Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words, use correct verb forms and possessives, and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer simple yet elegant clothes that flatter my figure. For example, I choose fitted shirts and A-line skirts because they suit my body shape. I also stick to a few colours and styles that I know look good on me.

提案: Answer directly then give a clear reason and an example. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words (however, for example) to connect ideas and produce 2–3 coherent sentences.

例: It depends on the occasion: I usually wear casual clothes for everyday activities; however, for meetings or special events I choose smart outfits. For example, I wear a suit or a dress to work functions to look professional.

提案: Be precise and avoid incorrect words. Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons and one example. Use correct vocabulary (relaxed, comfortable) and avoid hesitations.

例: Yes, I do. T-shirts are comfortable and practical, especially when I exercise or do outdoor work. For instance, I often wear a breathable T-shirt when I go jogging because it keeps me comfortable.

提案: Give a clear answer about frequency, explain why with specific details, and avoid vague phrases. Use simple linking words (because, so) and correct word order. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I often spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I try on different styles to find the best fit and colour. However, sometimes I buy something quickly if I am in a hurry.

提案: Be clearer: state whether you change styles or not, give a concise reason and an example. Avoid confusing wording and repetitions. Use 2 sentences maximum and correct grammar.

例: I don't change my style much between weekdays and weekends because I prefer comfortable, versatile clothes. For example, I often wear casual shirts and jeans both at work and at home.

提案: Start with a direct statement about your preferred colours, give a reason and an example. Use correct pronouns and verb agreement, and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer darker colours, especially navy blue and deep green, because they suit my complexion. For instance, wearing a dark blue shirt often makes my face look brighter.

× I usually prefer wearing something simple but elegant and I basically consider whether it match my, uh, figure.

✓ I usually prefer wearing something simple but elegant, and I basically consider whether it matches my figure.

The verb 'match' must agree with the singular subject 'it' (third-person singular) so use 'matches'. Also a comma and conjunction improve sentence flow. The error fits 'Verb + -ing form' by involving verb form; however the core issue is subject-verb agreement (use 'matches'). Suggest checking subject and verb agreement in clauses and using commas before conjunctions in compound sentences.

× I have identified some special colours and styles which suits me, so I always give that choices.

✓ I have identified some special colours and styles that suit me, so I always make those choices.

'Which suits me' is incorrect because 'colours and styles' is plural, so the verb should be 'suit'. 'Give that choices' is ungrammatical; 'make those choices' or 'choose them' is correct. The error involves plural agreement and wrong word choice—use plural verb with plural subject and an appropriate verb phrase.

× It depends on the occasion. Thursday to the weather I usually wear something simple but if it's something special like. Special location like a meeting or the event.

✓ It depends on the occasion and the weather. I usually wear something simple, but if it's something special, such as a meeting or an event, I would wear something smart.

The original has fragmented and unclear phrases ('Thursday to the weather', sentence fragments). Correct by combining into coherent sentences, using 'such as' for examples and maintaining conditional structure. Ensure conjunctions link clauses and avoid sentence fragments.

× I would wear something smart which suits the environment. So it basically depends.

✓ I would wear something smart that suits the environment, so it basically depends.

Use 'that' (restrictive clause) rather than 'which' in spoken restrictive context; combine the short sentence into the previous one to avoid choppiness. Also maintain consistent register.

× I believe patients is much relaxed, especially when working outside or doing some exercises or even at home.

✓ I believe people are much more relaxed, especially when working outside, exercising, or even at home.

'Patients' is the wrong noun here; likely meant 'people'. Also 'is' must agree with plural 'people' so use 'are'. Use comparative 'much more relaxed' and parallel gerunds 'working' and 'exercising'. Check pronoun/noun choice and subject-verb agreement.

× I prefer wearing a T-shirt. It's really easy to work with the T-shirt rather than wearing something tight and uh. Templates.

✓ I prefer wearing a T-shirt. It's really easier to work in a T-shirt than in something tight or formal.

'Easy to work with the T-shirt' is awkward; 'easier to work in a T-shirt' is natural. 'Rather than wearing something tight and uh. Templates.' is fragmentary and 'templates' is incorrect. Use parallel prepositional phrases and compare correctly. Keep gerund forms parallel.

× Yes, of course I need more much time to select clothes, especially I when I go shopping I try different types of clothes and try to select the best 1.

✓ Yes, of course I need a lot more time to select clothes. Especially when I go shopping, I try on different types of clothes to choose the best one.

'More much time' is incorrect; use 'a lot more time' or 'much more time'. 'Try different types of clothes and try to select the best 1' has redundancy and uses '1' incorrectly; use 'try on' for clothes and 'the best one'. Fix quantifiers and numerical expressions and use correct collocations.

× So it takes so much time, but occasionally I simply go and buy something without.

✓ So it takes a lot of time, but occasionally I simply go and buy something without trying it on.

The clause ends abruptly with 'without.' Clarify what is omitted: 'without trying it on' is a common expression. Ensure sentences do not end with incomplete prepositional phrases.

× I do not have such a preference. I usually wear the same style in the face and weekends I don't have much clothes so it I like my least lifestyle so I use we are the same style all day.

✓ I do not have such a preference. I usually wear the same style on weekdays and weekends because I don't have many clothes, so I tend to wear the same style all the time.

Multiple errors: 'in the face' should be 'on weekdays'; 'much clothes' should be 'many clothes'; pronoun and word order issues corrected. Use 'many' with countable plural nouns, and rephrase to clear, grammatically correct sentences.

× He believes dark colours match me than lighter ones, especially I prefer wearing blue and green coloured clothes.

✓ I believe dark colours suit me better than lighter ones; I especially prefer wearing blue and green.

'He believes' is wrong speaker pronoun—should be 'I believe'. 'Match me than' is ungrammatical; use 'suit me better than'. 'Blue and green coloured clothes' is wordy—'blue and green' suffice. Fix pronoun reference and comparative structure.

× I believe they those colours match me and makes my face look brighter.

✓ I believe those colours match me and make my face look brighter.

Remove extra 'they'. With plural subject 'those colours', use plural verbs: 'match' and 'make'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and avoid redundant pronouns.