Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (tenses, articles, word forms) and use linking words like “because” or “by” to make the answer coherent. Keep it concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). For example, say who influenced you and one concrete habit you copied. Avoid unclear phrases such as “address childhood” or “environmental effect.”

例: I learned to be polite mainly by copying my parents and teachers. For example, my mother always said “please” and “thank you,” so I started using those words at home and school. Because my teachers praised polite behaviour, I kept practicing it in front of others.

提案: Start with a clear opinion sentence, then give specific reasons and a short example. Fix grammar (use “is very important,” “affects,” “relationships”) and use linking words such as “because,” “so,” or “for example” to organize ideas. Keep answers natural and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences: opinion + reason/example.

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it creates respect and trust between people. For example, if colleagues speak politely to each other, they are more likely to cooperate, which strengthens their working relationships.

× I did not learn to be polite at address childhood, but I just copying my parents and teachers and some environmental effect also makes me polite.

✓ I did not learn to be polite at school as a child, but I just copied my parents and teachers, and my environment also made me polite.

Errors: incorrect phrase 'at address childhood' (wrong words and structure), incorrect verb form 'copying' instead of past tense 'copied', and incorrect noun phrase 'environmental effect' and verb agreement 'makes' with past context. Suggestion: Use correct nouns ('school' or 'as a child') and past tense verbs to match 'did not learn'; join ideas with commas and use 'environment' or 'my environment also made me polite' for clarity.

× Yes, I think being polite with very important especially nowadays everyone when everyone speak politely is good.

✓ Yes, I think being polite is very important, especially nowadays when everyone speaks politely it is good.

Errors: wrong structure 'being polite with very important' (should be 'is very important'), missing comma, and subject-verb agreement 'everyone speak' should be 'everyone speaks'. Suggestion: Use 'is' after gerund phrase and ensure singular subjects like 'everyone' take singular verbs.

× The fact it it effect good on other people and makes makes relation more strong.

✓ The fact is that it has a good effect on other people and makes relationships stronger.

Errors: duplicated words 'it it' and 'makes makes', missing linking verb 'is' and incorrect phrase order 'effect good' and 'relation more strong'. Suggestion: Use 'The fact is that' to introduce a clause, use 'has a good effect', pluralize 'relationships', and use comparative adjective 'stronger'.