Paper— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümle yapısını düzeltin ve doğrudan soruya yanıt verin; zaman uyumuna ve kelime seçimine dikkat edin. Kısa, net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından bir veya iki destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Örneğin 'prefer make plan' yerine 'preferred making plans' veya 'I preferred folding paper into simple shapes' gibi doğru fiil formlarını kullanın. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrar ve karışık ifadelerden kaçının.

例: I didn’t really make paper crafts; I preferred using paper to make simple plans and lists. For example, as a student I often wrote weekly schedules on paper because it helped me stay organized.

提案: Cümleyi doğrudan ve gramatik olarak doğru kurun; 'used to prefer make plain' gibi hataları düzeltin. Nedenini açık ve belirgin bağlaçlarla (because, so) verin, ama tekrarları ve anlamsal belirsizlikleri giderin. Ayrıca 3–4 cümleyi geçmemeye çalışın ve bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın.

例: As a child I preferred making simple paper plans and drawings because they were easier than crafts. Craft projects felt complicated and required patience, so I rarely tried them.

提案: Kısa ve net yanıt verin, ardından bir sebep açıklayın. 'writing by pan is. Modest.' gibi belirsiz ve yanlış ifadelerden kaçının. 'In this modern life' yerine 'Nowadays' veya 'These days' kullanın. 'Everybody' yerine 'most people' daha doğal olabilir. Ayrıca yazım araçlarını doğru ifade edin: 'by pen' değil 'with a pen'.

例: No, I don’t write physical letters these days because most people prefer texting; it’s faster and everyone has a smartphone. I only write handwritten notes occasionally for special occasions.

提案: Daha detaylı ve yapılandırılmış cevap verin: genel durumdan başlayıp kişisel görüşe bağlayın. 'Official places' yerine 'official institutions' veya 'formal settings' gibi daha uygun ifadeler kullanın. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı geçiş sağlayın ve kısa örnek verin.

例: Handwritten letters are quite rare nowadays. In formal settings like official institutions people may still use letters, but personally I prefer texting on my phone because it’s more convenient.

提案: Cümleleri net ve doğal kurun; 'I don't prefer to' tekrarından ve dilbilgisi hatalarından kaçının. Doğrudan cevap verin, sebep gösterin ve kısa örnek verin. 'in outside' yanlış, doğru kullanım 'when I go out' veya 'outside' şeklinde olmalı. Ayrıca 'I carry my phone' olarak bitirin.

例: No, I usually don’t carry paper or a pen when I go out because I prefer to text on my phone. I always have my phone with me, so I use note apps if I need to write something down.

× Actually I used to prefer make plan from paper, not crafts.

✓ Actually I used to prefer making plans from paper, not crafts.

The verb 'prefer' when followed by a verb should be followed by the gerund form (-ing), so 'prefer making' is correct. Also 'plan' should be plural 'plans' to match general activities, and 'from paper' is more natural as 'from paper' or 'on paper'; choose 'from paper' here. Suggestion: use 'prefer + -ing' and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× I used to prefer make plain from paper because it is easier than making crafts for me.

✓ I used to prefer making planes from paper because it was easier for me than making crafts.

Again, 'prefer' requires a gerund: 'prefer making'. 'Plain' is likely a misspelling of 'plane' (paper airplane). Match tense: talking about childhood so past tense 'was' fits. Place comparative phrase 'for me' after the adjective and use parallel structure when comparing activities.

× Making crafts is so complicated, so tough, so I always prefer to.

✓ Making crafts was so complicated and tough, so I always preferred not to.

Maintain past tense with 'used to' context: use 'was' and 'preferred'. 'Prefer to' must be completed with an action or use 'preferred not to' to indicate avoidance. 'So' repeated is redundant; combine adjectives with 'and'. Suggestion: use clear negative form 'preferred not to' or complete 'preferred to make crafts' if positive.

× No, in this modern life everybody prefers to text because texting is easy and everybody has phones and writing by pan is. Modest.

✓ No, in modern life everybody prefers to text because texting is easy and everybody has phones, and writing by pen is rare.

Use present simple 'prefers' for general truth—this sentence already has present but has errors: 'in this modern life' is better as 'in modern life'. 'Pan' is a typo; correct to 'pen'. 'is. Modest.' is meaningless; likely intended 'is rare' or 'is uncommon'. Also combine clauses with commas for clarity.

× It's so rare actually. Maybe in the official places they prefer letter but for me, no.

✓ Handwritten letters are really rare now. Maybe in official places they prefer letters, but for me, no.

Use a clear subject 'Handwritten letters' rather than 'It'. 'They prefer letter' should be plural 'letters'. 'Official places' is fine but 'official settings' may be more natural. Keep verb agreement with plural noun: 'letters... prefer'.

× I prefer texting by phone.

✓ I prefer texting on my phone.

The correct preposition for using a device is 'on' (texting on my phone), not 'by'. Suggestion: use 'on my phone' or 'using my phone'.

× No, I don't prefer to carry paper or pen with me in outside because I don't prefer instead of I prefer text on my phone.

✓ No, I don't like to carry paper or a pen with me outside because I prefer to text on my phone.

Use 'like to' or 'prefer to' correctly; 'prefer to carry' is acceptable but original was awkward. 'in outside' is incorrect; use 'outside'. Include article 'a' for 'pen' when singular. Reduce redundancy: remove 'because I don't prefer instead of'. Use parallel structure: 'prefer to text on my phone'.

× Are carrying my phone.

✓ I carry my phone with me.

Fragment: 'Are carrying my phone.' is not a complete sentence and uses wrong auxiliary. Use simple present 'I carry my phone with me' to indicate habitual action. Suggestion: ensure subject and correct verb form are present to form a complete sentence.