Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct topic sentence and add one or two specific details to make the answer more natural and informative. Avoid repeating words and keep to 1–3 sentences. Use a linking word if adding details.

例: I prefer simple, everyday clothes because they are low-maintenance and comfortable. For example, I often wear plain jeans and neutral-coloured tops that are easy to mix and match.

提案: Answer the question directly using the correct choice (comfortable or smart) and explain why with a short reason. Use present tense and a linking word to connect your reason.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I value ease of movement and practicality. For instance, I often choose sneakers and soft cotton shirts when I have a busy day.

提案: Respond with a clear present-tense statement and give a brief specific detail about when or why you wear T-shirts. Keep it to one or two sentences.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are versatile and comfortable. I usually wear them at home, for errands, or layered under jackets when the weather is mild.

提案: Use present simple and be specific about situations when you spend more time choosing clothes. Add a linking word to make the explanation coherent.

例: Sometimes I do, especially before important events, because I worry about looking appropriate. For example, I spend more time picking an outfit for a job interview than I do for a casual day out.

提案: Answer clearly in present tense and give a clear reason. Avoid unclear phrasing and unnecessary conditional forms. Use one linking word and a concise example.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends because work requires smarter clothes while weekends are more relaxed. For example, I wear shirts and trousers on weekdays but casual jeans and hoodies on weekends.

提案: Give a direct statement naming specific colours and explain briefly why you prefer them. Use plural or correct adjective forms and add one supporting detail.

例: I prefer light colours such as white, beige and pastel blue because they look fresh and are easy to combine. For instance, a light-coloured shirt brightens my outfit and suits warmer weather.

× Yes I did. I want comfortable clothes every day.

✓ Yes, I do. I want comfortable clothes every day.

The student replied to a present preference question; using 'did' (past) is incorrect. Use present simple 'do' for general habits. Add a comma after 'Yes' and keep 'want' in present to match 'do'. Suggestion: say 'Yes, I do.' for clarity.

× Yes I did. I always wear T-shirt.

✓ Yes, I do. I always wear T-shirts.

The response uses 'did' instead of present 'do' because the question asks about current liking. Also 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking about general habit. Use 'I always wear T-shirts.'

× Sometimes I did because I don't know what to wear.

✓ Sometimes I do because I don't know what to wear.

The sentence mixes past 'did' with present 'don't'. For habitual actions use present simple 'do'. Change 'did' to 'do' so tenses agree.

× Yes, I did so that if I will take photo I will not use the same color.

✓ Yes, I do, so if I take photos I won't use the same color.

Multiple tense issues: 'did' should be 'do' for present habit. In conditional clauses after 'if' do not use 'will' for the future; use present simple 'take'. Use contraction or 'will not' appropriately; 'photos' plural is natural. Also add commas for clarity.

× I like light color to wear.

✓ I like to wear light colors.

Word order and form: use the infinitive 'to wear' after 'like' or better 'I like to wear' or 'I like wearing'. 'Color' should be plural 'colors' when speaking generally. The corrected sentence is 'I like to wear light colors.'