Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You answered clearly and stayed on topic, but you can make the response more concise, avoid repetition (e.g., 'clothes' repeated), and add one specific example to enrich content. Use a clear topic sentence and one linking phrase for coherence.

例: I prefer loose, comfortable clothes because they let me move freely at work. For example, I often wear wide-leg trousers and soft cotton tops, which keep me relaxed throughout the day.

提案: Good idea expressed. Improve grammar (singular/plural agreement), shorten redundancy, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Replace vague words like 'aesthetic' with a concrete descriptor.

例: I prefer clothes that are both comfortable and fashionable because they look neat and keep me comfortable. For example, I choose tailored joggers and a smart blouse when I want to appear polished but still relaxed.

提案: Your meaning is clear but the answer is hesitant and repetitive. Remove fillers ('uh'), avoid repeating 'I think', and give one specific reason and a concise comparison. Use a linking word to connect the reason and the alternative you choose.

例: I don't usually wear T-shirts because they don't flatter my figure. Instead, I prefer Kurtis or fitted casual tops with jeans, which I find more flattering and comfortable.

提案: Clear content but very repetitive and full of fillers. Make sentences concise, avoid repeating phrases, and include a linking word to show sequence. Mention a specific habit or time spent to add detail.

例: Yes, I take my time shopping. I always try items on in the fitting room to check the fit and style before buying, and I usually spend about an hour choosing clothes.

提案: Good structured answer with contrast. Improve by removing repeated adverbs ('generally'), use a linking word for contrast, and add a brief specific example of each style.

例: Yes, I dress formally for work, such as blouses and tailored trousers. In contrast, at weekends I usually wear casual outfits like jeans and a relaxed top when I go out with friends.

提案: You answered succinctly but the final phrase is slightly awkward. Use clearer comparative language and provide a short reason or example. Keep it to one or two sentences.

例: I prefer light colours, especially light pink, because they look calm and elegant. For example, I often choose pastel blouses for work because they feel understated yet professional.

× I like to wear comfortable clothes, the clothes that are loose enough so that I can feel relaxed while I am doing my job.

✓ I like to wear comfortable clothes, clothes that are loose enough so that I can feel relaxed while I do my job.

Use of present continuous 'I am doing my job' is unnecessary for a habitual action. Use simple present 'I do my job' for routines. Also remove redundant 'the clothes that' for concision.

× I don't like tight clothes, that is, clothes that have too much fittings because it makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I don't like tight clothes, that is, clothes that have too many fittings because they make me feel uncomfortable.

'Fittings' is plural so use 'too many' (quantifier) not 'too much'. Pronoun must agree with plural 'clothes', so use 'they make' instead of 'it makes'.

× I think nowadays a lot of comfortable clothes are available on market which are both comfortable and fashionable.

✓ I think nowadays a lot of comfortable clothes are available on the market that are both comfortable and fashionable.

Use the definite article 'the' with 'market' ('on the market'). Also 'which' is acceptable but 'that' is more natural in restrictive clauses here; adjust for clarity.

× I prefer those kind of clothes because they are aesthetic and also makes me feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer those kinds of clothes because they are aesthetic and also make me feel relaxed.

Use plural 'kinds' after 'those' (plural demonstrative). Verb must agree with plural subject 'they', so use 'make' not 'makes'.

× I think my figure is not very suitable for wearing T-shirts.

✓ I think my figure is not very suited to wearing T-shirts.

'Suited to' is the more natural collocation; 'suitable for wearing' is not incorrect but 'suited to' improves idiomaticity.

× I think that I don't do that much, uh, good in T-shirts, that's why I try to avoid them.

✓ I don't look very good in T-shirts, so I try to avoid them.

Original sentence uses awkward structure 'do that much good in' and filler words. Use clearer structure 'look very good in' and replace comma splice with 'so'.

× I mainly prefer to wear Kurtis and uh, casual top and jeans, which suits me well.

✓ I mainly prefer to wear kurtis and casual tops with jeans, which suit me well.

Use lowercase 'kurtis' unless proper noun; match plurals 'casual tops' and plural verb 'suit' to agree with plural subject. Use 'with' to show combination.

× Yeah, when I go to shopping, I spend a lot of time, I like to try the clothes.

✓ Yeah, when I go shopping, I spend a lot of time; I like to try on the clothes.

Use 'go shopping' not 'go to shopping'. Use phrasal verb 'try on' for clothes. Replace comma splice with semicolon for two related clauses.

× Like I like to go to the trial room and wear the clothes and see how I am looking in that cloth, how the cloth is uh, fitting my figure.

✓ I like to go to the fitting room and try the clothes on to see how I look in them and how they fit my figure.

Use 'fitting room' (or 'fitting room') not 'trial room'. Use 'try on' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'clothes'. Use simple present 'look' for habitual actions and 'fit' for plural 'they'.

× Whether the cloth is fitting my figure or not, I like to, uh, see everything and then buy it.

✓ Whether the clothes fit my figure or not, I like to check everything before buying them.

Use plural 'clothes' and plural verb 'fit'. Replace 'see everything' with 'check everything' for clarity and use 'buying them' to match plural.

× Yeah, on weekdays I have office, so mainly I wear clothes that are more formal, while on weekends I generally go for an outing with my friends where I generally prefer to wear casuals that are both fashionable and comfortable.

✓ On weekdays I work in an office, so I mainly wear more formal clothes, while on weekends I usually go out with friends and prefer to wear casual clothes that are both fashionable and comfortable.

Use 'work in an office' instead of 'have office'. Avoid repeating 'generally'. Use 'casual clothes' instead of the noncount 'casuals'. Adjust word order for natural flow.

× I like colors that are light.

✓ I like light colors.

Simpler adjective-noun order 'light colors' is more natural than 'colors that are light'.

× I love to wear clothes that look sober than gorgeous.

✓ I love to wear clothes that look subtle rather than gorgeous.

Compare 'sober than' is incorrect; use 'rather than' to contrast and 'subtle' is a more natural adjective here. 'Sober' can be used but 'rather than' fixes the comparative structure.