Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a full sentence as a topic sentence and add one brief supporting reason or example. Avoid one-word answers and make it more natural by expanding to 2–3 sentences with correct grammar.

例: I prefer to wear casual clothes because they are comfortable and practical. For example, I usually choose jeans and a hoodie when I go out with friends or run errands.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (e.g., 'comfortable' not 'comfort'), and add a short reason or a contrast using a linking word. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they allow me to move freely. However, I wear smart clothes for formal events like interviews or weddings.

提案: This answer is quite good but improve by using a complete topic sentence and adding a brief example or situation, plus a linking word for coherence.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they feel relaxed and comfortable. For instance, I often wear a T-shirt and jeans when meeting friends on weekends.

提案: Organize your reply with a clear topic sentence and simpler grammar. Use linking words to explain why and give one short example. Avoid run-on sentences and incorrect verb forms.

例: No, I don't spend much time choosing clothes because I usually buy something that catches my eye. For example, if I see a shirt I like in a shop, I often try it on and buy it right away.

提案: Give a direct topic sentence (yes/no or a short statement), explain the reason with correct tense and linking words, and give a concise example. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

例: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. During weekdays I wear smart or professional clothes for work, but at weekends I dress casually when I spend time with friends.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'black suits my skin tone' and 'wear black'), and give a brief reason. Avoid contradictions and correct vocabulary mistakes.

例: I like many colours, but my favourites are black and white. I often wear black because I think it suits my skin tone and is easy to match with other items.

× I would like to wear casual clothes because I think it's comfort to me.

✓ I would like to wear casual clothes because I think it's comfortable for me.

The adjective/adverb is used incorrectly: 'comfort' is a noun, but an adjective 'comfortable' is needed to describe clothes or the feeling. Also use the preposition 'for' to indicate benefit or suitability. Suggestion: replace 'comfort' with 'comfortable' and use 'for me' to make the sentence natural.

× Yes, I prefer to wear T-shirt because they feel more relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear T-shirts because they feel more relaxed and comfortable.

Number agreement error: 'T-shirt' (singular) conflicts with the pronoun 'they' (plural). Use plural 'T-shirts' to match 'they', or change pronoun to 'it'. Suggestion: use 'T-shirts' when speaking generally.

× Actually no, because when I go into the shop, when I catch my eyes some clothes I want to take it and I not choosing anything when I choose this dress suit for me.

✓ Actually no. When I go into a shop and see some clothes I like, I want to take them and I don't spend time choosing; I just pick the dress that suits me.

Multiple structural and grammar errors: run-on sentence, incorrect verb forms, wrong pronouns, missing articles, and incorrect negative form. Corrections: split into two sentences for clarity; use 'a shop' (article), 'see' rather than 'catch my eyes', 'clothes I like' or 'them' as plural pronoun, 'I don't spend time choosing' for negative present simple, and 'the dress that suits me' for proper verb and article use.

× Weekend because weekdays I'm going to my work week. Weekend I spend day with my friends so normally I wear clothes. Weekend.

✓ I prefer weekends, because on weekdays I go to work. On weekends I spend time with my friends, so I usually wear casual clothes.

Problems include incorrect tense use and awkward phrasing: 'I'm going to my work week' is wrong; use 'I go to work' (present simple) for routine. 'Weekend I spend day' needs articles and verbs: 'On weekends I spend time'. 'Normally I wear clothes' is vague; add 'casual clothes'. Also add preposition 'on' for days and use plural 'weekends' for general statements.

× Normally I want to wear many colors but my favorite color is black and white. I think black suit for my skin color that's why I want to wear back.

✓ Normally I like to wear many colors, but my favorite colors are black and white. I think black suits my skin tone, so that's why I like to wear black.

Multiple errors: verb choice ('want to wear' -> 'like to wear' or 'prefer to wear'), singular/plural agreement ('color' -> 'colors', 'favorite colors are'), subject-verb agreement ('black suits'), incorrect noun phrase ('skin color' -> 'skin tone' optional), and a typo/word error ('wear back' -> 'wear black'). Suggestions: use 'like' or 'prefer' for preferences, ensure subject-verb agreement, and correct the typo.