Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy (e.g. "like to prefer"), and limit to 2–3 supporting sentences with specific details and a linking word to connect ideas.

例: I usually prefer comfortable clothes at home, but I wear formal clothes for special occasions. For example, I choose a suit or a neat shirt when attending weddings or interviews so I look more professional and confident.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and use linking words to compare situations. Reduce repetition ("at that time"). Add one specific example of what you wear in each situation.

例: It depends on the situation. At home I wear comfortable clothes like sweatpants, but when I go out to the market or meet friends I choose smart casual outfits, such as chinos and a button‑down shirt, so I look presentable.

提案: Be more fluent and avoid filler words. Start with a clear reason and give a concise supporting detail. Mention a specific type of T‑shirt or situation to show concreteness.

例: Yes, I do. In summer the weather in India is very hot, so short‑sleeved cotton T‑shirts are comfortable and breathable. I often choose light‑coloured, loose cotton T‑shirts for everyday wear.

提案: Provide a direct answer and explain briefly why. Avoid awkward phrasing and incomplete sentences. Add a specific detail about how you choose items to make your answer more informative.

例: No, I don’t spend much time choosing clothes. I usually buy from the Adidas store and pick whatever looks good and fits well, so shopping takes me only a short time.

提案: Answer directly and use a linking word to contrast weekdays and weekends. Replace vague phrases with specific descriptions of weekend outfits and correct grammar ("smarter" → "more smart" or "neater").

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear my school uniform, but on weekends I dress more neatly. For example, I usually wear jeans and a nice shirt when I go to the market or park.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence and one clear reason with a specific example. Remove repetition and fillers. Explain briefly why the colour appeals to you (e.g., compliments, mood).

例: I prefer blue clothing, especially blue T‑shirts, because people often compliment me when I wear that colour. The compliments make me feel more confident, so I choose blue for important outings.

× Well, if I talk about myself, most of the time I really like to prefer comfortable clothes at home, but sometime when I am going to any occasion at that time I prefer to wear formal clothes to become more enhance to myself to others.

✓ Well, if I talk about myself, most of the time I prefer comfortable clothes at home, but sometimes when I am going to an occasion I prefer to wear formal clothes to appear more presentable to others.

Errors: unnecessary combination 'like to prefer' (redundant), 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb), 'any occasion' more natural as 'an occasion', and awkward phrase 'to become more enhance to myself to others' -> 'to appear more presentable to others'. Suggestion: Use a single verb of preference (prefer), correct adverb form, use appropriate article 'an', and replace incorrect phrase with 'appear more presentable to others' for clear meaning.

× Well it's depend upon situation. Most of the time I am at my home at that time I wear comfortable clothes. But when I want to go market or any other place at that time I prefer smart clothes to become more presentable to others and on.

✓ Well, it depends on the situation. Most of the time when I am at home I wear comfortable clothes. But when I want to go to the market or another place I prefer smart clothes to appear more presentable to others.

Errors: 'it's depend' should be 'it depends' (subject-verb agreement). 'depend upon situation' -> 'depends on the situation' (preposition and article). 'go market' requires 'go to the market'. 'and on' is unnecessary. Suggestions: Ensure verb agrees with subject (adds -s for third person singular), use correct prepositions and articles, and remove redundant words.

× Yes, definitely In India, the temperature is very high in summers at that time, uh, it's very difficult to wear full sleeves clothes. Uh, so that's why T-shirts are more affordable and look smarter and comfortable to me at that time.

✓ Yes, definitely. In India the temperature is very high in summer, and at that time it's very difficult to wear full-sleeve clothes. So that's why T-shirts are more comfortable, look smarter, and suit me better then.

Errors: unnecessary capitalisation and punctuation. 'in summers' should be 'in summer' or 'summers' with different structure; natural phrasing: 'in summer'. 'full sleeves clothes' -> 'full-sleeve clothes' or 'long-sleeved clothes'. 'more affordable' is odd unless comparing price; use 'more comfortable' and 'look smarter'. Suggestions: Use correct noun form for seasons, hyphenate compound adjectives or use 'long-sleeved', and choose adjectives that match meaning (comfortable, smart) and avoid unnecessary filler words.

× Well I am purchasing most of my clothes from Adidas store and I just go to Adidas store and pick which one look more better to me and just purchase. I do not spend a lot of time to selecting for wearing. I am very normal people and just.

✓ Well, I buy most of my clothes from the Adidas store. I just go there, pick the items that look best to me, and buy them. I do not spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I am a very ordinary person.

Errors: 'am purchasing' (awkward continuous form) should be simple present 'buy' for habitual action. 'Adidas store' needs the article 'the'. 'which one look more better' contains subject-verb agreement and double comparative; use 'that look best' or 'that look better'. 'spend a lot of time to selecting' -> 'spend a lot of time choosing'. 'I am very normal people and just' has number mismatch and incomplete thought; change to 'I am a very ordinary person.' Suggestions: Use simple present for habits, correct articles, avoid double comparatives, use gerund 'choosing' after 'spend time', and ensure subject number matches nouns.

× Well I am student so on weekdays I just wear my student uniform but on weekends I used to present myself more smarter to other peoples whenever I go market and parks. Yes.

✓ Well, I am a student, so on weekdays I just wear my school uniform, but on weekends I present myself more smartly to other people whenever I go to the market or parks.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'student'. 'student uniform' better as 'school uniform'. 'I used to present' incorrectly suggests past habitual action; here present simple 'I present' fits. 'more smarter' is double comparative; use 'more smartly' or 'smarter' but as an adverb 'more smartly' is correct. 'other peoples' should be 'other people' (people is plural noun already). 'go market' -> 'go to the market'. Suggestions: Include articles where needed, avoid 'used to' when describing current habits, use correct comparative/adverb forms, and correct plural nouns and prepositions.

× Well, most of the time I like to wear blue T-shirts because whenever I, uh, because whenever I wear blue color, I receive many positive comments and that makes me more positive.

✓ Well, most of the time I like to wear blue T-shirts because whenever I wear the color blue, I receive many positive comments and that makes me feel more positive.

Errors: redundant phrase 'because whenever I,' remove repetition. 'wear blue color' should be 'wear the color blue' or 'wear blue'. Missing 'feel' after 'makes me' to complete meaning. Suggestions: Avoid repetition, use correct noun phrase for color, and include verbs like 'feel' when describing emotional effects.