Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid incorrect words (e.g. 'overpaid'), correct grammar, and keep it concise (max 3–4 short sentences). Provide one or two clear supporting details using linking words. For example, replace wrong words with 'oversized' or 'loose' and correct verb forms.

例: I prefer wearing oversized, comfortable clothes. For example, I usually wear a loose boxy T‑shirt and jeans because they are casual and easy to move in. They also feel more relaxed for everyday activities.

提案: Give a direct answer with varied vocabulary and avoid repetition. Use linking words to list reasons (e.g. 'because' and 'so'). Correct small errors and keep to 2–3 sentences with specific reasons (comfort, mobility, easy care).

例: I definitely prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits because they allow me to move freely. Also, they are easier to wash and maintain, so I can manage my wardrobe more simply.

提案: Answer directly and avoid repetition. Use clearer vocabulary ('vintage printed T‑shirts') and a logical flow: state preference, explain how you look for them, and mention a reason or challenge. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'however'.

例: Yes, I really like wearing T‑shirts, especially vintage printed ones. I often search online to find unique designs; however, they are quite rare and usually expensive.

提案: Provide a concise, structured response: short topic sentence, then specific details. Correct grammar and avoid awkward phrasing. Explain exactly how much time and why, and use linking words ('because', 'so').

例: Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I care about the prints and their meaning. For example, I might spend a few days searching for the right T‑shirt, which can be tiring.

提案: Be direct and clarify the reason. Avoid confusing or contradictory statements. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one concise reason with linking words. Correct grammar and remove repetition.

例: No, I don't wear different styles; my outfits are usually the same. Since I don't have a formal workplace, I generally stick to jeans and casual tops every day.

提案: Answer directly, use correct word order and vocabulary ('blue tones', not 'Bluetooth'). Give specific examples and one reason. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

例: I love blue because it makes me feel fresh and calm. For example, I often choose blue T‑shirts or jeans since blue tones suit my personal style.

× I love overpaid clothes because I prefer convenient and comfortable clothes so I usually use wear a box big T-shirt and just jeans.

✓ I love oversized clothes because I prefer convenient and comfortable clothing, so I usually wear a big boxy T-shirt and jeans.

The speaker used 'overpaid' incorrectly; the correct adjective is 'oversized' to describe large clothing. 'Use wear' is redundant — only 'wear' is needed. 'A box big T-shirt' should be 'a big boxy T-shirt' and 'just jeans' is more natural as 'jeans.' Improve vocabulary and word order: choose the correct adjective and omit redundant verbs. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Definitely, I prefer comfortable T-shirts, comfortable clothes because it is really easy to move in everyday and it it is it. It is also easy to manage maintain them.

✓ Definitely, I prefer comfortable T-shirts and clothes because they are really easy to move in every day, and they are also easy to maintain.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to agree with plural noun 'T-shirts and clothes' (subject-verb agreement). 'Every day' should be two words for the adverb; 'it it is it' is redundant and must be removed. 'Manage maintain' duplicates meanings; choose 'maintain.' Ensure consistent present-tense verbs for habits. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, I love it, especially I love vintage printing printed T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I love them. Especially, I like vintage printed T-shirts.

'Vintage printing printed T-shirt' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use the adjective 'vintage printed' before the noun 'T-shirts.' Also use plural pronoun 'them' to refer to T-shirts, and keep plural noun 'T-shirts' to match general preference. Grammar problem type ID:13

× So I try to always try to find it searching them in the on the Internet.

✓ So I always try to find them on the Internet.

Remove redundant 'try' and incorrect ordering 'find it searching them.' Use plural pronoun 'them' to match 'T-shirts.' Use the preposition 'on the Internet' (not 'in the on the Internet'). Simplify the verb phrase to natural word order. Grammar problem type ID:16

× But it's quite difficult because it's rare and expensive.

✓ But they're quite difficult to find because they're rare and expensive.

Clarify the subject: 'they' refers to 'T-shirts.' Add 'to find' after 'difficult' to specify the difficulty. Ensure pronoun agreement and explicit verb to complete the thought. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, of course, because I care about the outfit and the meaning of the printed, so I usually spend the spend times about a few days, so sometimes I got a headache.

✓ Yes, of course, because I care about the outfit and the meaning of the print, so I usually spend a few days deciding, and sometimes I get a headache.

Use 'the print' instead of 'the printed.' Remove duplicated words 'spend the spend times.' 'Spend a few days' is the correct phrase. Maintain present simple 'I get' for habitual result (not 'got'). Use 'deciding' to clarify what you spend days doing. Grammar problem type ID:5

× No I don't. My style is always same because I have a job, I don't have a job and I don't have a specific work so so my therefore my outfit is always same such as jeans.

✓ No, I don't. My style is always the same because I don't have a specific job, so my outfit is always the same, such as jeans.

The original has contradictions ('I have a job, I don't have a job') and repeated words. Use 'the same' with 'always.' Use 'I don't have a specific job' to express lack of a set workplace. Remove redundant words and fix word order. 'Work' should be 'job' here for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I'm crazy about blue color because it makes me feel fresh and when I so when I choose my clothes I always decide to blue tones Bluetooth T-shirt or jeans and also I think Blueton's clothes will match my style.

✓ I'm crazy about the color blue because it makes me feel fresh, and when I choose my clothes I always go for blue tones, like a blue T-shirt or jeans, because blue clothes match my style.

Use 'the color blue' for natural English. Remove repeated fragments ('when I so when I'). Use 'go for' to express choice. 'Bluetooth T-shirt' and 'Blueton's' are incorrect; use 'blue T-shirt' and 'blue clothes.' Ensure consistent vocabulary and correct noun phrases. Grammar problem type ID:13