Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và ngắn gọn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, rồi thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể có liên kết. Tránh lặp từ và sửa cấu trúc "on fashions" thành "fashion" hoặc "trends".

例: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than following fashion trends. For example, I often choose soft cotton shirts and loose trousers because they let me move freely and feel relaxed all day.

提案: Cần câu trả lời mạch lạc: nêu rõ ưu tiên chính và giải thích với liên từ hợp lý. Tránh lặp từ (comfortable/casual) và cụm từ thừa như "like for example". Nên dùng linking words (for instance, while) để nối ý.

例: I usually prefer comfortable clothes for everyday errands, while I choose casual but slightly smarter outfits for social occasions. For instance, I wear sneakers and jeans to the supermarket, but I might wear a neat shirt when meeting friends.

提案: Câu trả lời ngắn gọn, nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (kinds → kind; it's → they hoặc it is), và bổ sung 1 chi tiết cụ thể về lý do sử dụng T-shirt để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are simple and very versatile. For example, I often pair a plain T-shirt with jeans for a quick, comfortable outfit.

提案: Cần diễn đạt mạch lạc và tránh tiếngngập ngừng. Sắp xếp ý theo cấu trúc: trả lời trực tiếp, giải thích cách bạn tổ chức quần áo (ví dụ: vùng tủ đồ), và dùng từ đúng (your→my; partner→partner or date).

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes. I organize my wardrobe into sections — casual clothes for going out with friends and smarter outfits for dates or when I want to make a good impression.

提案: Câu trả lời lặp lại ý trước và thiếu so sánh cụ thể giữa ngày trong tuần và cuối tuần. Nên khẳng định có/không khác nhau rồi giải thích cụ thể với linking words (however, usually).

例: Mostly no — I don't follow fashion trends and I prioritize comfort. However, on weekends I might dress more casually for leisure, while on weekdays I sometimes wear slightly neater clothes for work or classes.

提案: Cần diễn đạt rõ ràng và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (a clothes → clothes / a piece of clothing). Nên sắp xếp danh sách màu sắc gọn gàng và giải thích vì sao chọn chúng bằng cụm từ liên kết như "because" hoặc "since" mà không dùng tiếng lắp.

例: I usually choose neutral colours such as white, black, grey and dark brown because they are practical and easy to match with other clothes.

× Honestly I'm not following any styles or on fashions, I just wear anything that my body can feel comfortable.

✓ Honestly I'm not following any styles or fashions; I just wear anything that makes my body feel comfortable.

Use of prepositions is incorrect ('on fashions' should be 'fashions' without 'on'). Also the clause 'my body can feel comfortable' is ungrammatical; use 'makes my body feel comfortable' or 'is comfortable for me'. Use a semicolon or period to separate independent clauses.

× I prefer both wearing comfortable clothes and casual clothes.

✓ I prefer both comfortable clothes and casual clothes.

The gerund 'wearing' is unnecessary after 'prefer' when followed by nouns. Remove 'wearing' to form a correct parallel structure.

× Like for comfortable clothes I usually wear it to like for example going to buy something at the supermarket and for the casual clothes I may wear it on a special occasion like hanging out with my friends.

✓ For comfortable clothes I usually wear them when I, for example, go to the supermarket; for casual clothes I may wear them on special occasions, like hanging out with my friends.

Use correct prepositions ('when I go to the supermarket' rather than 'to like for example going'). Pronoun agreement: 'clothes' is plural so use 'them' not 'it'. Use 'on special occasions' rather than 'on a special occasion' for general statements.

× I do like wearing T-shirts because it's like a simple kinds of clothes and it's highly applicable for everyday life.

✓ I do like wearing T-shirts because they're a simple kind of clothing and are very suitable for everyday life.

Subject-verb agreement and noun form: 'T-shirts' (plural) require 'they're', 'a simple kind' (singular) or 'simple kinds' must match. 'Clothes' is plural but 'a simple kinds' is incorrect. Use 'kind of clothing' or 'type of clothes'. 'Applicable' is awkward; 'suitable' is better.

× I don't spend much time on choosing clothes.

✓ I don't spend much time choosing clothes.

The preposition 'on' is unnecessary after 'spend time' when followed by a gerund. Use 'spend time choosing'.

× I have a separate part for a casual clothes where I can go out and hang out with your friends and apart a specific part of clothes where I can wear to make a good impression for the partner.

✓ I have a separate section for casual clothes that I can wear when I go out and hang out with my friends, and a separate set of clothes that I can wear to make a good impression on a partner.

Pronoun misuse ('your friends' should be 'my friends'). 'Part' is the wrong word; use 'section' or 'set'. Prepositions: 'make a good impression on someone' not 'for the partner'. Also correct sentence structure and parallelism.

× As I said, I'm not following any fashion trends.

✓ As I said, I don't follow any fashion trends.

While 'I'm not following' is grammatically possible, for habitual actions simple present 'I don't follow' is more appropriate. The present participle implies temporary action; use simple present for habits.

× I prefer choosing a clothes with the colour white or dark brown, uh, black or grey, because it's practical and ordinary.

✓ I prefer clothes in white, dark brown, black, or grey because they're practical and ordinary.

'A clothes' is incorrect; 'clothes' is plural and does not take 'a'. Use 'clothes in [colour]' or 'a piece of clothing in [colour]'. Also 'it's' mismatches plural; use 'they're'. 'Choosing' is unnecessary after 'prefer' when followed by nouns.