Paper— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Clarify meaning, correct vocabulary and grammar, and give a brief supporting detail. Be natural and concise. For example, correct 'crabs with pepper' to what you meant (e.g., 'paper cranes' or 'paper crafts decorated with pepper') and use past tense consistently.

例: Yes. When I was younger I made many paper cranes, often folding them from coloured origami paper because I liked the bright patterns.

提案: Use past tense and add a short supporting detail with a linking word. Correct grammar (plural/singular) and keep under five sentences.

例: As a child I liked to make paper aeroplanes, and I often tested whose plane could fly the farthest in the playground.

提案: This is a good direct answer. To improve, add a brief reason or example using a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'for example') to enrich the response and show fluency.

例: Sometimes I still write physical letters, for example I send handwritten postcards to close friends when I travel.

提案: Avoid absolute statements and correct phrasing. Use modal verbs appropriately (e.g., 'may not') and give a specific reason or example. Keep it concise and coherent with a linking word.

例: I think fewer people keep handwritten letters today because most communication is digital, although some people still save important notes or cards.

提案: Expand slightly with one supporting reason or example using a linking word to make the answer more natural and informative. Keep it short.

例: No, I don't usually carry paper and pens because I use my phone for notes and reminders.

× Yes, I made many crabs with pepper.

✓ Yes, I made many crafts with paper.

The student's sentence uses incorrect words: 'crabs' and 'pepper' are wrong in context. The intended meaning is making paper crafts. This is a vocabulary/word choice error rather than a grammatical category from the provided list; treat it as 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' is not suitable, so we label it as an incorrect word choice. Suggestion: use 'crafts' for paper creations and 'paper' as the material. Keep the past tense 'made' to match the question.

× I like to make aeroplane with paper as a child.

✓ I liked to make aeroplanes with paper as a child.

The student uses present tense 'like' while referring to a past habit 'as a child', so tense is incorrect (matches ID 6 Present tense issue). Also 'aeroplane' should be plural 'aeroplanes' when speaking generally and 'with paper' needs no article. Suggestions: change 'like' to past 'liked' and pluralize 'aeroplane' to 'aeroplanes' to reflect habitual past action.

× Sometimes I still write physical letters.

✓ Sometimes I still write physical letters.

This sentence is grammatically correct and fits the present habitual context, so no correction is needed. Keep present simple 'write' for the habitual action. (Included to confirm it meets tense expectations.)

× I think people can't keep handwriting letters today.

✓ I think people don't keep handwritten letters today.

Errors: incorrect modal/auxiliary choice 'can't' implies impossibility rather than unlikely habit; 'handwriting letters' is wrong word form. Use 'don't' for a general negative statement and 'handwritten' (past participle) as the adjective describing letters. This matches ID 4 Modal verb usage and ID 9 Verb in the past participle form; primary correction addresses modal usage: replace 'can't' with 'don't', and change 'handwriting' to 'handwritten'. Suggestion: Use 'don't keep handwritten letters' for a general present-tense observation.

× No.

✓ No, I don't.

Single-word reply 'No' is grammatically acceptable in casual speech but incomplete as a full sentence answering 'Do you carry paper and pens with you when you go out?'. Provide a short negative clause 'No, I don't.' to include the verb and mirror the auxiliary from the question. This fits ID 26 Sentence structure errors because a full verbal response is preferred.