Politeness— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答基本能传达意思，但存在语法错误、停顿填充词过多、句子不够自然且有措辞不当（如“good resident to be applied”不通）。应减少“uh”等犹豫语，使用完整正确的时态与短句，并用连接词使结构更清晰。可以先给主题句，然后用两到三句支持细节，举例或说明人物具体行为。

例: I learned to be polite mainly at school and at home. At primary school, my teachers taught us simple manners like saying "please" and "thank you" and reminded us to take turns. At home, my parents set an example by being respectful to others and often corrected my rude behaviour.

提案: 答案观点明确，但语法和措辞有些错误（如“if we are all be polite”应为“if we are all polite”），且有重复和填充词。应用一至两句支持理由并用连接词组织，如给出结果或举例。尽量用更准确的词汇（warmer → more harmonious）并避免冗余。

例: Yes, I think politeness is very important because it creates a more harmonious society. When people are polite, they are more willing to help one another, and everyday interactions, like asking for directions or resolving a disagreement, become much smoother.

× Well, I learned to be polite as a child in two ways. First, I, uh, learn some, uh, good manners in primary school and teachers teach me, uh, how to be polite to others.

✓ Well, I learned to be polite as a child in two ways. First, I learned some good manners in primary school and my teachers taught me how to be polite to others.

错误类型：现在时使用不当（Present tense issue）。说明：原句中“learn”与“teachers teach me”使用了一般现在时，但句子开头已经用过去时“learned”说明这是在回忆过去的事，时态应一致改为过去时。建议：把句中动词改为过去式：learn → learned，teach → taught；同时加上所有格my以明确主语。

× And in addition, my parents also told me to be a good resident to be applied.

✓ And in addition, my parents also told me to be a good citizen and to be respectful to others.

错误类型：形容词/副词使用不当（Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs）。说明：原句“good resident to be applied”语义不通，likely是想表达“做一个好公民并且有礼貌/尊重别人”。建议：用常见搭配good citizen（好公民）并补上具体行为短语，如to be respectful to others。保持过去时态 told me。

× Definitely. I think being polite is very important because if we are all be polite, uh, the society will be warmer and we can help each other and the communication, uh, will be closer.

✓ Definitely. I think being polite is very important because if we are all polite, society will be warmer, we can help each other, and communication will be closer.

错误类型：现在时使用不当（Present tense issue）。说明：句中“If we are all be polite”包含多余的助动词be，应使用表状态的形容词结构“If we are all polite”。另外“the society”中the不必要，通常说“society”表示整个社会。建议：去掉多余的“be”，删去“the”，并把并列部分简化为并列分句，保持现在时一致。