Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give specific details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word choices (e.g., “chewed” is wrong). Use varied vocabulary and keep answers to no more than five sentences.

例: I learned to be polite from my parents when I was a child. For example, they always reminded me to say “please” and “thank you” and to use polite phrases when I asked for something. Also, they taught me to greet elders respectfully and to excuse myself if I interrupted someone, so politeness became a habit.

提案: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and examples. Fix word choice and grammar (e.g., “product” → “skill” or “politeness”, “check with each other” unclear). Use linking words like “because” and “for example” to structure your answer and keep it concise.

例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it helps people build trust and make friends. For example, being polite makes a good first impression when you meet someone new, and saying sorry or thank you can prevent misunderstandings and improve relationships.

× Yes, I have absolutely.

✓ Yes, absolutely.

The original sentence uses 'I have absolutely' which is an incorrect pronoun and auxiliary combination; 'have' is unnecessary. Use the adverb 'absolutely' alone to agree with the question. Suggestion: reply with a simple adverb or a complete clause like 'Yes, I have.' if intending present perfect.

× I learned polite when I chewed for my parents.

✓ I learned to be polite when I was praised by my parents.

The sentence has incorrect verb choice 'chewed' and missing infinitive 'to be'. 'Chewed' is wrong contextually; likely intended 'praised' or 'taught'. Also 'learned polite' should be 'learned to be polite'. Suggestion: use correct verb and 'learned to' plus adjective or verb phrase.

× My parents always tell me I should keep polite with other people's.

✓ My parents always told me I should be polite to other people.

Problems: tense inconsistency (present 'tell' vs past learning; use 'told'), incorrect phrase 'keep polite' should be 'be polite', incorrect preposition 'with' should be 'to', and possessive 'people's' is wrong; use plural 'people'. Suggestion: 'My parents always told me to be polite to other people.'

× For example, if I ask someone's question I should I should say please and thank you.

✓ For example, if I ask someone a question, I should say 'please' and 'thank you'.

Errors: redundant 'I should', incorrect possessive 'someone's question' should be 'someone a question', and punctuation for phrases. Suggestion: use correct noun phrase 'ask someone a question' and only one modal 'should' before the verb.

× Yes, the product is very important nowadays if you want to make more friends and where you want to find a girlfriend or or boyfriend, you must keep a polite and to check with each other and you can have a good relationships.

✓ Yes, politeness is very important nowadays. If you want to make more friends or find a girlfriend or boyfriend, you must be polite and considerate of each other, and you can have good relationships.

Many issues: 'the product' is incorrect word choice; should be 'politeness'. 'Where you want' is incorrect conjunction; use 'or'. 'Keep a polite' is wrong—use 'be polite'. 'To check with each other' is awkward; 'considerate of each other' fits. 'a good relationships' mixes article and plural; use 'good relationships' without 'a'. Suggestion: use correct noun 'politeness', proper conjunctions, 'be polite', and match article and plural forms.