Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give a clear topic sentence plus one specific supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and reduce filler words.

例: I usually wear casual clothes like T-shirts and jeans because they are comfortable and let me move easily. For example, when I go out with friends or run errands I choose jeans and a plain T-shirt for comfort.

提案: Answer directly (prefer casual or smart), avoid repeating, and give one clear reason and one specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they suit my daily activities and are easy to move in. For example, I often wear T-shirts and jeans when meeting friends, while I only wear formal clothes for special events.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific reason. Avoid unclear comparisons and wrong vocabulary. Keep sentences short and accurate.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are practical and comfortable for everyday activities. I often wear plain or printed T-shirts when I study or hang out with friends.

提案: Be specific about how much time and why. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid repetition. Give one concrete example of what you do when choosing clothes.

例: Yes, I often spend time choosing clothes because I like to mix trending and unique styles. For example, I try several outfit combinations and check online photos before deciding what to wear.

提案: Directly state the difference between weekday and weekend clothing, give a reason and one specific example. Remove fillers and correct tense errors.

例: Yes. On weekdays I wear simple, practical clothes like jeans and a plain shirt for work or study, but on weekends I try trendier outfits and experiment with different combinations to feel more confident.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence, a specific reason, and a brief example. Use correct grammar (I prefer, because it makes me look...).

例: I prefer wearing black clothes because they look smart and are easy to match with other items. For example, I often choose a black jacket and jeans because it makes me feel confident and tidy.

× I usually wear casual clothes such as AT shirts and jeans because they they are very comfortable and easy to move in.

✓ I usually wear casual clothes such as T-shirts and jeans because they are very comfortable and easy to move in.

Duplicate word 'they' is redundant and 'AT shirts' seems to be a typo for 'T-shirts'. Replace with 'T-shirts' and remove the extra 'they'. Also 'they are' correctly refers to 'T-shirts and jeans' (plural), so keep plural verb 'are'.

× I often choose then when I going to out I am going to out with my friends and are running errands.

✓ I often choose them when I go out with my friends or when I am running errands.

Use object pronoun 'them' (not 'then'). Use correct verb forms: 'go' for simple present habitual action and 'am going' for present continuous. Remove extra 'to' in 'going out' and use 'or' to connect activities. Ensure subject-verb agreement with 'I am' not 'are'.

× Yes, usually I wear usually I wear a casual clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move.

✓ Yes, usually I wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and easy to move in.

Remove duplicated phrase 'usually I wear'. Use plural 'clothes' without 'a'. Keep 'they are' for plural. Add 'in' after 'move' to complete the phrasal verb 'move in'.

× For example I open like trending styles, T-shirts, jeans, when I wear formals, when I wear traditional outfits, when I wear a western outfit.

✓ For example, I like trending styles such as T-shirts and jeans, as well as formal, traditional, and western outfits.

'Open like' is incorrect; use 'like' or 'I like' and 'such as' to list examples. Use parallel structure and correct adjective forms: 'formal' not 'formals'. Add commas for clarity and remove unnecessary repetition.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because it is very you prefer to useful clothes.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are very useful.

T-shirts are plural, so use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'are'. Remove extra words 'you prefer to' which are nonsensical here. Keep sentence concise: 'they are very useful'.

× I usually prefer wearing casual clothes in T-shirts in a day day-to-day activities.

✓ I usually prefer wearing casual clothes like T-shirts for day-to-day activities.

Use 'like' to give an example, not 'in'. Remove duplicated 'day'. Use preposition 'for' to indicate purpose. Maintain plural 'clothes' and no article before it.

× T-shirts are the one of the shoes.

✓ T-shirts are one of my favorite items of clothing.

The original sentence mixes unrelated words ('shoes') and incorrect article use. Clarify meaning: express that T-shirts are among favorite clothing items. Use correct noun phrase 'items of clothing'.

× Yes, I like spending time with clothes.

✓ Yes, I like spending time choosing clothes.

'Spending time with clothes' is unclear; the intended meaning is spending time choosing or shopping for clothes. Use gerund 'choosing' after 'spending time'.

× Particularly I use wear trending styles, then unique styles and I choose a different different styles so I spend so much of time.

✓ Particularly, I follow trending styles and then unique styles, and I choose different styles, so I spend a lot of time doing this.

Combine verbs correctly: 'follow' or 'wear' styles; do not mix 'use wear'. Remove duplicate 'different'. Replace 'so much of time' with 'a lot of time'. Add commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekends and weekdays because, uh, it was a very trending.

✓ Yes, I wear different styles of clothes on weekdays and weekends because trends change.

Mixing past 'was' and present 'wear' is inconsistent. Use present tense to explain habitual action: 'trends change' or 'it is trendy'. Remove filler 'uh' and vague phrasing 'a very trending'.

× I am was a very stylish.

✓ I try to be very stylish.

Original mixes 'am' and 'was'. Use 'try to be' or 'am' depending on meaning. 'I try to be very stylish' conveys intention and matches present context.

× So I wear a different types.

✓ So I wear different types of clothes.

Remove article 'a' before plural 'types' and add 'of clothes' to complete the noun phrase. Ensure plural agreement between 'different' and 'types'.

× I've tried an online different combinations and I so I feel very comfort and confident. I.

✓ I've tried different combinations online, and I feel very comfortable and confident.

Place 'online' after 'combinations' or before the verb correctly. Use 'different combinations' (no 'an'), and use adjectives 'comfortable' and 'confident'. Remove stray 'I' at the end.

× I mostly preferred in a black color.

✓ I mostly prefer black clothes.

Use present tense 'prefer' for current habit. Remove unnecessary prepositions 'in' and article 'a' and the redundant word 'color'. Use 'black clothes' for clarity.

× Black color clothes I like so much because it is a very confident and looking wise was good so I prefer black color.

✓ I like black clothes because they make me feel confident and they look good, so I prefer black.

Use plural pronoun 'they' for 'black clothes'. Replace awkward phrase 'a very confident and looking wise was good' with 'make me feel confident and look good'. Remove redundant repeats of 'color'.