Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Improve grammar, expand content and add a linking phrase. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement, and give 1–2 specific details about why you prefer T-shirts (comfort, fabric, fit).

例: I usually wear simple T-shirts rather than formal clothes because they are comfortable and easy to care for. For example, I prefer cotton T-shirts since they breathe well and suit my casual lifestyle.

提案: Add a brief reason and a linking word to make the answer more natural and informative. Use a topic sentence then expand with a specific reason or example.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I find them more practical for daily activities. For instance, I often wear jeans and a soft sweatshirt when I go out with friends or run errands.

提案: Avoid short, unclear responses. Give a full sentence and add a reason or context using a linking word. Clarify what 'a lot' refers to (frequency or enjoyment).

例: Yes, I wear T-shirts very often because they are versatile and comfortable for both home and casual outings.

提案: Correct the vocabulary error and give a clearer, expanded response. Use a topic sentence, then explain your routine with specific details and a linking word.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick simple outfits quickly; for example, I plan my work outfits the night before to save time in the morning.

提案: Provide specific contrasts and use linking words. State what you wear on weekdays and how it differs on weekends, with a reason for the change.

例: Yes, I do. On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes like shirts and chinos for work, whereas on weekends I switch to more relaxed clothes like T-shirts and jeans because I want to feel comfortable.

提案: Make the answer more natural by grouping and explaining briefly why you prefer those colours or when you wear them. Use linking words to add one specific example.

例: I like red, blue and yellow; for example, I wear blue for everyday shirts because it's versatile, red when I want to stand out, and yellow during summer because it feels bright and cheerful.

× The clothes I like to wear is a normal T-shirt, nothing fancy.

✓ The clothes I like to wear are normal T-shirts, nothing fancy.

Subject 'The clothes' is plural, so the verb must be plural ('are') and the noun referring to items should be plural ('T-shirts') to agree. Suggestion: match plural subjects with plural verbs and plural nouns (e.g., 'are' and 'T-shirts').

× Yes, I do a lot.

✓ Yes, I do, a lot.

The original sentence is acceptable but sounds slightly informal/awkward without a comma; however no third-person singular error. To improve clarity when emphasizing frequency, use a comma or rephrase to 'Yes, I do, a lot.' or 'Yes, I wear them a lot.' Suggestion: rephrase to 'Yes, I wear them a lot.' for clearer subject-verb meaning.

× I don't spend that much time on shooting clothes.

✓ I don't spend that much time choosing clothes.

The verb 'shooting' is incorrect in this context; the appropriate verb is 'choosing'. The error falls under sentence structure/verb choice; according to the provided list this maps to Present tense/Verb form issues. Suggestion: use 'choose/choosing' when talking about selecting items (present tense progressive noun form 'choosing').