Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammatical errors and avoid repetition.

例: I prefer casual clothes. They make me feel comfortable and confident, and they save time because I don’t have to think about matching outfits for special occasions.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear reason with one linking phrase. Avoid repetition and fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, word order).

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my lifestyle. For example, I feel more confident and relaxed in them, and I don’t worry about fabric or fit as much.

提案: Be specific about why you like T-shirts and use linking words to structure the response. Avoid filler sounds and be concise.

例: Yes, I enjoy wearing T-shirts because they come in many styles and colors. For instance, a plain T-shirt is comfortable for everyday wear and helps me feel confident.

提案: Give a clear, structured answer with specific reasons. Fix unclear phrases ("test the web") and use linking words to show sequence or reasons.

例: Yes, I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I want items that suit my body and the weather. Also, I compare prices to make sure I get good value.

提案: Provide a clear contrast between weekdays and weekends with specific examples. Avoid unclear phrases and repetition; use linking words for comparison.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes, such as shirts and chinos, because I need to look presentable for work. On weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like jeans and hoodies for comfort.

提案: State your favourite color clearly and give a specific reason. Avoid hesitation and redundant fragments; use linking words to explain why the color suits you.

例: I like blue the most because it reflects my calm mood. For example, I wear blue shirts when I want to feel more relaxed and focused.

× As I wear it I feel very confident and not and I don't need to consider any important occasions as and the most important is that I don't need to spend too much time considering.

✓ As I wear them I feel very confident and I don't need to consider any important occasion, and the most important thing is that I don't need to spend too much time deciding.

The student used singular 'it' with 'clothes' which is plural; also 'occasions' should be singular here after 'any' when referring generally to 'any important occasion', and 'considering' is better as 'deciding'. Use plural pronoun 'them' to match 'clothes' and adjust nouns for clarity. Suggestions: Use 'them' for plural nouns, use 'occasion' after 'any' in general statements, and prefer 'deciding' for choosing between options.

× As comfortable as these types of clothes are, are very suitable are very suitable for me.

✓ These types of clothes are very comfortable and very suitable for me.

The original sentence repeats 'are' and misorders clauses. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'These types of clothes are'. Remove duplicated verbs and arrange adjectives before 'and'. Suggestions: Keep one 'are' after the plural subject and place adjectives in natural order: 'very comfortable and very suitable'.

× I feel very confident well with it and I don't need to care about the size and any other types of materials on it.

✓ I feel very confident wearing them and I don't need to worry about the size or the different materials.

Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'clothes' (plural), and 'care about' is unnatural here; 'worry about' or 'pay attention to' fits better. 'Any other types of materials on it' is awkward; use 'different materials'. Suggestions: Use 'them' or gerund 'wearing them' for plural, replace 'care about' with 'worry about', and simplify material phrase.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts as T-shirt uh, it contains different type of T-shirts and the color can be VE uh, various.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts; there are different types of T-shirts and the colors can be various.

Article and noun form errors: 'different type' should be plural 'different types'. Avoid using 'it contains' when referring to a category; use 'there are'. 'Color can be VE various' is filler; 'colors can be varied' or 'there are various colors' is correct. Suggestions: Use plural 'types', use 'there are' to introduce countable items, and say 'various colors'.

× So no matter how choose what type of T-shirt or any other colours, it's very suit.

✓ So no matter which type of T-shirt or which color I choose, it suits me very well.

Missing relative pronoun 'which' and wrong verb 'suit' for third person singular requires 'suits'. Also 'colours' plural is okay but needs parallel structure. Add subject 'I' for clarity. Suggestions: Use 'which' to introduce choices, ensure subject-verb agreement with 'suits', and include the subject when necessary.

× It's very comfortable for me to wear and show my confidence.

✓ It's very comfortable for me to wear and it shows my confidence.

The original could be ambiguous; add 'it shows' to make clear that wearing it demonstrates confidence. Alternatively, use gerund 'wearing it shows my confidence.' Suggestions: Use a clear clause 'it shows my confidence' or gerund form 'wearing it shows my confidence'.

× Yes, I may spend a lot of time choosing it as some types of clothes are not very suitable for me.

✓ Yes, I sometimes spend a lot of time choosing clothes because some types are not very suitable for me.

'May spend' suggests possibility rather than habitual action; use 'sometimes spend' or 'I spend a lot of time' for habitual behavior. 'Choosing it' uses wrong pronoun; 'choosing clothes' is clearer. Suggestions: Use simple present for habits and avoid 'it' for plural 'clothes'.

× So I need to wear it to test the web, test the weather is it is suitable for me and also I need to think about the price so that I can buy the.

✓ So I need to try them on to see if they are suitable for the weather, and I also need to think about the price before I buy them.

'Wear it to test the web' is incorrect; 'try them on' is the correct phrase for testing clothes. 'Test the weather is it is suitable' is ungrammatical—use 'see if they are suitable for the weather'. 'Buy the' is incomplete; use 'buy them'. Suggestions: Use 'try them on' for fitting clothes, 'see if they are suitable for the weather', and complete object pronouns like 'them'.

× While I often wear different different styles of clothes on weekdays as on the weekdays I need to have a license so I need to wear different types of clothes to show that I have different taste on my clothes so that I not worry about that anyone sucking I was very.

✓ I often wear different styles on weekdays because I need to look more formal at work, so I choose different types of clothes to show my taste and not worry about others' opinions.

The original is highly disfluent with repetition, unclear 'have a license', and an incoherent ending. 'Have a license' likely meant 'work' or 'a job requiring a uniform/formal dress'. Clarify intent: 'look more formal at work'. Fix negatives and possessive 'others' opinions'. Suggestions: Remove repetitions, state reason clearly (e.g., workplace dress code), and use 'others' opinions' to express concern about judgment.

× Wow, it is hard to say for me as I like most is about the of the about the blue as the Blues maybe is suitable for me as I not quite happy all the day.

✓ It's hard for me to say, but I like blue the most because it seems suitable when I'm not very happy during the day.

The original has many pronoun and article errors: unnecessary 'the's and incorrect noun forms ('Blues'). Use 'blue' as a color noun and 'when I'm not very happy' to explain mood. Also use contraction 'I'm' or 'I am' and correct word order. Suggestions: Keep color names without 'the', avoid extra articles, and use clear subordinate clause 'because it seems suitable when I'm not very happy'.