Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the sentence grammatical and more natural: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and give one specific reason with a linking phrase. Avoid unclear words (e.g. “custard”).

例: I usually wear simple T-shirts in basic colors like white and black because I prefer a minimalist style. For example, a plain white T-shirt is easy to match with jeans and looks neat for most casual occasions.

提案: Correct mistaken vocabulary (use 'comfortable' and 'relaxed', not 'filthy'), make one clear statement and add a linked supporting reason. Use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they help me feel relaxed. For instance, when I attend outdoor activities I wear a loose shirt and jeans so I can move easily.

提案: Make grammar consistent (subject-verb agreement), limit to one or two concise supporting details, and link them clearly (e.g. 'and' or 'because').

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they feel comfortable and are usually cheaper than other clothes. Also, a plain T-shirt often makes me feel more confident when I meet friends.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give a specific example of your wardrobe. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example' to clarify.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I stick to a simple style. For example, I usually wear a plain T-shirt and jeans when I go out with friends or travel with my family.

提案: Be concise and complete each sentence. State the contrast clearly with a linking word like 'while' and finish the weekend explanation. Use correct plurals and articles.

例: Yes, my style differs: on weekdays I wear a uniform, which looks more formal, while at the weekend I usually wear a T-shirt and jeans because I want to be comfortable.

提案: Make grammar natural: use 'colours' and 'I like light colours such as white and black' is contradictory (black is not light) — be specific. Give 1–2 clear reasons and an example of occasions.

例: I prefer neutral colours like white and black because they are versatile. For example, a black shirt works well for a casual outing or a more formal event, and a white T-shirt is great for shopping with friends.

× I love wear a simple T-shirt and with uh just a basic color white and black because I love a minimal stylish and avoid custard.

✓ I love wearing a simple T-shirt in basic colors like white and black because I like a minimal, stylish look and avoid bright patterns.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund 'wearing' (Rule: verb + -ing). Also prepositions and noun forms were adjusted: 'in basic colors' instead of 'with ... color', 'like white and black' for examples, 'a minimal, stylish look' as a correct noun phrase, and 'avoid bright patterns' replaces the unclear 'avoid custard'. Suggestions: use gerund after verbs like love/enjoy/like; use correct prepositions for colors ('in' or 'in colors'); choose clear nouns ('look' or 'style').

× I prefer to wear a comfortable shirt because I think it's filthy and relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable shirts because I think they are stylish and relaxed.

The original used 'filthy' (incorrect adjective) and singular/plural mismatch. Corrected to 'comfortable shirts' (plural to match general statement) and 'they are stylish and relaxed' to use appropriate adjectives. Suggestions: check adjective meaning (filthy means dirty), ensure noun number matches pronouns and verbs.

× When I go to in many activities I feel relaxed.

✓ When I participate in many activities, I feel relaxed.

The phrase 'go to in many activities' is ungrammatical. Use 'participate in' or 'take part in' for activities. Added comma for clarity. Suggestions: use correct verb + preposition combinations for activities ('participate in', 'go to an event').

× Yes, I love wearing T-shirt because it's very feels relaxed and cheaper than other types of clothes and it also make me confident.

✓ Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they feel very comfortable and are cheaper than other types of clothes, and they also make me feel confident.

Use plural 'T-shirts' for general statements, 'feel' not 'feels' to agree with plural subject, 'comfortable' is correct adjective, 'are' for plural predicate, and 'make me feel confident' is the correct verb structure. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct adjective ('comfortable'), and proper verb patterns ('make someone feel').

× No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have the the simple pattern and simple style there's AT shirt and Jean, so I often wear it when I go to with my friends or travel with my family.

✓ No, I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I have a simple wardrobe and simple styles like A-shirts and jeans, so I often wear them when I go out with my friends or travel with my family.

Corrected singular/plural inconsistencies: 'wardrobe' or 'styles' fits, 'A-shirts' unclear but likely 'T-shirts' or 'casual shirts', changed to 'jeans' plural. Replaced 'it' with 'them' to agree with plural noun. Fixed preposition 'go out with'. Suggestions: match singular/plural, use standard clothing terms ('T-shirts', 'jeans'), and match pronouns to nouns.

× Yes, I have a different style of clothes between weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I often wear uniform clothes so it's feel more formal than weekend. Weekend I often wear just T-shirt and Jean because it's very.

✓ Yes, I have different styles of clothing for weekdays and weekends. On weekdays I often wear a uniform, so it feels more formal than on weekends. On weekends I often wear just T-shirts and jeans because they are very comfortable.

Fixed pronoun and determiner use: 'styles of clothing' and 'for weekdays and weekends'. 'Uniform' is singular countable and requires article 'a uniform'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it feels'. Added missing preposition 'on' before 'weekends'. Replaced incomplete 'because it's very' with 'because they are very comfortable' to complete the idea and match plural. Suggestions: ensure correct articles with countable nouns, include prepositions 'on' for days, and complete comparative statements.

× I love simple color light white and black. This is because it can wear in many occasions, go shopping with my friends or go to some party or special event.

✓ I like simple colors like white and black. This is because they can be worn on many occasions, such as going shopping with friends or attending a party or special event.

Use 'like' to give examples, plural 'colors', and correct passive 'can be worn'. Use preposition 'on' for occasions and 'attending' for events. Also corrected pronoun agreement 'they'. Suggestions: use 'like' to list examples, use passive 'be worn' for clothes, and use correct prepositions ('on occasions', 'attend a party').