Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答需要更直接、条理清楚且语法正确。先用一句主题句说明谁教你、怎样学会（直接回答问题），然后用一两句具体细节和连接词补充（例如举例说明父母如何纠正你、你如何练习）。避免不相关或不明确的短语，保持句子数不超过五句。

例: My mother taught me to be polite when I was a child. She always reminded me to say “please”, “thank you” and “excuse me”, and corrected me whenever I forgot. Because of her reminders, I practiced these phrases every day and they became a habit.

提案: 回答总体思路对，但表达不够自然且有词汇和搭配错误。先给出直接观点，然后用一至两句具体原因或例子支持。注意使用恰当词汇和搭配（例如 “build trust” 而不是 “buy trust”），并用连接词让论述连贯。

例: Yes, I believe being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps build good relationships. For example, polite behavior at work or on public transport can make people feel comfortable and create a more positive atmosphere.

× Play my alarm for five reminders, talk to me that activate selfie callback to others if I want to then to respect me.

✓ She set my alarm to remind me five times, talked to me about activating the selfie callback for others if I wanted to, and taught me to respect others.

句子结构混乱，多个动作无连接词且主语缺失或不一致。原句缺少明确主语（应为“She”），并且多个动词短语未按适当顺序或用连词连接。建议将句子拆分或用并列连词（and）与正确的从句结构连接，使主语和时态一致。

× She showed me to have like please thank you and excuse me and then correct me when I forgot to use them.

✓ She taught me to say “please,” “thank you,” and “excuse me,” and corrected me when I forgot to use them.

代词和动词搭配不当，原句中使用了不正确的动词结构（"showed me to have like"），以及动词时态和代词指代不清。应使用 teach/taught 表示教导，并用具体短语列举礼貌用语，同时将后半句改为过去时 corrected 与前文时态一致。

× So I practiced them every day.

✓ So I practiced them every day.

这句话本身语法正确，但需注意全文时态一致。学生在描述童年经历时应使用过去时（practiced 已为过去时），确认与前文（She taught... corrected...）一致，因此无需更改。

× For example, flight behavior can help buy trust and create a positive utmost daily.

✓ For example, polite behavior can help build trust and create a more positive daily atmosphere.

原句词汇与搭配错误（'flight behavior' 应为 'polite behavior'，'buy trust' 应为 'build trust'，'positive utmost daily' 语序和词不当）。句子结构和词语选择混乱，需替换为常用搭配并调整词序，使意思明确。