Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more organized and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details and a brief reason. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and word order.

例: I usually choose my clothes according to the occasion. For example, I wear dresses or shirts for special events like holidays, but on a normal day I prefer comfortable pants and a T‑shirt because they are practical and easy to move in.

提案: Good clear opinion and reason. Improve fluency by using linking words and correcting phrasing (e.g., 'dress or smart shirts' → 'dresses or smart clothes'). Keep it concise.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes. Since I often do outdoor activities, dresses or smart clothes feel restrictive, so I usually choose breathable shirts and trousers for comfort.

提案: Make your answer more coherent: state a clear opinion, then give one clear reason with correct vocabulary (use 'texture' carefully). Avoid contradictory phrasing like calling T‑shirts 'simple' then 'uncomfortable' without clarification.

例: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are simple and comfortable. If a dress has an itchy or heavy fabric, I prefer a soft cotton T‑shirt instead.

提案: Structure the answer: give a direct response, then contrast two clear examples with linking words. Reduce repetition and correct collocations (e.g., 'dress up' not 'put down T‑shirt').

例: It depends on the occasion. For special days like Valentine’s Day I spend a long time choosing clothes because I want to look nice; but for everyday outings I usually just pick a T‑shirt and pants and go out quickly.

提案: Good idea to contrast weekdays and weekends. Improve fluency by removing hesitations and clarifying 'choose the same color' meaning. Use linking words like 'whereas' or 'while'.

例: Yes. On weekends I usually plan outfits with my friends and sometimes coordinate colors, whereas on weekdays I wear whatever T‑shirt is convenient because I’m in a hurry.

提案: Be specific and avoid unclear phrases ('like the sounds'). Give a brief direct statement and 1–2 clear examples of preferred colours or patterns. Correct word order and redundancy.

例: I don't have a single favourite colour, but I like bright, attractive T‑shirts. For example, I often buy shirts with colourful prints or animal designs, such as a T‑shirt with a cat or bold geometric patterns.

× Well I think it depends when in occasion holidays and I will wear the shirt I will wear dress but in normal day I will wear pants and T-shirt.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the occasion. On holidays I wear a dress or a shirt, but on a normal day I wear pants and a T-shirt.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and preposition errors: 'depends when in occasion holidays' is incorrect; use 'depends on the occasion' or 'depends on the occasion, such as holidays'. Also run-on clauses need separation and articles are missing before 'normal day' and 'T-shirt'. Suggest breaking into two sentences and using 'on the occasion', 'on holidays', and 'a T-shirt' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I prefer to wear comfortable shirts because I think sometimes I like to engage in outdoor activities and dress or smart shirts will be uncomfortable for me.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable shirts because sometimes I like to engage in outdoor activities, and dresses or smart shirts would be uncomfortable for me.

Use 'would' or 'are' instead of 'will' for general statements; 'dress' should be plural 'dresses' to match 'shirts'. Also reorder 'sometimes' for natural placement and add a comma before the conjunction. Suggest using 'would be uncomfortable' for hypothetical general preference. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, I think T-shirt is more simple so and sometimes the texture is uncomfortable.

✓ Yes, I think a T-shirt is simpler, and sometimes the fabric is uncomfortable.

Need the indefinite article 'a' before 'T-shirt' and comparative form 'simpler' instead of 'more simple'. 'Texture' is acceptable but 'fabric' is more natural; add conjunction 'and' properly. Suggest using correct article and comparative adjective. Grammar problem type ID:1

× So sometimes I will choose wearing T-shirt rather than wearing dress.

✓ So sometimes I choose to wear a T-shirt rather than a dress.

After 'choose' use the infinitive 'to wear' instead of the gerund 'wearing'. Also add articles 'a' before 'T-shirt' and 'dress' and use parallel structure 'rather than'. Suggest: 'choose to wear a T-shirt rather than a dress.' Grammar problem type ID:8

× Well, it depends on occasions such As for example when Valentine's Day, I will choose choose clothes very for very long time because I want to look nice nice and but for deli I just pick one T-shirt and and put down T-shirt and pants and go outside.

✓ Well, it depends on the occasion. For example, on Valentine's Day I choose clothes for a long time because I want to look nice, but for daily life I just pick one T-shirt and pants and go out.

The original has awkward phrasing, repetition, and wrong prepositions. Use 'on the occasion' or 'on occasions' and 'for example' without capitalizing 'As'. 'When Valentine's Day' should be 'on Valentine's Day'. Remove repeated words and use 'daily life' or 'for everyday' instead of 'deli'. Use 'go out' rather than 'go outside' for leaving home. Suggest simplifying into two sentences and removing repetitions. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, definitely On weekend I usually hang out with my friends, so we will choose like the same color and we will decide first.

✓ Yes, definitely. On weekends I usually hang out with my friends, so we choose similar colors and decide together first.

Use 'on weekends' plural for habitual actions. 'Choose like the same color' is unnatural; use 'choose similar colors'. Remove 'will' since this is habitual present simple. Capitalization and punctuation needed. Suggest using present simple for habits and proper plural preposition. Grammar problem type ID:11

× But in, uh, on the week, on week, weekdays, I just put on uh, whatever, uh, colored T-shirt and I don't choose for a long time.

✓ But during the week, on weekdays, I just put on any colored T-shirt and I don't spend much time choosing.

Use 'during the week' or 'on weekdays' instead of 'on the week'. 'Whatever colored T-shirt' is better as 'any colored T-shirt'. Replace 'I don't choose for a long time' with 'I don't spend much time choosing' for natural expression. Use present simple for habitual actions. Grammar problem type ID:6

× To be honest, I do not have a favorite colour, but I like the sounds, good looking and gorgeous T-shirts such as with a such as the T-shirt with the cat or the T-shirt with some animals or colours.

✓ To be honest, I do not have a favorite colour, but I like good-looking and attractive T-shirts, such as a T-shirt with a cat or T-shirts with animals or bright colours.

The phrase 'the sounds' is incorrect and likely unintended. Use 'good-looking' or 'attractive' instead. Correct article use: 'a T-shirt with a cat' and plural 'T-shirts with animals'. Remove redundant 'such as' and reorder adjectives before noun. Suggest simplifying and using consistent plural/singular forms. Grammar problem type ID:12