Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more natural and specific. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the styles you prefer, then give one or two brief supporting details (why you like them or an example). Avoid unclear phrases like "category of St. fashion." Keep it under 4–5 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

例: I prefer feminine, European-style clothes with frilly details. For example, I like dresses with lace and ruffles because they look elegant and make me feel confident. Also, I enjoy mixing a frilly skirt with a simple top to balance the outfit.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence that clearly states your preference, then add a brief reason using a linking word. Avoid hesitations like "I guess" and repetitions like "really free and comfortable."

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes most of the time. Because I go to school and move around a lot, I choose loose tops and sneakers for ease, although I sometimes wear smart clothes for special events.

提案: Keep the answer concise and give one specific example or reason. Use a linking word when adding the example and avoid unclear phrasing (e.g., "AT shirt").

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts. For example, I often wear graphic T-shirts with character logos because they are comfortable and show my interests. I also have a few branded T-shirts that I wear for casual outings.

提案: Answer directly and reduce filler words. Use a linking phrase to explain your routine and be specific about when and why you choose outfits in advance.

例: Yes, I spend some time choosing clothes each evening. Usually every night I pick my outfit for the next day so I can get ready quickly in the morning and avoid stress.

提案: State your contrast clearly and explain with a specific reason. Replace vague words like "fascinatingly" with concrete descriptions of weekend styles, and use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekends compared to weekdays. Because I must wear a school uniform during the week, I enjoy wearing casual or trendy outfits—for instance, jeans, colorful tops, or a nice dress—on weekends.

提案: Give a clear topic sentence naming one or two favorite colors, then explain briefly why you choose them. Avoid awkward phrasing like "first of all" and "more designable." Be specific about how the colors suit you or your wardrobe.

例: My favorite colors for clothes are white and black. I like white because it looks fresh and clean, and I choose black for its versatility—it matches many items and looks stylish. I also sometimes wear bright colors when I want a more playful look.

× I like to wear category of St. fashion and also kind of European and really frilly.

✓ I like to wear street-style and European clothes that are really frilly.

The original sentence misuses nouns and adjectives ('category of St. fashion') and awkwardly strings phrases. 'Street-style' is the intended adjective+noun form for a fashion category; 'European clothes' is clearer than 'kind of European'. Use 'that are really frilly' to modify the clothes. Keep adjective order and form appropriate.

× I like wearing both of them, but more likely I guess I'm wearing comfortable clothes more because my usual clothing style is pretty much really free and comfortable.

✓ I like wearing both, but I usually wear comfortable clothes more often because my usual style is quite relaxed and comfortable.

Use simple present 'I usually wear' to describe habitual actions rather than present continuous 'I'm wearing'. Remove redundant words ('more likely I guess') and fix adjective/adverb use: 'quite relaxed and comfortable' is natural. 'More often' is clearer than 'more' in this context.

× Yes I do, for example I like wearing AT shirt with the characters logo on it or like brand T-shirt too.

✓ Yes, I do. For example, I like wearing T-shirts with character logos on them or branded T-shirts.

Use plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally. 'Character logo' should be pluralized to 'character logos' or phrased 'with character logos on them'. 'Branded T-shirts' is the correct adjective-noun order. Add commas for clarity.

× Yes, I do. So uh, every day night I always choose a clothing outfit for the next day so that way I can just wear them next day really fast and go out.

✓ Yes, I do. Every night I choose an outfit for the next day so I can get dressed quickly and go out.

'Every day night' is ungrammatical; use 'every night'. 'Choose a clothing outfit' is redundant; use 'choose an outfit'. 'So that way' is informal and wordy; 'so I can' is better. Use singular/plural consistency: 'an outfit' and 'get dressed quickly' sound natural.

× Yes I do, especially on weekends. I like to wear really fascinatingly because usually on weekdays I can not because of the uniforms I have to wear in school.

✓ Yes, especially on weekends. I like to dress in more interesting clothes because I usually cannot on weekdays due to my school uniform.

'Really fascinatingly' is an adverb incorrectly modifying 'wear'; use 'dress in more interesting clothes' (adjective phrase). Use 'cannot' (or 'can't') as one word. 'Due to my school uniform' is a clearer prepositional phrase explaining the restriction.

× My favorite color is first of all white, but the color that I want to wear for the clothes is usually black or other colorful colors too because it's more designable and looking good.

✓ My favorite color is white, but for clothes I usually prefer black or other bright colors because they are more versatile and look good.

Remove 'first of all' which is unnecessary. 'Color that I want to wear for the clothes' is awkward; 'for clothes I usually prefer' is natural. 'Other colorful colors' is redundant; use 'other bright colors'. 'Designable' is not appropriate; 'versatile' fits meaning. Use 'look good' instead of 'looking good' to match the plural subject.