Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatical, concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., “easy to”). Use correct singular/plural and article use (a/an/the) and improve word choice (e.g., “designs” rather than “paintings”).

例: I usually wear T‑shirts because they are comfortable and low‑maintenance. For example, they’re easy to wash and quick to put on. I often pick shirts with interesting designs, and I choose colors that fit well and suit the occasion.

提案: Answer directly and then explain with a clear reason and a linking word. Use correct adjectives (e.g., “formal” instead of “beauty”) and clearer expressions (e.g., “difficult to maintain”). Avoid contradictory or unclear phrases.

例: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable for daily activities. For instance, I like T‑shirts and jeans rather than formal suits, which I find restrictive and harder to keep neat.

提案: Be precise and avoid unclear words (“wait”, “duddy”, “close up”). Give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct tense and vocabulary to describe preferences and activities.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T‑shirts, especially in summer, because they are lightweight and easy to wash. For example, I often wear a plain black T‑shirt when I go out or do sports because it’s practical and comfortable.

提案: Clarify the main idea: say whether you usually spend a lot of time and give clear reasons with linking words (e.g., “because”, “however”). Avoid vague phrases like “it's a justice.” Use precise vocabulary for shopping decisions.

例: Not usually. However, I sometimes spend more time choosing clothes if the item is expensive because I want to make sure it’s worth the price. Otherwise, I buy quickly when I find something I like.

提案: Give a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., “on weekdays… whereas on weekends…”). Use correct vocabulary (e.g., “formal” or “smart” instead of “beauty”) and avoid repetition. Be specific about typical outfits for each situation.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart, fitted shirts and trousers for work, whereas on weekends I prefer casual outfits like white jeans and T‑shirts for comfort and relaxation.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., “white ones” or “white clothes”), plural forms and avoid repetition. Give an example of how you style white clothing.

例: I like white clothes because they are versatile and match many other items. For example, a white shirt goes well with blue jeans, black trousers, or colored skirts, so it’s easy to create different outfits.

× I like t shirts because it is easy to wear and easy to wash and easy to choice.

✓ I like T-shirts because they are easy to wear, easy to wash, and easy to choose.

Problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement). The original uses singular pronoun 'it' to refer to plural 'T-shirts' and uses the noun 'choice' incorrectly as a verb. Use plural 'they' for T-shirts and parallel adjectives 'easy to wear, easy to wash, and easy to choose.' Use the verb 'choose' not the noun 'choice.'

× I focus on its paintings on shirts.

✓ I focus on the prints on the shirts.

Problem type: 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions) and 12 (Incorrect use of pronouns). 'Its paintings on shirts' is unclear and uses 'its' incorrectly; use 'the prints on the shirts' or 'the designs on shirts.' Preposition 'on' remains but restructure to 'prints on the shirts.'

× So it depends on my fitting I choose the color and pictures to wear outside.

✓ So, depending on how it fits me, I choose the color and the design to wear outside.

Problem types: 6 (Present tense / sentence structure) and 26 (Sentence structure errors). The original lacks connectors and has awkward phrasing. Use 'depending on how it fits me' and 'design' (or 'picture') and add commas to clarify meaning.

× I prefer to wear casual clothes.

✓ I prefer to wear casual clothes.

No correction needed: sentence is grammatical.

× I don't want to wear very tight and very beauty clothes such as suits or shirt, I hate it because it is easy to maintain its beauty.

✓ I don't want to wear very tight or very fancy clothes such as suits or shirts; I dislike them because they are hard to keep looking nice.

Problem types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs), 1 (Singular and plural issue), 27 (Subject-verb agreement). 'Very beauty' is incorrect adjective use; use 'very fancy' or 'formal.' 'Suits or shirt' should be plural 'shirts.' Pronoun reference 'it' should be 'them' for plural. 'Easy to maintain its beauty' is wrong meaning; change to 'hard to keep looking nice.'

× So I like casual ones such as t shirts and denim jeans.

✓ So I like casual items such as T-shirts and denim jeans.

Problem type: 1 (Singular and plural issue) and 12 (Pronoun use). 'Casual ones' is acceptable but 'items' is clearer; capitalize 'T-shirts.'

× Yes, I like wearing t shirts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

Problem type: 22 (Article/errors minimal). Primarily capitalization of 'T-shirts.' No major grammatical error.

× In summer I always wait because it is easy to choose, easy to wash and I can do many activities, I can be duddy.

✓ In summer I always wear them because they are easy to choose, easy to wash, and I can do many activities; I can be more casual.

Problem types: 26 (Sentence structure errors), 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives), 11 (Prepositions). 'Wait' is wrong verb here; likely 'wear.' 'It is' should agree with plural 'they/them.' 'be duddy' is ungrammatical; replace with 'be more casual.' Use semicolon or conjunction to join clauses.

× So I prefer to close up black t shirts.

✓ So I prefer plain black T-shirts.

Problem types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives), 18 (Incorrect order of adjectives). 'Close up' is wrong; likely 'plain' or 'close-fitting.' Use 'plain black T-shirts' or 'close-fitting black T-shirts' depending on meaning.

× Actually no, it takes a long time to choose it because if it is a little bit expensive, I don't want to waste money so I look carefully and choose it but sometimes only see I want to buy it.

✓ Actually, yes and no. Sometimes it takes a long time to choose clothes because if they are a bit expensive I don't want to waste money, so I look carefully before buying; but sometimes I buy something as soon as I see it.

Problem types: 27 (Subject-verb agreement), 1 (Singular/plural), 26 (Sentence structure errors). Use plural 'clothes' and 'they are.' Clarify contrast with 'yes and no' and restructure for natural flow. 'Only see I want to buy it' is ungrammatical; replace with 'buy as soon as I see it.'

× So it's a justice.

✓ So it's fair.

Problem type: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs / word choice). 'Justice' is a noun and not used correctly; 'fair' fits the intended meaning.

× Yes, if I go to the office, I usually wear the very tight tight ones such as very neat shirt or beauty pants, but on a weekend I wear the jeans white jeans and t shirts.

✓ Yes, if I go to the office, I usually wear very formal clothes such as a neat shirt or smart trousers, but on weekends I wear jeans and T-shirts.

Problem types: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives), 1 (Singular/plural), 18 (Order of adjectives). Remove repeated 'tight,' replace 'beauty pants' with 'smart trousers' or 'dress pants,' correct article 'a neat shirt,' and use 'on weekends.'

× It does say different ways.

✓ They look different.

Problem type: 26 (Sentence structure errors) and 12 (Pronoun use). 'It does say different ways' is ungrammatical; 'they look different' clearly expresses contrast between styles.

× I like white one because it is easy to fit two other closes.

✓ I like white ones because they are easy to match with other clothes.

Problem types: 1 (Singular and plural issue), 11 (Incorrect use of prepositions), 12 (Pronoun use). Use plural 'ones' for shirts, 'match with other clothes' instead of 'fit two other closes.'

× If I wear white shirts, I can choose every jeans, every pants, every trousers and the color doesn't doesn't much better I can choice everything.

✓ If I wear white shirts, I can choose any jeans, any pants, or any trousers, and the color doesn't clash much; I can choose almost anything.

Problem types: 14 (Incorrect use of quantifiers), 1 (Singular/plural), 13 (Adjective/adverb use), 26 (Sentence structure). Replace 'every' with 'any,' correct redundancy 'pants/trousers,' fix 'doesn't doesn't much better' to 'doesn't clash much,' and use 'choose' as a verb.

× So I like white one.

✓ So I like white ones.

Problem type: 1 (Singular and plural issue). Use plural 'ones' to refer to shirts in general.