Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more concise, remove fillers (uh), correct word choice and grammar, and add one specific example to support your preference. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use a linking word when adding detail.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes, like dry-fit tops, trousers and oversized T-shirts, because they keep me relaxed all day. For example, I often wear an oversized cotton T-shirt and joggers when I run errands or work from home, which helps me stay comfortable and focused.

提案: Eliminate repetition, improve sentence structure and add a brief contrast to show awareness of occasions when smart clothes are appropriate. Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed. However, if I have a formal meeting, I will choose smart clothes to make a better impression.

提案: Avoid vague phrasing like "if I like to" and tighten the grammar. Add a specific reason or brief example to illustrate why T-shirts make you confident.

例: Yes, I wear T-shirts most days because they are comfortable and suit my casual style. For instance, a plain dark T-shirt paired with jeans makes me feel confident and ready for informal meetings or outings.

提案: Clarify the reason, fix tense and incomplete ending, and provide a short, clear explanation of your routine. Use a linking word to join the idea and the reason.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes; instead, I pick my outfit the night before because when I wake up I want to avoid rushing and be ready quickly.

提案: Improve grammar and wording (e.g., "more presentable"), avoid repetition, and add a specific example of typical weekday vs weekend outfits. Use a linking word to contrast the two situations.

例: Yes, I dress differently on weekdays and weekends. For example, on weekdays I wear smart-casual shirts and chinos to look presentable at work, whereas on weekends I choose sweatshirts and jeans to feel more relaxed.

提案: Correct small errors (e.g., "especially," remove duplicate phrase), be slightly more specific about why you choose those colors and give an example of a favorite outfit in each season.

例: I prefer dark colours like black, navy blue and dark brown because they look neat and are easy to match. In summer, though, I wear lighter colours such as beige or light blue — for instance, a light-blue linen shirt with khaki shorts keeps me cool and comfortable.

× The clothes I like to wear are the comfortable clothes such as a dry fit, pants and oversize T-shirts because it gives me the, uh, comfortable feeling for the whole day.

✓ The clothes I like to wear are comfortable, such as dry-fit pants and oversized T-shirts, because they give me a comfortable feeling all day.

Use of adjectives and noun phrases was awkward and some words had incorrect forms (oversize -> oversized, dry fit -> dry-fit). Also 'the comfortable clothes' is redundant; use 'comfortable'. Pronoun agreement: 'it gives me' should be 'they give me' to match the plural 'clothes'. Combine and punctuate the list clearly. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I can move freely all day and and if I'm going to do one or two more errands for that day, I feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to wear comfortable and casual clothes because I can move freely all day, and if I'm going to run one or two errands that day, I feel relaxed.

Duplicate 'and' removed. 'Do errands' is less natural than 'run errands'. 'For that day' should be 'that day' for natural time reference. Sentence structure adjusted for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Actually it's my go to wear everyday because I feel at ease and I can be confident if I like to.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. Actually they're my go-to clothes every day because I feel at ease and more confident in them.

'It's my go to wear' is ungrammatical; use 'they're my go-to clothes'. 'Everyday' (adjective) changed to 'every day' (adverbial phrase). 'I can be confident if I like to' is unclear; better: 'more confident in them.' Also plural agreement for T-shirts -> they. Grammar problem type ID:13

× No, but I choose to prepare my clothes a day before or a night before I go to work because when I woke up I want.

✓ No. I usually prepare my clothes the night before I go to work because when I wake up I want to save time.

Run-on sentence and tense mismatch: 'woke up' (past) should be 'wake up' (present habitual). 'A day before or a night before' awkward; use 'the night before'. Add purpose 'to save time' to complete thought. Changed 'choose to prepare' to 'usually prepare' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I wear different clothes from weekends and weekdays. During weekdays I prefer to wear clothes that I am presentable and during weekends I chose to wear clothes that I am more relaxed.

✓ Yes, I wear different clothes on weekdays and at the weekend. During weekdays I prefer to wear clothes that make me look presentable, and during the weekend I choose clothes that make me more relaxed.

Preposition 'from' incorrect; use 'on' for days. Use 'on weekdays and at the weekend' or 'on weekends'. 'I am presentable' should be 'make me look presentable' (incorrect use of adjective). Tense 'chose' (past) changed to 'choose' (present habit). Added parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I like dark colored clothes, specially black, Navy blue and dark brown. But on summer during summer I prefer to wear light colors to match the weather.

✓ I like dark-colored clothes, especially black, navy blue and dark brown. But in summer I prefer to wear light colors to match the weather.

Spelling and word choice: 'specially' -> 'especially'. 'Dark colored' should be hyphenated 'dark-colored'. 'Navy' should not be capitalized mid-sentence. Preposition 'on summer during summer' incorrect; use 'in summer'. Removed redundancy. Grammar problem type ID:13