Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a direct, natural topic sentence and add one specific detail. Use correct grammar (plural/singular agreement) and avoid vague phrases. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

例: I usually prefer wearing long shirts because they feel relaxed and cover me well. For example, I like linen long shirts in summer since they are lightweight and breathable.

提案: Answer directly (choose between comfortable or smart) and give a brief reason using a linking word. Avoid repetition of the same word (comfy/comfortable).

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they allow me to move freely and feel relaxed when I study or meet friends.

提案: Use clear, standard vocabulary and expand slightly to explain why. If you meant a type of T-shirt, say it clearly. Keep it short and natural.

例: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts, especially cotton ones, because they are soft and easy to wash.

提案: Start with a concise topic sentence (yes/no), then explain briefly with a reason and one specific example. Remove fillers and repeated phrases.

例: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I look for T-shirts that are both comfortable and the right color, such as plain black or navy ones.

提案: Answer directly and give a clear comparison between weekdays and weekends using linking words (e.g., "on weekdays... whereas on weekends..."). Use correct terms for styles (cropped top, long T-shirt).

例: Yes. On weekdays I usually wear simple T-shirts and jeans for comfort, whereas on weekends I might choose a cropped top or a longer, more fashionable T-shirt when I go out with friends.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence naming your favorite colours, then add a brief reason or example. Use natural phrasing and avoid awkward construction.

例: I like black, white and purple clothes because black and white are easy to match, and I wear purple when I want a pop of color for special occasions.

× The clothes I want to wear is the long shirt.

✓ The clothes I want to wear are long shirts.

Subject 'clothes' is plural so the verb should be 'are' (plural) and the noun should match plurality: use 'long shirts' or 'a long shirt'. To improve, decide singular or plural: 'The clothes I want to wear are long shirts' or 'The clothing I want to wear is a long shirt.'

× Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable shirt because it's comfy.

✓ Yes, I prefer to wear comfortable shirts because they're comfy.

Noun 'shirt' must be plural to match general preference; use plural subject with plural verb 'they're'. Also keep present simple 'prefer to wear'. To improve, use plural for general statements: 'comfortable shirts' and 'they are' or contract 'they're'.

× Yes, I like wearing AT shirts.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts.

The article 'AT' is likely a typo. Use 'T-shirts' as the correct noun. If you meant a brand, use the proper name with correct capitalization; otherwise use 'T-shirts'. Ensure correct spelling.

× Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing a clothes because umm, I cannot find the the right one. T-shirts that I want to I want to wear and I want to be comfortable.

✓ Yes, I spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I cannot find the right T-shirts that I want to wear and that are comfortable.

Do not use the article 'a' before plural 'clothes'. Remove filler words and duplicate 'the'. Keep consistent plural 'T-shirts' and use relative clause 'that are comfortable'. Improve by removing hesitations and matching plural nouns with plural verbs/adjectives.

× Probably yes. I wear different styles of clothes. Sometimes it is cropped up and sometimes it is a long T-shirts.

✓ Probably yes. I wear different styles of clothes. Sometimes they are cropped tops and sometimes they are long T-shirts.

Use plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'styles of clothes'. 'Cropped up' is incorrect; use 'cropped tops'. Match number: 'a long T-shirts' mixes singular article with plural noun — use 'a long T-shirt' or plural 'long T-shirts'. Improve by choosing singular or plural consistently and using correct item names.

× The color of my clothes that I want to wear is the black and white and purple.

✓ The colors of the clothes I like to wear are black, white, and purple.

When listing multiple colors, use plural 'colors' and plural verb 'are'. Omit unnecessary 'the' before colors, and separate items with commas. Improve by saying 'The colors I like to wear are...' or 'I like to wear black, white, and purple.'