Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 用更准确和自然的词汇，修复拼写和语法错误，并在一句话中直接回答问题，然后用一到两句具体细节支持。避免重复和冗长。比如将“plighted”更正为“taught”，将“grate people”更正为“treat people”。同时注意时态一致（过去习惯用过去式或过去进行时）。

例: My parents taught me to be polite from a young age. They always encouraged me to say "please" and "thank you," and my mother made me say thank you after every meal. We also practiced apologizing when I made mistakes, so being polite became a habit.

提案: 内容清楚但可以更自然、稍作扩展并使用连接词提升连贯性。保持答案在最多五句内，增加一个具体例子或结果，并使用更地道的表达（例如 use "foster good relationships"代替"get along"）。注意逻辑连接词如“therefore”、“as a result”。

例: Yes, I believe politeness is very important because it helps foster good relationships and prevents misunderstandings. For instance, when I say "please" and "thank you" at work, my colleagues are more willing to support me, so we can complete tasks more smoothly.

× While I learned to be plighted mainly from my parents, they always told me to say please and thank you and they showed me how to grate people.

✓ Although I learned to be polite mainly from my parents, they always told me to say "please" and "thank you," and they showed me how to treat people.

句子使用了错误的连词和拼写：原句用While开头但后面主句逻辑不清，并且单词 'plighted' 和 'grate' 用错了（应为 polite 和 treat）。改为 Although 更符合表示让步的语气，修正拼写并加入引号和逗号以提高可读性。建议：注意连词用法（While/Although）以及常用词拼写，写完后检查是否为正确词。

× For example, my mum made me say thank you after meals and we practice apologizing when we made mistakes so now it's a habit.

✓ For example, my mum made me say "thank you" after meals, and we practiced apologizing when we made mistakes, so now it's a habit.

句中时态不一致：先用过去时 'made' 描述过去的习惯，随后却用现在时 'practice' 和过去时 'made' 混用，导致时态混乱。把 'practice' 改为过去式 'practiced'（或 'practised' 英式拼法）以与前文过去时一致。建议：描述过去发生的事情时，保持动词时态一致。

× ...they showed me how to grate people.

✓ ...they showed me how to treat people.

这里 'grate' 是错误动词，正确应为 'treat'（对待）。这是词汇搭配问题，属于介词/动词选择错误，需使用正确动词以表达“如何对待别人”。建议：注意常见固定搭配，如 'treat people'。

× When I say please and thank you at work, my colleagues are more willing to help me and so I always try to apply this in public.

✓ When I say "please" and "thank you" at work, my colleagues are more willing to help me, so I always try to apply this in public.

原句总体时态正确，但连接词使用有轻微冗余（'and so'）并且缺少必要逗号以分隔分句。将 'and so' 简化为 'so' 更自然，并在从句间加逗号。建议：使用恰当的连词并在复合句中用逗号提高可读性。