Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap daha net ve gramatik olarak doğru olmalı. İlk cümlede doğrudan soruyu yanıtlayın (ör. kim/nereden öğrendiniz), sonra kısa destekleyici detay verin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleler arasında akış sağlayın. Ayrıca telaffuz ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin: 'teached' yanlış, doğru fiil 'taught'; 'polar' yerine 'polite' veya 'as polite' kullanılmalı; 'nowadays people aren't polite' gibi açık ifade daha uygun. Cevap 3-4 kısa cümleyle sınırlı olmalı ve gereksiz tekrarlar çıkarılmalı.

例: I learned to be polite mainly from my parents. They taught me basic manners like saying “please” and “thank you”, and they corrected me when I spoke rudely. Also, I observed my teachers and friends and tried to copy good behavior, so I gradually learned more social skills.

提案: Cevap doğrudan evet/hayır ile başlamalı ve nedenini net gerekçelerle desteklemeli. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin: 'communicate with people's' yanlış; doğru form 'communicate with people'. Tekrarlardan kaçının ve bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış oluşturun (ör. 'because', 'for example', 'so'). Detay verin: ne tür durumlarda nezaket önemlidir ve hangi sonuçları doğurur. Cevap 2-4 cümle yeterli olacak.

例: Yes, I think being polite is very important because it makes communication smoother and reduces misunderstandings. For example, using polite language at work helps build good relationships and trust. Therefore, politeness often leads to more positive interactions and better cooperation.

× Maybe my mom and my dad teached me to be polite, but I learned by myself too.

✓ Maybe my mom and my dad taught me to be polite, but I learned by myself too.

The verb 'teach' has an irregular past tense form 'taught', not 'teached'. Use 'taught' to form the simple past. Suggestion: learn common irregular verb forms (teach–taught, go–went, have–had) and practice by making sentences in past tense.

× And politeness isn't that hard.

✓ And being polite isn't that hard.

The speaker used the noun 'politeness' where a gerund phrase or adjective phrase fits better after 'and'. 'Being polite' more naturally continues the idea of learning to be polite. Suggestion: after verbs like 'is' or expressions describing a state, use 'being + adjective' or the noun that best fits the context.

× But nowadays people aren't polar.

✓ But nowadays people aren't polite.

'Polar' is unrelated and incorrect here; the intended adjective is 'polite'. Use the correct adjective to convey manners. Suggestion: check word meanings when unsure; 'polite' describes manners, 'polar' relates to poles or opposites.

× Yes, it is because we usually communicate with people's and socializing with them.

✓ Yes, it is because we usually communicate with people and socialize with them.

'People's' is a possessive form and incorrect here; use the plural noun 'people'. Also the coordinated verbs need parallel forms: 'communicate' and 'socialize' should both be base verbs. Suggestion: remove inappropriate apostrophes and keep verb forms parallel in lists.

× And that is significant for communicate with people.

✓ And that is significant for communicating with people.

After 'significant for' the gerund 'communicating' is required, not the base verb 'communicate'. Use the gerund after prepositions. Suggestion: when a verb follows a preposition (for, by, in), use the -ing form (gerund).