Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one specific reason with a brief detail. Use linking words if adding another point.

例: I prefer lightweight clothes like compression shirts and sandals because it's very hot where I live. For example, breathable fabrics help me stay cool during long outdoor periods.

提案: Answer directly and reduce fillers. Use one linking phrase to add a reason and a brief example. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart outfits. Because of the hot climate, breathable materials make me feel better, for instance, cotton shirts keep me cool during the day.

提案: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give a clear reason and one specific example of the type you like. Use a linking word if you add more detail.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they are stylish and easy to wear. In particular, I enjoy graphic T-shirts that show personal interests like bands or movies.

提案: Clarify what you mean by 'sensitive' and structure the answer: topic sentence + brief reason + example. Use linking words to connect ideas.

例: Yes, I do spend time choosing clothes because I care about comfort and appropriateness. For example, I pick breathable T-shirts for outdoor events but a neater shirt for formal meetings.

提案: Give a direct comparison and one clear example. Avoid listing awkwardly; use linking words like 'sometimes' or 'usually' to show frequency.

例: Yes, I usually wear more practical, breathable clothes on weekdays for work, while on weekends I choose casual outfits. For example, I wear plain T-shirts and sandals on weekends but a smart-casual shirt for work meetings.

提案: Be concise and avoid repeating the same reason. Provide one specific reason for each colour and a short example of when you choose them.

例: I prefer white and black clothes: I wear white during hot days because it reflects heat, and black in the evening because it looks stylish and suits night events.

× I often use compression shirts or sandals because in our country, here in our country, it's so hot and I really need to adjust to the weather.

✓ I often wear compression shirts or sandals because here in our country it is so hot and I really need to adapt to the weather.

Use 'wear' not 'use' with clothing (verb choice). Remove redundant phrase 'in our country, here in our country'. Use 'it is' instead of contraction 'it's' optional but kept as 'it is' for clarity. Use 'adapt to' rather than 'adjust to' when referring to getting used to climate; both can work but 'adapt to the weather' is more natural here.

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because it's more uh, it gives me good feeling.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable clothes because they make me feel good.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'comfortable clothes' is plural so use 'they' not 'it'. 'Make me feel good' is a natural expression; 'gives me good feeling' is unidiomatic. Removed filler 'uh' and redundant 'more'.

× And also here in my country the weather is too hot so I need to wear breathable clothes just to adapt to the weather.

✓ Also, here in my country the weather is very hot so I need to wear breathable clothes to adapt to it.

Use 'very' instead of 'too' when not implying excessiveness that causes a problem. Replaced redundant 'just to adapt to the weather' with 'to adapt to it' for concision. Minor punctuation added.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because it's so style stylish and I'd I'd like to wear graphic T-shirts and.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts because they are stylish, and I like to wear graphic T-shirts.

Plural subject 'T-shirts' requires 'they are' not 'it's'. 'Style' is incorrect form; use 'stylish'. Removed repeated 'I'd I'd' and trailing 'and'. Ensured sentence is complete.

× Yes, because I'm very sensitive, looking for a good T-shirts and it depends on the location and the event that I'm gonna go.

✓ Yes, because I'm very particular about appearance and I look for good T-shirts; it depends on the location and the event I am going to.

'a good T-shirts' mixes singular article with plural noun; corrected to 'good T-shirts'. 'Sensitive' in this context is unclear — 'particular about appearance' is more natural. Avoid informal 'gonna' and use 'going to'. Rephrased for grammatical structure and clarity.

× I prefer to wear 2 styles. 1 is a comfortable and breathable clothes, second is the casual clothes. So I use them Depend. It depends on the location and the event.

✓ I prefer to wear two styles. The first is comfortable, breathable clothing; the second is casual clothes. I use them depending on the location and the event.

Mismatch between singular/plural: 'a comfortable and breathable clothes' should be 'comfortable, breathable clothing' or 'comfortable, breathable clothes'. '1' and '2' changed to words for formality. 'So I use them Depend.' is wrong — use 'depending on'. Fixed sentence structure and capitalization.

× I like to wear white and black clothes. White if it's too hot and black if it's night. Because I like to wear black clothes because it's very stylish and very cool.

✓ I like to wear white and black clothes: white when it is very hot and black at night, because black looks stylish and cool.

Combine fragments to avoid sentence fragments starting with 'Because'. Use 'when it is very hot' rather than 'if it's too hot' for habitual preference. 'At night' is more natural than 'if it's night'. Removed redundant repetition 'I like to wear black clothes because' and smoothed wording.