Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 针对此回答的改进建议： 1) 明确主题句并直接回答问题（例如："I learned politeness from my parents."），避免重复和语音停顿。2) 使用连贯的支持细节说明如何学习（例如：父母的言传身教、具体习惯如说“thank you”和“please”、被提醒的情境）。3) 使用连接词（because, so, for example）使句子流畅。4) 注意代词和时态的一致性，避免发音错误（例如 pilot→polite）。5) 控制答案长度，不超过5句，保持自然。

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always reminded me to say “thank you” and “please” when I spoke to others, and corrected me gently if I forgot. For example, when I didn’t say thank you after receiving a gift, my mother would point it out and explain why manners matter. Because they modeled polite behavior themselves, I naturally followed their example and developed good habits.

提案: 针对此回答的改进建议： 1) 直接回答考官问题（例如："Yes, I think it is very important."）。2) 用1–2个具体理由支持观点（例如：展示尊重、促进人际关系、帮助沟通），并使用连接词（because, so, therefore）。3) 避免重复和口头禅，保持句子简洁且语法正确。4) 提供具体例子或结果来丰富内容（例如：在学校或工作中的实际效果）。5) 控制长度在最多5句内。

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it shows respect for other people and helps build good relationships. For example, saying “please” and “thank you” can make conversations smoother and reduce conflicts at work or school. Therefore, politeness often leads to better cooperation and a friendlier environment.

× I learned to be piloted mainly from my parents that always told me to, they always told me to say thank you and, uh, uh, thank you and uh, please, uh, uh, when I forgot her, that will remind me, uh, that always.

✓ I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They always told me to say "thank you" and "please". When I forgot, they would remind me.

问题类型：12（代词使用不当）。 解释：原句中代词和指代混乱：用“that”指代“parents”不自然，且把“her”用来指父母不合适。时态和句子连接也有问题。建议使用明确的主语“they”来指代父母，并把句子拆成几句以提高清晰度；把“piloted”改为正确形容词“polite”。同时将将来/习惯性动作用过去常态或过去习惯表达（they would remind me）。 改进建议：在英文中用代词指代前面名词时要确保人称正确（parents→they），避免用不相关的代词（her）。把冗长句拆分，选择正确词汇（polite）。

× They also acted themselves. So I follow them. Ex.

✓ They also led by example, so I followed them.

问题类型：26（句子结构错误）。 解释：原句“acted themselves”是直译错误，正确表达为“led by example”（以身作则）。时态应与前文一致（过去习惯/过去经历），因此“follow”应改为过去式“followed”。另外“Ex.”无意义应删除。 改进建议：学习固定搭配（lead by example）并注意时态一致性。

× I sync a beam.

✓ I think the same.

问题类型：12（代词使用不当/错误单词）。 解释：原句可能是想说“I think the same”或“I think so”，但使用了错误的词“sync a beam”。应使用“I think so”或“I agree”。 改进建议：避免错误拼写或错误词汇，常用表达“I think so”或“I agree”。

× I single beam poetry is very important because because being Poly be being polytor is it shows respect to others and and they can help they can helps people, they can helps people and other people get along better, get along better and.

✓ I think being polite is very important because it shows respect to others and can help people get along better.

问题类型：13（形容词或副词使用不当）及27（主谓一致/动词形式）混合，但按要求仅列主要类型13处理。 解释：原句中大量词汇错误与重复（single beam poetry, Poly, polytor）应改为“being polite”。冗余的结构和动词形式错误（they can helps → can help）应修正。使用“it shows”替代不清楚的结构。句子应简洁表达因果关系。 改进建议：注意形容词/名词搭配（being polite），避免重复词，确保情态动词后用动词原形（can help），并用代词“it”指代前述行为。