准确。尽量用一到两句主题句，然后补充具体细节。避免重复和多余词语，注意单复数、时态和固定搭配（例如 say thank you, become natural）。

例: When I was a child, my parents taught me basic manners like greeting people and saying thank you. For example, they always reminded me to say "hello" to guests and "thank you" to waiters, so these habits became natural to me.

提案: 回答要直接回应“是否重要”，先给出明确立场（Yes/No），然後用一到两句具体理由支持。注意用词准确（natural 不用作名词，应该是 natural to me）。避免重复前面内容。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For instance, saying "thank you" or greeting people makes social interactions smoother and more pleasant.

提案: 回答要更具体有条理，先给总体看法，再列举几个典型场合并用连接词说明原因。注意选择恰当词汇（elders, in public, in restaurants）并保持句子完整。

例: We should be polite in most situations, especially when meeting teachers, elders, or important guests. Also, it's important to be polite in public places like restaurants and shops because it shows respect and maintains a pleasant atmosphere.

提案: 回答需更清晰并纠正语法错误。先用一句话概括你做了什么，然后用具体例子说明。注意使用正确表达：wait to eat until elders start, say congratulations or wish them happy birthday。避免不完整短句。

例: As a child, I showed politeness by waiting to start eating until the elders began and by always wishing relatives a happy birthday. For example, at family dinners I would wait for my grandparents and say "Happy birthday" to them personally.

× Actually when I was a child, my parent told me some good manners like such as greeting people with hello and goodbye and see thanks to waiters and others to show respect while this is become nature.

✓ Actually when I was a child, my parents told me some good manners, such as greeting people with "hello" and "goodbye", and saying "thank you" to waiters and others to show respect, and this became natural.

句中使用单数“parent”不符合上下文，应为复数“parents”；“like such as”是冗余表达，保留 “such as”；“see thanks” 应为短语“saying thank you”；“while this is become nature” 时态和词形错误，改为过去式“became”并用形容词“natural”。建议：注意主语与上下文一致（单复数），避免冗余词，使用正确的动名词形式和形容词。

× So these habits became nature to me in daily life.

✓ So these habits became natural to me in daily life.

原句中“became nature”搭配错误，名词“nature”不可直接与“became”构成描述某人习惯变得如何，需用形容词“natural”。建议：关注动词后需跟适合的词类（形容词或名词短语），确保搭配正确。

× We should be polite on most occasions, especially when we meet someone special such as teachers, elders and so on.

✓ We should be polite on most occasions, especially when we meet someone special, such as teachers and elders.

原句中“such as teachers, elders and so on”中“and so on”在此冗余且口语化，可删去；另外“meet someone special such as teachers”语序微 awkward，加逗号更清晰。建议：省略多余短语，使用逗号分隔插入语以提高可读性。

× We should be polite on public like restaurants to keep.

✓ We should be polite in public places, such as restaurants.

原句中“on public”和“to keep”用法错误。应使用介词短语“in public”或“in public places”；“like restaurants”最好改为“such as restaurants”。末尾“to keep”无意义，需删除。建议：注意固定搭配（in public/in public places），避免残缺句尾。

× I still remember when I was a child, I often eat until the elders began to eat and always see some.

✓ I still remember that when I was a child, I often ate only after the elders began to eat and always saw some.

句中时态不一致：主句“I still remember”正确为现在时，但描述过去习惯的从句应使用过去时，故“eat”改为“ate”。而“until the elders began to eat”结构可保留，后半句“always see some”不明确且时态错误，应改为过去式“always saw some”（但语义仍不清晰）。建议：保持时态一致，过去习惯用过去时；确保句子表达明确，考虑将“see some”改为具体行为，如“say congratulations”或“said congratulatory words”。

× Congratulations words to them in their birthday.

✓ I congratulated them on their birthdays.

原句“Congratulations words”搭配不当，应使用动词“congratulate”或短语“congratulatory words”；“in their birthday”介词和单复数错误，正确为“on their birthdays”。建议：使用正确动词结构或名词短语，并使用固定介词“congratulate someone on something/ on their birthday(s)”。