Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and grammatically correct: give a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid repetition. Mention why you like baggy clothes with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

例: I like wearing baggy clothes because they are very comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I often choose loose jeans and oversized sweaters when I study at home because they keep me relaxed all day.

提案: Organize your answer: start with a direct statement (I prefer...), then give 1–2 specific reasons and an example. Avoid unclear phrases and keep sentences short. Use linking words such as 'but' or 'however' to show contrasts.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time because I work from home and want to feel relaxed. However, when I go to a party or a nice restaurant, I change into smarter clothes to look more professional.

提案: Be clear and accurate: say 'T-shirts' and explain why you like them with a specific detail (fit, material, colors). Avoid unclear words. Keep it to two or three sentences maximum and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example.'

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and easy to wash. For example, I own many cotton T-shirts in different colors that I wear for casual outings.

提案: Answer directly and give a specific reason and an example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'comfortable' not 'comfy' is okay but consistent) and avoid repeating phrases. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so.'

例: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I prefer comfortable, baggy items and want to make sure they match. For example, I often try on several oversized shirts to see which one looks best with my jeans.

提案: Clarify the contrast between weekdays and weekends with one clear sentence each. Avoid confusing words and give a concrete example of weekday and weekend outfits. Use linking words like 'on weekdays' and 'on weekends.'

例: On weekdays I usually wear smart-casual clothes for work, such as a shirt and trousers, because I have online meetings. On weekends I wear casual, comfortable clothes like sweatshirts and jeans since I stay at home most of the time.

提案: Give a clear statement of your preferred color and a specific reason or context. Avoid fillers and repetition. Use one linking phrase such as 'because' or 'for example' to add detail.

例: I prefer wearing black clothes because they are easy to match and look neat. For example, I often choose a black sweater and jeans when I want a simple, put-together outfit.

× I like baggy clothes because they are so comfortable and.

✓ I like baggy clothes because they are so comfortable.

The sentence ends with an extra conjunction 'and' without a following clause, creating a sentence structure error. Remove the unnecessary 'and' to complete the sentence and make it grammatically correct. Suggestion: avoid leaving conjunctions hanging; if you intend to add another idea, complete it after 'and'.

× I usually have those kind of clothes in my clothes.

✓ I usually have those kinds of clothes in my wardrobe.

'Those kind of' is incorrect: 'kinds' should agree with plural 'those'. Also 'in my clothes' is incorrect; use 'wardrobe' or 'closet' to refer to where clothes are kept. Suggestion: use 'those kinds of' for plural and 'wardrobe/closet' for location.

× OK is the burn on where I go because I prefer to work comfortable in my home be bad I have to do all with my clothes when I get out or when I go to a party and also like library restaurant?

✓ It depends on where I go: I prefer to work comfortably at home, but if I have to go out or go to a party, or to a library or restaurant, I change my clothes.

This utterance has multiple sentence structure problems: missing subject, wrong word choices, and run-on fragments. 'OK is the burn on where I go' is unclear; replace with 'It depends on where I go'. Use the adverb 'comfortably' after 'work'. Use 'at home' not 'in my home be bad'. Clarify the conditional 'if I have to go out' and list destinations correctly. Suggestion: break ideas into clauses, use correct prepositions and adverbs, and list places clearly.

× Yes of course I like wearing the shower because I have a lot of T-shirt and money kind and also in many colors.

✓ Yes, of course I like wearing T-shirts because I have a lot of them in many styles and colors.

'Wearing the shower' is incorrect vocabulary; likely meant 'wearing T-shirts'. Use plural 'T-shirts' and replace 'money kind' with 'many styles'. Use 'them' to refer back to T-shirts. Suggestion: use correct noun forms and modifiers ('many styles and colors') and pronouns to avoid repetition.

× Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like to all comfy clothes.

✓ Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I like all my clothes to be comfortable.

'I like to all comfy clothes' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'I like all my clothes to be comfortable' to correctly use 'like' with an object and infinitive phrase. Suggestion: use 'like + object + to + verb' for this structure.

× So I have to choose config. I have to choose in the kind of baggy clothes.

✓ So I have to choose carefully; I usually choose baggy clothes.

'Choose config' is unclear and 'choose in the kind of baggy clothes' is ungrammatical. Replace with clear phrasing: 'choose carefully' and 'I usually choose baggy clothes.' Suggestion: avoid abbreviations like 'config' and use simple clear adverbs and noun phrases.

× Yes I will. I will buy ski uniformed on weekdays and in the weekends.

✓ Yes. I will buy a school uniform for weekdays and casual clothes for the weekend.

The student used 'ski uniformed' which is incorrect; likely meant 'school uniform'. Also 'in the weekends' should be 'on weekends' or 'for the weekend'. Provide correct noun forms and prepositions. Suggestion: use 'school uniform' and 'on weekdays'/'on weekends' or 'for the weekend.'

× I usually wore coffee and cultural clothes 'cause I always stay at my home, but if I had to go out, I was my closet.

✓ I usually wear comfortable and casual clothes because I always stay at home, but if I have to go out, I choose clothes from my closet.

Mix of incorrect tense and word choices: 'wore' (past) conflicts with 'usually' (habit), so use present 'wear'. 'Coffee' and 'cultural' are wrong words; replace with 'comfortable and casual'. 'I was my closet' is meaningless; intended 'I choose from my closet'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits and correct noun phrases.

× I have many of black clothes and I, I like, uh, I prefer to wear black clothes because you know, it's like, it is like my color and I like.

✓ I have many black clothes, and I prefer to wear black because it is my color.

'Many of black clothes' is incorrect; use 'many black clothes' or 'a lot of black clothes'. Remove filler words and repetition. 'It is my color' is fine but simplify. Suggestion: use correct article/quantifier placement ('many black clothes' or 'a lot of black clothes') and avoid unnecessary hesitations.