Clothing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and give one specific reason or example. Avoid repetition like “formal look” twice and use articles and prepositions correctly.

例: I prefer wearing smart, formal clothes because they make me feel more confident and professional. For example, I often choose a blazer and trousers when I have presentations, as they help me appear more composed.

提案: Fix grammar and complete the reason. Use linking words (because / so) to connect the explanation and give a specific detail about what makes the clothes comfortable.

例: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because I spend a lot of time studying in the library, so I need clothes that are breathable and easy to sit in, such as loose jeans and cotton shirts.

提案: Make the answer more natural and specific. Explain why T-shirts are convenient (material, temperature) and avoid awkward phrasing like “comfortable to change.”

例: Yes, definitely. In summer I usually wear T-shirts because they are lightweight and breathable, which keeps me cool during hot days.

提案: Respond directly and clearly with a full sentence and a specific explanation. Remove fillers like “MMM” and explain your routine briefly (how many options, why).

例: No, I don't. I usually pick one or two outfits quickly in the morning because I like to save time and keep my wardrobe simple.

提案: Provide a clearer structure: state the general pattern, then give a specific example using linking words. Mention what you typically wear on weekdays vs weekends.

例: It depends. On weekdays I wear casual clothes for studying, but if I have an important event or meeting, I switch to a formal outfit like a shirt and blazer.

提案: Correct small grammar issues and be more precise. Use consistent capitalization and explain briefly why you choose those colors with a concrete benefit.

例: I prefer monotone colours like black, white, gray and navy because they’re easy to mix and match, and they give a neat, professional appearance.

× I prefer to wear a formal look because of formal look makes me more classical.

✓ I prefer to wear a formal look because a formal look makes me seem more classical.

The sentence omits the article before the second instance of 'formal look'. Use the indefinite article 'a' before a singular, countable noun. Also 'seem' clarifies the state and reads more naturally than directly linking 'makes me more classical.' Suggestion: use 'a formal look' and 'seem' to improve clarity.

× I prefer to comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I usually spend time studying in the library, so I need.

✓ I prefer comfortable clothes rather than smart clothes because I usually spend time studying in the library, so I need them.

Remove the unnecessary 'to' after 'prefer' (prefer + noun), and add the pronoun 'them' to complete 'so I need' which otherwise lacks an object. The error types are incorrect preposition usage and incorrect use of pronouns. Suggestion: use 'prefer comfortable clothes' and add 'them' to refer back to 'comfortable clothes.'

× In summer I usually wear T-shirts because it is comfortable to change.

✓ In summer I usually wear T-shirts because they are comfortable to change into.

The pronoun 'it' does not correctly refer to the plural noun 'T-shirts'; use 'they.' Also add the particle 'into' after 'change' to form the correct phrasal verb 'change into.' This fixes pronoun agreement and verb phrase usage.

× I choose clothes. MMM, one or two, and I usually wear all of them.

✓ I choose one or two outfits and usually wear one of them.

The original is disfluent and unclear. Combine fragments into a single clear sentence and correct logical inconsistency: choosing 'one or two' then 'wear all of them' conflicts. The corrected version clarifies that the student selects a small number of outfits and typically wears one. Suggestion: avoid fragments and ensure pronouns and quantity match.

× It depends. When I have an important event schedule, I also wear a formal look.

✓ It depends. When I have an important event scheduled, I wear a formal look.

Use the past participle adjective 'scheduled' to describe the event (an event that is scheduled), not the noun 'schedule.' Also 'also' is unnecessary here; removing it makes the sentence more natural. Suggestion: use 'an important event scheduled' or better 'an important scheduled event'.

× I prefer monotone colors such as black, white, Gray and Navy because there they are easy to match and look smart.

✓ I prefer monotone colors such as black, white, gray and navy because they are easy to match and look smart.

Do not capitalize common color names mid-sentence ('Gray' and 'Navy' should be lowercase). Remove the extra word 'there' which is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. Ensure pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'colors.' Suggestion: use lowercase color names and omit redundant words.