Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and clear. Begin with a topic sentence stating your preference, then give 1–2 specific supporting details. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, avoid extra words) and simple linking words if needed.

例: I prefer casual, relaxed clothes. For example, I often wear baggy jeans and drop-shoulder T-shirts because they are comfortable and suit my style.

提案: Answer the question directly (state preference), then give clear reasons. Keep sentences short and avoid repetition. Use linking words such as because and so to connect ideas.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they feel more relaxing. For instance, I like baggy trousers and drop-shoulder T-shirts because they allow me to move easily.

提案: Give a clear yes/no answer, then add a concise explanation or example. Avoid repeating the same word and correct verb forms.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially loose-fitting ones. They are practical and comfortable for everyday activities.

提案: Give a direct answer and explain briefly with logical reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and keep the answer organized: state the fact, give a reason, and an example if helpful.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually pick my favorite items quickly. For example, I shop at a few shops like Outfitters and I already know which clothes I like.

提案: Compare clearly: state the difference between weekdays and weekends, using linking words like on weekdays/on weekends or whereas. Use correct nouns and avoid repetition.

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear simple trousers and T-shirts because they are neat and comfortable for work or school, whereas on weekends I prefer baggy jeans and loose T-shirts for a more relaxed look.

提案: Start with a clear statement about your favorite colours, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples. Use consistent phrasing and correct colour adjectives.

例: I like dark and neutral colours, especially black and navy blue. I also wear maroon, white, green and grey — for example, I often pair grey jeans with a navy T-shirt.

× I like to make it clothes Maggie wear like baggy jeans, drop shoulder T-shirts and like this.

✓ I like to wear clothes like baggy jeans and drop-shoulder T-shirts.

The original sentence has incorrect verb choice 'make it clothes' and unclear structure. Use the verb 'wear' after 'like to' to indicate preference. Remove extraneous words ('Maggie', 'like this') and use 'drop-shoulder' as a compound adjective. Suggestion: keep subject + 'like to' + base verb + object.

× Yes, I prefer to get my clothes but in a casual I'm also wearing baggy clothes, doctor shoulder, teeth, teeth and like trousers, baggy trousers because they are very relaxing for me. So that's why I'm doing this.

✓ Yes, I prefer casual clothes. I also wear baggy clothes, drop-shoulder T-shirts and baggy trousers because they are very comfortable for me, so that's why.

The sentence misuses 'prefer to get' and mixes tenses and words. Use 'prefer' with a noun phrase ('prefer casual clothes') or 'prefer to wear'. Replace 'doctor shoulder, teeth, teeth' with 'drop-shoulder T-shirts'. Use consistent present simple 'I also wear' to describe habitual preference and 'comfortable' instead of 'relaxing'. Combine clauses with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× Yes, I'm like to wearing T-shirts or baggy baggy clothes, baggy T-shirts as also as well.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts or baggy clothes, especially baggy T-shirts.

'I'm like to wearing' is incorrect. Use 'I like wearing' (present simple) to express habitual preference. Avoid repetition ('baggy baggy') and redundant phrases ('as also as well'); use 'especially' to emphasize.

× No, no, I can't. I can't swindle a lot of time I'm going to on brand and I will pick my favorite clothes because I know where is the hanging my clothes my favorite forever. I am buying clothes by the way, I'm buying from Outfitters breakout.

✓ No, I don't. I don't spend a lot of time choosing clothes. I go to a favorite brand and pick my clothes because I know where my favorites hang. By the way, I buy clothes from Outfitters Breakout.

The original uses 'can't' incorrectly and 'swindle' is wrong word choice. Use 'don't' for habitual action. 'Spend time choosing clothes' is correct collocation. Use simple present for habits ('I go', 'I pick', 'I know', 'I buy'). Correct word order: 'where my favorites hang'. Capitalize store name and remove unnecessary repetition.

× Yes, on weekends I am wearing baggy clothes, leg baggy teacher, drop drop shoulder, T-shirt and baggy jeans and like on weekdays like trouser and T-shirt I prefer to that because they are very relaxing so that's why.

✓ Yes, on weekends I wear baggy clothes such as drop-shoulder T-shirts and baggy jeans. On weekdays I prefer trousers and a T-shirt because they are more comfortable.

Use simple present 'I wear' and 'I prefer' for regular habits. Remove garbled phrases ('leg baggy teacher', 'drop drop shoulder') and use clear items. Use 'trousers and a T-shirt' and 'more comfortable' to compare comfort. Avoid 'so that's why' which is redundant.

× I like do black clothes, maroon and white clothes, Navy blue and green as well. Grey, grey jeans I like too much.

✓ I like black, maroon, white, navy blue and green clothes. I also really like grey jeans.

'I like do black clothes' is incorrect; say 'I like black clothes' or list colors. Use lowercase for colors except proper nouns; 'navy blue' is not capitalized. Combine colors in a list and use 'I also really like grey jeans' for emphasis. Use articles appropriately ('grey jeans' does not need an article here).