Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make a clear, complete topic sentence and follow with one or two specific supporting details. Reduce hesitations and fix tense/word order. For example, say why you like sports clothes (comfort, flexibility) and when you wear them. Use one or two linking words to connect ideas.

例: I prefer wearing sports clothes because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For instance, I often wear tracksuits or leggings when I travel or run errands, even if I am not exercising, because they are practical and easy to care for.

提案: Start with a direct answer, then give concise reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct grammar (possessive forms and word order). Mention a brief example to support your preference.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because comfort helps me focus and feel relaxed. For example, I usually choose loose trousers and soft tops for long workdays, although I wear smart clothes for important meetings.

提案: Give a clear yes/no then explain why with specific detail and a linking word. Avoid repeating the same word; use synonyms (e.g., cotton shirts, breathable fabric). Keep it to two or three sentences.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because cotton fabric is breathable and comfortable. For example, cotton T-shirts keep me cool in summer and allow me to move freely during daily activities.

提案: Answer directly and give a specific reason or example rather than hesitating. If you do spend time choosing clothes, explain what you consider (style, occasion, comfort). If not, say so and give a reason. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and 'I don't know what to say.'

例: Yes, I spend quite a lot of time choosing clothes because I consider the occasion and how comfortable the outfit will be. For example, I check the weather and pick outfits that are both suitable for meetings and comfortable for commuting.

提案: Give a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., 'On weekdays... whereas on weekends...'). Be specific about what you wear in each case and why. Avoid incomplete sentences; finish the thought with an example of weekend clothing.

例: On weekdays I wear smart-casual clothes that are appropriate for work, such as shirts and chinos, whereas on weekends I prefer relaxed outfits like jeans and hoodies for comfort. For instance, I might wear a blazer for meetings but switch to a hoodie when meeting friends.

提案: Answer directly and give specific reasons and a brief example. Remove hesitations and complete the sentence (e.g., 'in my wardrobe'). You can mention which shades of blue you prefer and when you wear them.

例: I really like blue because it suits my skin tone and feels calming. For example, I wear navy blazers for work and light blue shirts on casual days, and I have many blue items in my wardrobe.

× I love to wear sports attire. Even though I'm not doing any exercise or I dinner went to gym, I.

✓ I love to wear sports attire, even when I'm not exercising or when I just went to the gym.

The original contains disordered clauses and incorrect word order ('I dinner went to gym'). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Reorder clauses for clarity and use the correct verb forms: 'exercising' (present participle) after 'when' and 'went to the gym' for past action. Also join the ideas with a comma and 'even when' for correctness.

× I prefer to wear comfortable clothes instead of smart clothes. I do value my own comfortable instead of others opinion it comfortable clothes I.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes. I value my own comfort instead of other people's opinions.

The original misuses pronouns and nouns ('my own comfortable', 'others opinion', 'it comfortable clothes I') causing confusion, which is an incorrect use of pronouns/nouns (type 12). Use the noun 'comfort', possessive 'other people's opinions', and proper word order: subject + verb + object.

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirt usually T-shirt with cotton made with cotton T-shirt makes me comfortable and I can more freely MMM.

✓ Yes, I usually like wearing T-shirts made of cotton because they make me comfortable and allow me to move more freely.

This sentence repeats words and uses incorrect adjective forms ('T-shirt with cotton made with cotton') and adverb placement ('I can more freely'), which is an incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (type 13). Correct by using the plural 'T-shirts', the phrase 'made of cotton', and place adverbial phrase 'more freely' after the verb 'move'.

× Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes. Umm, uh, usually. IK I don't know what to say.

✓ Yes, I do spend a lot of time choosing clothes. Usually, I am not sure what to say when asked about it.

Fragments ('Umm, uh, usually. IK I don't know what to say.') create sentence structure errors (type 26). Combine fragments into a complete sentence and replace informal abbreviations ('IK') with standard wording: 'I am not sure'.

× It's a very different style during weekends and movies. For weekdays I will choose outfit that works well with my job and for weekends I choose.

✓ My style is very different on weekends and weekdays. For weekdays I choose outfits that work well for my job, and on weekends I choose more casual clothes.

The original has unclear reference ('weekends and movies') and incomplete clause endings, a sentence structure error (type 26). Clarify contrast between weekdays and weekends, use plural 'outfits', and complete the weekend clause with an explicit choice.

× I really love blue colour. I think blue suit my skin tone. I have a lot of umm blue shade colour in my.

✓ I really love the color blue. I think blue suits my skin tone. I have a lot of blue shades in my wardrobe.

Problems include article use and verb agreement and incomplete noun phrase; these are incorrect uses of adjectives/adverbs and subject-verb agreement (types 13 and 27). Use 'the color blue', ensure verb agrees ('blue suits'), and complete the noun phrase ('shades in my wardrobe').