Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 内容清晰且回答直接，但有语法和表达不够自然的地方，影响流畅度与准确性。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回应问题（例如：I learned politeness mainly from my family and school）。2) 注意语法和词序（如去掉多余词汇“many”，把“I learned”放在正确位置）。3) 用连接词使回答更连贯（e.g. Besides, In addition）。4) 提供一两个具体例子或短细节（例如家长如何强调礼貌或一次课堂活动），但保持不超过5句。练习时可反复朗读并改正常见错误。

例: I learned politeness mainly from my parents and my primary school. My parents always told me to say “please” and “thank you” and never to interrupt when someone else is speaking. In primary school, teachers organized lessons and role-playing activities that taught us to respect classmates and elders. Together, these examples helped me form polite habits.

提案: 回答表达态度明确但存在较多语法错误、停顿词和模糊短语，影响评分。建议：1) 去掉冗余填充词（如 “Oh”, “you know”, “uh”）。2) 使用正确的动词短语（例如 “act polite” 应为 “act politely” 或 “be polite”）。3) 用一到两个清晰理由支持观点，并用连接词（because, for example）连接。4) 给出具体文化或个人例子来增加说服力，保持不超过5句。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect and helps people get along. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make everyday interactions smoother. In China, politeness is often seen as part of good character and can affect personal and professional relationships.

× While many I learned good manners from my parents when I was little, they told me to say please and thank you all the time and not to interrupt others while they are talking.

✓ When I was little, I learned good manners from my parents; they told me to say "please" and "thank you" all the time and not to interrupt others while they were talking.

原句中開頭的 "While many I" 結構不正確，造成句子片段（屬於句子結構錯誤）並且影響整體表達。根據題單中允許修正的類型（主要為單數複數或結構類），此處修為完整正確句型：把雜亂片段刪除並重組為正確的時間狀語從句和主要分句。此外將 "are talking" 改為過去進行時 "were talking"，與主句過去時態一致。建議：注意句子開頭不要遺漏主語或連接詞，保持時態一致。

× Oh, absolutely. Oh, I think people should be act polite because that will show their good manners to others and could show their respective to others.

✓ Oh, absolutely. I think people should act politely because that will show their good manners to others and could show their respect for others.

原句存在多處問題：1) "should be act polite" 結構錯誤，應為 "should act politely"（情態動詞+動詞原形，並使用副詞修飾動詞）。這屬於動詞搭配與副詞/形容詞使用錯誤（依照題單為現在時/副詞錯誤處理為“Present tense issue”或“Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”）。2) "could show their respective to others" 用詞錯誤，應為 "show their respect for others"。3) 保持時態與語氣：使用情態動詞should後接原形動詞。建議：學習情態動詞用法（should + 動詞原形），區分形容詞與副詞（polite→politely），常用搭配為 "show respect for someone"。

× And you know, in China applied it's a very important trait about some personal, uh, characters.

✓ And you know, in China, it's considered a very important personal trait.

原句語序混亂且用詞不當："in China applied" 與 "about some personal, uh, characters" 都是不正確或冗贅的表達。將句子重組為自然的英語表達："in China, it's considered a very important personal trait." 此修改屬於句子結構錯誤和用詞選擇（根據題單屬於“Sentence structure errors”）。建議：說話時先構思完整句子，避免插入不必要的單詞；學習常用搭配，如 "considered a... trait" 或 "an important personal quality/characteristic"。