Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート
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Part 1
試験官
What kind of clothes do you like to wear?
受験者
I usually wear tight tops with baggy jeans because I think the contrast between the fitted top and loose bottoms looks more stylish and dynamic. I often choose this combination for casual outings since it feels comfortable but still fashionable.
試験官
Do you prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes or smart clothes?
受験者
I usually prefer comfortable casual clothes because very fashionable outfits often make me want to change them. For example, tie shoes or formal suits can be distracting during a long day, so I usually opt for practical coats that let me move freely.
試験官
Do you like wearing T-shirts?
受験者
I love wearing T-shirts because because they're the most comfortable clothes I own and are very practical for long days at school. I usually choose breathable cotton T-shirts and I only avoid them for formal events when smarter clothes are required.
試験官
Do you spend a lot of time choosing clothes?
受験者
I don't spend much time choosing clothes from Monday to Friday. I need to get ready quickly for school and catch the bus, so I usually pick something simple and comfortable the night before or wear the same few reliable outfits to avoid delays.
試験官
Do you wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends?
受験者
On weekdays, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes like T-shirts and jeans because I go to school and want to be practical. On weekends, I usually go out with my friends, so I wear something more stylish like trendier tops and shorts, especially when the weather is warm.
試験官
What colour clothes do you like?
受験者
I personally love yellow clothing because that color suits my skin tone. For example, when I wore a yellow top to school a few months ago, all of my friends complimented my outfit and they said I looked great. So I love wearing yellow clothes.
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× I love wearing T-shirts because because they're the most comfortable clothes I own and are very practical for long days at school.
✓ I love wearing T-shirts because they're the most comfortable clothes I own and very practical for long days at school.
This sentence contains a duplicated word 'because because', which is a sentence structure error and also relates to incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs by redundancy. Remove the extra 'because' to make the sentence grammatically correct and fluent. Suggestion: proofread to avoid repeated words and read the sentence aloud to detect duplication.
× For example, tie shoes or formal suits can be distracting during a long day, so I usually opt for practical coats that let me move freely.
✓ For example, tie-dyed shoes or formal suits can be distracting during a long day, so I usually opt for practical coats that let me move freely.
The original phrase 'tie shoes' is unclear and likely a misuse of words (incorrect preposition/word choice). If the intended meaning was shoes with ties/laces, 'lace-up shoes' would be correct; if it was 'tie-dye' style, 'tie-dyed shoes' is correct. I assumed 'tie-dyed shoes' may be intended; alternatively use 'lace-up shoes'. Use the correct compound adjective form (with hyphen) or the accurate noun to convey the meaning clearly.
× I love wearing T-shirts because they're the most comfortable clothes I own and are very practical for long days at school.
✓ I love wearing T-shirts because they're the most comfortable clothes I own and very practical for long days at school.
After correcting the duplicated 'because', the clause 'they're the most comfortable clothes I own and are very practical' has a parallelism issue: 'they're' covers both complements, so repeating 'are' is unnecessary. Removing the second 'are' keeps subject-verb agreement and improves sentence flow: 'they're ... and very practical.'
× For example, when I wore a yellow top to school a few months ago, all of my friends complimented my outfit and they said I looked great.
✓ For example, when I wore a yellow top to school a few months ago, all of my friends complimented my outfit and said I looked great.
Using 'they said' after 'all of my friends complimented my outfit' is redundant. The pronoun 'they' is unnecessary because the subject 'all of my friends' already performs both actions. Remove 'they' to avoid repetition and make the sentence concise. Also keeps tense consistent (past simple).
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