Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 문장 구조를 바로잡고 자연스러운 표현으로 고치세요. 핵심문장(주제문) 뒤에 이유를 연결하고 형용사 사용을 정확히 하세요. 예: 'practical'과 'stylish' 같은 단어를 사용하고, 'look like sick'는 부적절하므로 'look nice'나 'look stylish'로 바꿔야 합니다. 또한 최대 3문장 이내로 간결하게 답하세요.

例: I prefer casual clothes, such as jeans and T-shirts, because they are practical and comfortable. They also look stylish for everyday wear.

提案: 반복을 줄이고 문법을 정확히 하세요. 'comfort'는 명사형이므로 형용사 'comfortable'을 사용하고, 이유를 말할 때 연결어를 활용해 자연스럽게 이어가세요. 또한 한두 문장으로 압축해 핵심을 전달하세요.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because my university has no strict dress code. Therefore, I usually wear relaxed outfits to lectures.

提案: 단어 수정을 통해 자연스럽게 만드세요. 단수·복수 일치와 동사 형태를 확인하고, 형용사 나열 시 연결어를 사용하세요. 예: 'the white ones' 또는 'a white one'과 'They look simple and chic.'

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I own many, and my favourite ones are white because they look simple and chic.

提案: 시제와 관사, 구문을 정리하세요. 경험을 말할 때는 명확한 이유와 연결어를 쓰고 문장을 간결하게 만드세요. 예: 'I often choose clothes the night before because I have been late before.'처럼 표현하세요.

例: Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes. If I have an appointment, I usually pick my outfit the night before because I have been late before after spending too long deciding.

提案: 의도 전달이 명확하지 않으니 대조구문을 사용해 요일별 차이를 분명히 하세요. 문법(조동사·어순)과 단어 선택('gorgeous'는 괜찮지만 'glossy'는 부적절할 수 있음)을 다듬으세요.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear comfortable clothes to focus on studying, but at weekends I sometimes dress more stylishly, wearing nicer outfits to change my mood.

提案: 'black ones' 대신 'black clothes' 또는 'black' 만 사용하고, 이유를 자연스럽게 연결하세요. 'preserve' 보다는 'maintain'이나 'care for'가 더 적절합니다. 한두 문장으로 간결하게 정리하세요.

例: I prefer black clothes because they hide stains well and are easy to look after and coordinate with other items.

× I like to wear casual clothes, for example jeans and T-shirts because it's very practical and look like sick.

✓ I like to wear casual clothes, for example jeans and T-shirts, because they are very practical and look chic.

'It's' refers to singular subject but 'jeans and T-shirts' are plural, so use 'they are'. 'Practical' describes plural noun so keep adjective 'practical' with plural verb. 'Look like sick' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'look chic' (adverb/adjective use). Also add a comma before 'because' for clarity.

× I prefer to wear comfort and casual clothes because in my country we don't have to wear smart clothes in university.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because in my country we don't have to wear smart clothes at university.

Use the adjective 'comfortable' (not the noun 'comfort') to modify 'clothes'. Use preposition 'at university' to indicate location/setting; 'in university' is less natural in this context.

× So when I go to university, I wear comfortable and casual clothes.

✓ So when I go to university, I wear comfortable, casual clothes.

This is a stylistic correction: use a comma to separate coordinate adjectives 'comfortable' and 'casual'. Grammar is acceptable but punctuation improves clarity.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I have many T-shirts, especially I like the white one.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. I have many T-shirts; especially, I like the white ones.

'The white one' implies a single T-shirt, but speaker refers to white T-shirts in general; use plural 'the white ones'. Use punctuation to connect sentences correctly.

× It's look like simple and chic.

✓ They look simple and chic.

'It's' is singular and doesn't agree with plural subject (T-shirts). Use 'They look' for plural. 'Look like simple' is incorrect collocation; use 'look simple'.

× Yes, I spent a lot of time choosing clothes.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes.

Question asks about general habit, so use present simple 'spend' not past 'spent'. Use past only for a specific past occasion.

× So if I have a appointment, I choose my clothes last night because I have this some experience that.

✓ So if I have an appointment, I chose my clothes last night because I had some experience like that.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an appointment'. Tense sequence: speaker refers to a past action ('last night'), so use past tense 'chose' and 'had'. 'This some experience that' is ungrammatical; 'had some experience like that' is natural.

× Late appointment to choosing clothes.

✓ I was late to my appointment because I took a long time choosing clothes.

Original fragment lacks a clear subject and verb. Provide full sentence with subject 'I' and verb phrase to explain cause and effect.

× Yes, on weekdays I have to go to university, so I will comfortable clothes to focus on studying.

✓ Yes, on weekdays I have to go to university, so I wear comfortable clothes to focus on studying.

Use 'wear' (present simple habitual) rather than 'will' which indicates future. 'Will comfortable clothes' is ungrammatical; need verb 'wear' plus adjective 'comfortable'.

× But week on weekdays I wear gorgeous and glossy clothing because I want to change my feelings.

✓ But on weekends I wear gorgeous, glossy clothing because I want to change my mood.

'Week on weekdays' is incorrect; likely meant 'on weekends'. Use 'mood' instead of 'feelings' for 'change my mood'. Use comma between coordinate adjectives.

× I like black ones because I really don't like to get stains on my clothes and it's very easy to preserve and coordinate.

✓ I like black clothes because I really don't like stains on my clothes and they are very easy to care for and coordinate.

'Black ones' is vague; 'black clothes' is clearer. 'Don't like to get stains' should be 'don't like stains on my clothes' or 'don't like my clothes to get stained'. 'It's' is singular and unclear; refer to plural 'they are'. 'Preserve' is unnatural here; use 'care for'.