Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clear and use correct vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct word choices (e.g., 'jeans' not 'cheese'), avoid filler words, and keep answers concise (1–3 sentences). Add one specific detail to support your preference using a linking word like 'because' or 'for example.'

例: I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and hoodies because they are comfortable and allow me to move freely. For example, I usually wear them when I go shopping or meet friends since they are practical for everyday activities.

提案: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and give a concise reason. Avoid hesitations and incomplete endings. Use linking words like 'because' to explain why.

例: I definitely prefer casual clothes because I rarely attend formal events and value comfort. For instance, I often choose sneakers and a sweater when I go out.

提案: Use correct nouns and concise structure. Start with a clear statement, then give one specific supporting reason. Avoid repetition and filler sounds ('uh').

例: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are very soft and practical. For example, I wear them at home and when I go out with friends because they are easy to wash and comfortable.

提案: Keep sentences grammatically correct and organized: topic sentence + reason + brief example. Correct verb tenses and word choice, avoid long confusing phrasing. Use linking words like 'but' or 'so'.

例: I used to spend a lot of time choosing clothes when I was a college student, but recently I focus on my studies so I don't spend much time on that. Usually I just pick something simple like jeans and a T-shirt.

提案: Respond directly and complete the thought. Use correct singular/plural and simple linking words ('on weekdays','on weekends'). Give one clear contrast between weekday and weekend styles.

例: Yes, I do. On weekdays I usually wear comfortable clothes like T-shirts and sweatpants because I study a lot, but on weekends I dress a bit nicer when I meet friends or go out.

提案: State the colour(s) directly and give a specific reason. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'neutral colours' or 'bright colours') and clear sentence structure. Avoid unclear phrases and fillers.

例: I prefer neutral colours like black, white and gray because they are easy to mix and match with other clothes. For example, a black T-shirt goes well with most pants so I can plan outfits quickly.

× I prefer casual clothes like cheese or foodie because they are comfortable and make it easy to move.

✓ I prefer casual clothes like jeans or hoodies because they are comfortable and make it easy to move.

The student used incorrect words 'cheese' and 'foodie' where 'jeans' and 'hoodies' are appropriate clothing nouns. This is a vocabulary error rather than grammar, but it affects correctness. Replace with correct nouns that fit the context.

× I definitely prefer uh wearing to casual clothes actually.

✓ I definitely prefer wearing casual clothes, actually.

The original contains an extra preposition 'to' after 'wearing' which is incorrect. After 'prefer' you can use 'prefer doing' (gerund) or 'prefer to do' (infinitive) but not 'prefer wearing to casual'. Remove 'to' and place adjectives correctly.

× I don't have any formal events so I tend to wear more comfortable and practical and.

✓ I don't have any formal events, so I tend to wear more comfortable and practical clothes.

The sentence ends with an incomplete phrase 'and' and omits the noun 'clothes'. Add a comma before 'so' for clarity and complete the sentence by adding 'clothes'.

× I love wearing teachers because it is the most comfortable and practical clothes among clothing because, uh, very, uh, soft and.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts because they are the most comfortable and practical clothes; they are very soft.

'Teachers' is incorrect for 'T-shirts'. Also subject-verb agreement and number: use 'they are' for plural 'T-shirts' and complete thoughts. Simplify to two clear clauses and remove filler 'uh'.

× I used to when I was college student, but recently I focus on my study so I don't spend more many time in on uh choosing my class.

✓ I used to when I was a college student, but recently I have been focusing on my studies so I don't spend much time choosing my clothes.

Missing article 'a' before 'college student'. 'Focus' should be present perfect progressive 'have been focusing' to show recent continuous action. 'Spend more many time in on' is incorrect; use 'don't spend much time' and 'choosing my clothes' instead of 'choosing my class'.

× I just pick up Michael and where.

✓ I just pick up whatever is available and wear it.

Original sentence appears nonsensical: 'Michael and where' likely mispronunciation. Clarify meaning: 'pick up whatever is available and wear it'. This corrects pronoun and word choice to express the intended idea.

× I guess I do because, uh, in weekday I always the I wear the comfortable outfit such as T-shirt or uh, training pants because I focus on study in my weekday, but in the.

✓ I guess I do, because on weekdays I always wear comfortable outfits such as T-shirts or track pants since I focus on studying during the week.

Use plural 'weekdays' and preposition 'on'. Remove extra words 'the I' and use plural 'outfits' and correct 'training pants' to 'track pants' (or 'training pants' depending on variety). Use 'since I focus on studying during the week' to complete the idea and correct tense and word order.

× Uh, I love high color because uh, it is more practical because it easy to plan other my clothes and I love the buy from.

✓ I like bright colors because they are practical; they make it easy to coordinate with my other clothes, and I like buying them from stores I trust.

'High color' is incorrect; use 'bright colors'. 'It is' should match plural 'colors' with 'they are'. 'It easy to plan other my clothes' is ungrammatical—use 'make it easy to coordinate with my other clothes'. Complete final clause to indicate where the student buys clothes.